IELTS Writing Task 2 – Chau Thien Hiep – [email protected].

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AGREE OR DISAGREE

Topic 1: Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued/thought that it is more advantageous to choose a job Commented [A1]: = beneficial; có lợi

with a high wage even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely Commented [A2]: to appeal to sb = to attract sb
to be appealing = to be attractive
disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more
important than salary.

First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of

fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a Commented [A3]: = a sense of satisfaction; a feeling of
satisfaction
high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his/her conscience, Commented [A4]: kiếm được 1 mức lương cao
this person will not enjoy his/her life. Meanwhile, pursuing one’s Commented [A5]: cảm thấy căng thẳng

interests will always bring pleasure and a feeling of satisfaction. For Commented [A6]: thỏa hiệp với lương tâm của mình
Commented [A7]: to pursue one’s interests/ dreams/ goals/
example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices not ideals
because the wages were appealing, but because they were passionate
about science. That is why it is more important to choose the kind of Commented [A8]: đam mê khoa học

work that makes you happy than to look only at a high salary.

Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads Commented [A9]: giữ cho bạn có động lực

to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong relation between job Commented [A10]: Nói cách khác,

satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel Commented [A11]: năng suất làm việc

in their fields of work and achieve better results than those who put Commented [A12]: vượt trội trong lĩnh vực nghề nghiệp của
mình
salary in the first place. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his Commented [A13]: đặt lương bổng lên hàng đầu
everyday job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. Commented [A14]: to venture to do sth = mạo hiểm làm gì

After enduring years of ups and downs, he became one of the most Commented [A15]: sau khi chịu đựng nhiều năm thăng trầm

famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century. As a result, the Commented [A16]: a well-paid author
a well-paid job
benefits of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawbacks of a low
salary in a long-term perspective. Commented [A17]: theo quan điểm lâu dài; in the long run

To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial

than a high salary because it makes people happy and motivated.

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Topic 2: In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and Commented [A18]: = international companies; global agencies;
intercontinental groups
more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree? franchised products = các sản phẩm được nhượng bản quyền
to franchise = nhượng bản quyền

It is undeniable that globalization has been facilitating our lives in the Commented [A19]: tạo điều kiện dễ dàng cho cuộc sống chúng
ta
past decades. Therefore, the establishment of intercontinental groups to faciliate sth = tạo điều kiện dễ dàng cho cái gì

and their manufactured items are getting familiar day by day, and it is Commented [A20]: = products

said that this is affecting our lives in true terms. However, I slightly agree Commented [A21]: theo đúng nghĩa

with the statement despite some potential benefits.

To begin with, there are quite a few reasons why I think that it is a
negative development. It is seen that global agencies have an adverse
effect on the local business as the construction of these multinational Commented [A22]: một ảnh hưởng bất lợi

companies hinders the economic growth of the host country's Commented [A23]: cản trở sự phát triển kinh tế

entrepreneurs. Because people usually consider trending or branded Commented [A24]: các doanh nhân của nước chủ nhà

products instead of their own nation's material. For instance, Roots Commented [A25]: các sản phẩm theo xu hướng

Canada is a brand of Canada, but people all over the globe greatly prefer
this brand and it is a pivotal reason behind the inculcation of universal Commented [A26]: lý do chính

products in a nation. Thus, it is clear why the consequences of the Commented [A27]: sự truyền bá các sản phẩm toàn cầu

sequence are myriad. Commented [A28]: những hậu quả của chuỗi này là vô số

Conversely, it is also true that the positive side of the trend could not be Commented [A29]: Ngược lại,

ignored. If one country has worldwide branches of the products, then it will Commented [A30]: to ignore = to overlook; to neglect; bỏ qua;
phớt lờ
definitely make the people's life more comfortable as they could easily buy
that particular item from their residential country. Even immigrants could Commented [A31]: từ nước cư ngụ của họ

purchase the local products of their home country without any difficulty.
For example, in Canada, there is a Verka Milk Plant, which is a company of
India, and they are making milk products such as Paneer, Dahi, and cheese
with an Indian flavour. Overall, the development of firms at a global level Commented [A32]: công ty

has its own benefits which could not be overlooked.

To conclude, it is totally acceptable that the world has become a global

village. That is why the worldwide franchise of one brand or product are Commented [A33]: việc nhượng quyền trên toàn cầu

common these days and it has both benefits and drawbacks.

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