Unit 4_ Things_ Production - Lesson 11
Unit 4_ Things_ Production - Lesson 11
This lesson includes: Learn how to deal with Process - Writing task 1
THEORY
The diagram below shows how oil is extracted in the production of perfume.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
A - Overview analysis:
● Linear or cyclical process: …………………………………………………………………...
● Number of steps: ……………………………………………………………………………...
● First step (input): ……………………………………………………………………………...
● Final step (output): ……………………………………………………………………………
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B - Introduction: Paraphrase the question
Template for manufacturing process:
● The diagram [shows/ describes/ illustrates/ depicts] + how + … + is/ are [produced/
manufactured/ made].
● The diagram [shows/ describes/ illustrates/ depicts] how to [produce/ make/
manufacture]…
● The diagram [shows/ describes/ illustrates/ depicts] the process of [producing/
manufacturing/ making]…
Template for natural process:
● The diagram [shows/ describes/ illustrates/ depicts] + how + a/ an + … + grows
during its lifespan.
● The diagram [shows/ describes/ illustrates/ depicts] the stages in the lifespan of…
● The diagram [shows/ describes/ illustrates/ depicts] the growth of…
Write your introduction:
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C - Overview
Template:
● There are… main [stages/ steps] involved in the process of producing…, beginning
with… and ending with…
● The… involves/ consists of/ includes… main steps/ stages, beginning with… and
finishing with…
● In general/ Overall, the cycle begins when…
Write your overview:
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D - Body
1. Analyze the process:
Choose the appropriate words in the box to complete the following summary.
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● Body 1:
vessel | heated | steam | aromatic plants | another chamber | moisture | plant oil | a vaporizer
○ Step 3: the mixture is......................... cold and hot water at the bottom and
top of .........................
○ Step 4: .........................is then sent to ......................... → the
.........................are removed → ......................... essential oil
and ......................... hydrolat
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○ The process finishes/ ends with...
○ The process concludes with…
● Multiple steps at the same time:
○ At the same time,…
○ Simultaneously,..
○ Meanwhile,…
● Conjunctions to make more complex sentences:
○ when/once/as soon as/immediately/whereas….
E.g:
Once obtained, raw materials and manufactured components are stored for
later assembly
The manufacturing stages involve the storage, assembly, inspection, packing
to the sales methods whereas the research stages include market & product
research, design and advertisement.
○ before + clause or gerund
E.g: Most consumer goods go through a series of stages before they emerge
as finished products ready for sale.
○ after + clause or gerund
E.g: After the production planning is complete the assembly, inspection,
testing and packaging stages are done sequentially.
○ where/from where/after which
E.g: Assembly first depends upon the production planning stage, where it is
decided how and in what quantities the stored materials will be processed to
create sufficient quantities of finished goods.
3. Vocabulary:
a. Natural Process:
Begin life as eggs bắt đầu vòng đời từ những quả trứng
Vary in size/ colors/ shapes đa dạng về kích cỡ/ màu sắc/ hình dạng
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Shed their old skin/ shed their thay lớp da cũ/ lớp da bên ngoài
outer layer
Breathe underwater/ breathe thở dưới mặt nước/ trên mặt nước
out of water
Third period Start to grow into… bắt đầu phát triển thành…
Feed on… ăn
b. Manufacturing Process:
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Combine
Pile up
Molten
initial part | is transported to | a spiral cylinder | channeled via a pipeline | enclosed boiler |
containing aromatic plants | , after which | utilized as a vaporizer | the next phase | The
solvent is then | , resulting in | distilled essential oil | , where
In the third step, the mixture is liquefied in (9) ......................................... with cold and hot
water at the bottom and top of the container, respectively. (10)...............................................
sent to a separator (11)......................... the impurities are removed (12) ......................... the
(13) ............................................... and refined hydrolat.
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PRACTICE
The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
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After that, (7) …………………………………… are melted down at a high temperature, which
(8) ……………………………………… The liquid aluminum is then (9) …………………………
to shape it into sheets. These thin sheets can be used to manufacture beverage cans, three-
quarters of (10)…………………………………………………….
HOMEWORK
Do the task below with the given analysis
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called
concrete canvas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information
below.
1. Overview analysis
- Linear or cyclical process: Linear
- Number of steps: eight steps
- First step (input): the production of concrete canvas
- Final step (output): the usage of this site for storage
2. Detailed analysis:
● Body 1: Step 1 to 3
● Body 2: Step 4 to 7
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