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E- ESSAY
Writing Task 2
Essay
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An essay is a piece of writing several paragraphs long instead of just one or two
paragraphs. It is written about one topic, just as a paragraph is. However, the
topic of an essay is too long and too complex to discuss in one paragraph.
Therefore, you must divide the topic into several paragraphs, one for each major
point. Then you must tie all of the separate paragraphs together by adding an
introduction and a conclusion.
Writing an essay is no more difficult than writing a paragraph, except that an
essay is longer. The principles of organization are the same for both; so if you
can write a good paragraph, you can write a good essay.
The introductory paragraph consists of two parts: a few general statements about
your subject to attract your reader’s attention, and a thesis statement to state the
specific subdivisions of your topic and/or the “plan” of your paper. A thesis
statement for an essay is just like a topic sentence for a paragraph: it names the
specific topic and the controlling ideas or major subdivisions of the topic.
An introductory paragraph is like a funnel: very wide at the top, increasingly
narrow in the middle, and very small at the neck or bottom.
General Statements
Thesis Statement
A funnel
General Statement
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Thesis statement
Paragraph topic sentence
A. support
B. support
topic sentence
C. support
A. Support (concluding sentence)
B. support topic sentence
C. support A. Support
B. Support
( concluding sentence) C. Support
(concluding sentence)
topic sentence
A. support
B. support
C. support
(concluding sentence)
Conclusion
Restatement or Summary of the
main points : Final comment
General statements:
The thesis statement is the most important sentence in the introduction. It states
the specific topic and lists the major subtopics that will be discussed in the body
of the essay. Furthermore it often indicates the method of organization such as
chronological order, or order of importance.
We are all aware that American culture is, in fact, a combination of the
contributions of all of those who have settled within its borders. From the
founding of the country to the present day, immigrants have brought with them
the traditions of their native lands, many of which have been interwoven into the
cultural patterns of their new homeland. Immigrants from Latin America, who
currently comprise about 8 percent of the total population, are no exception to
this rule. Hispanic contributions to American culture are reflected in the words
we speak, the foods we consume, and the music we enjoy.
General Statements:
Specific Sentence:
More Specific Sentence:
Thesis Statement:
Paragraph 1
(1) The heavy traffic problem can be solved by building rapid transit
systems from the suburbs to the cities, by improving public transportation
systems within the cities, and by forming car pools. (2) Traffic congestion
is caused by the thousands of cars that come into the cities from the
suburban areas as well as from the thousands of cars within the city limits.
(3) One of the most serious problems that most big cities are faced with is
traffic congestion. (4) This mammoth problem must be resolved before it
gets worse.
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quasars: star-like objects in space
3. The status of women in Xanadu has changed remarkably in recent years due to
increased educational opportunities and changes in the country’s laws.
4. The status of women in Xanadu has improved remarkably in recent years in the
areas of economic independence, political rights, educational opportunities, and
social status.
STEP 1 Locate the main topic and the subtopics in each of the following
thesis statements.
STEP 2 Underline the subtopics.
STEP 3 Draw a circle around the words or punctuation marks that are used
to introduce the subtopics.
Example
Capital punishment should be abolished not only because it deprives another
1. Women generally live longer than men for two main reasons: they tend to
take better care of their health, and they lead less stressful lives.
2. Drug and alcohol abuse among teenagers can be traced to the following
causes: lack of parental supervision, lax enforcement of drug laws, and the
If you use correlative conjunctions (both . .. and, not only . . . but also,
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2. Foreign students have a difficult time taking notes in class due to ---------
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1) Foreign travel
2) Choosing a career
3) Culture shock
4) Space exploration
5) Technology
Body
Conclusion
The conclusion in an essay, like the concluding sentence in a paragraph, is a
summary or review of the main points discussed in the body. The only additional
element in an essay is the linking expressions between the paragraphs of the
body. These are just like transitions within paragraph. You use transitions within
a paragraph to connect the ideas between two sentences. Similarly, you use
transitions between paragraphs to connect the ideas between them.
Paragraph 1
The busy schedules that most Americans face from day to day have created a
rising health problem in the United States. Stress affects almost everyone, from
the highly pressured executive to the busy homemaker or student. It can cause a
variety of physical disorders, ranging from headaches to stomach ulcers and even
alcoholism. Stress is not a problem that can be cured like a common cold;
however, it can be controlled. A person can learn to control stress by setting
realistic goals, enjoying a hobby and/or physical exercise, and by maintaining a
good, warm relationship with family and friends.
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People of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average of four
hours a day. Thus, television has had a tremendous influence on its viewers,
especially children. Scientists now say that children can be adversely affected by
constantly watching television. This is due to the fact that they participate less in
physical activities, spend less time reading and studying, and see a world of
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Transition signals are important not only within paragraphs but also between
paragraphs. If you write two or more paragraphs, you need to show the
relationship between your first and second paragraph, between your second and
third paragraph, and so on.
Think of transitions between paragraphs like the links of a chain. The links of a
chain connect the chain; they hold it together. Similarly, a transition signal
between two paragraphs links* your ideas together.
Two paragraphs are linked by adding a transition signal to the topic sentence of
the second paragraph. This transition signal may be a single word, a phrase, or
a dependent clause that repeats or summarizes the main idea in the first
paragraph.
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link: join, connect
Flextime
One of the most important changes that management has made in industry in
recent years is the scheduling of flexible work hours for their employees.
Workers are given the option of choosing when they will work. This allows them
more leisure time for family and fun. Flextime has obvious advantages for both
workers and management although it may not be practical in all types of
businesses.
Although flextime has produced these three positive results in some industries, it
is not as advantageous as in all types of businesses. …………………………….
…………………………………………………………………
The supply of fresh water has not been a major problem for most countries in the
world because a rainy season is part of their yearly climatic conditions. However,
in countries where the rainy season is very sparse, scientists must constantly seek
ways to increase fresh supplies of this precious element. Government planners in
South America and the Middle East have been trying to devise new ways of
increasing their nations’ supplies of fresh water. The first method being
considered is the use of desalination plants, which would remove salt from sea
water. Another method being considered is towing icebergs. According to this
method, large icebergs from Antarctica would be wrapped in cloth or plastic, tied
to powerful tugboats by strong ropes, and towed to the dry country. While this
plan may have some potential, there are certain practical problems that must be
solved
………………… is the possibility that the iceberg would melt en route. 1 No one
knows if an iceberg could be effectively insulated during such a long Journey. At
the very least, there is the possibility that it would break up into smaller pieces,
which would create still other problems.
1
en route: during the journey
………………….. the cost of providing fresh water from icebergs would be less
than the cost of providing water by desalination, according to most estimates. It
would cost between $5 and $6 per cubic meter to get water from an iceberg, as
opposed to the $8 per cubic meter it costs to get the same amount by desalination.
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arid: dry
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a student has to consider various factors such as: personal interest, job
opportunities, and the availability of training institutions.
The first and probably most important factor is personal interest ………………
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In addition to personal interest and job opportunity, still another factor is the
availability of training institutions. ………………………………………………
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In a few words, it seems to be fair to say that………………………….………..
………………………………………From my standpoint,…...............................
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……………………………………………I tend to partially (dis) agree with
this opinion and in this essay, I will support my view with some examples and
details.
The first and probably most important argument against/in favor of [......]
……………………………………………………………………………………
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Another reason why I (dis) agree with [........]……………………………………
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two viewpoints and then give my opinion.
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…………………………………………However, is this development
positive, or are there more drawbacks than advantages? In this essay, I will
explore the pros and cons of [……] and then try to draw some conclusions.
Secondly, …………………………………………………………………….
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---------------------------------------------This essay will examine some of these
problems in detail, and then propose some solutions.
Many modern films and television programme about past events and people
contain a mixture of fact and fiction. Some people say this distorts the public’s
view of history and should therefore be discouraged. What are your views?
Some people feel that young people face more pressures today than the
equivalent age groups did in previous generations. Others think that they have a
much easier life than their parents did. What is your opinion?
Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the
environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is
your own opinion?
The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind,
but it could be more usefully applied. How far do you agree?
Particular cultures are under threat nowadays due to the fact that we are living in
a global village. What do you think can be done to protect a society’s traditional
values and culture?
Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the
environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is
your own opinion?
In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building
them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect
the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew ‘is imposed, in which teenagers are not
allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are
accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate
change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the
responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.
What are your views?
There is evidence that inhaling cigarette smoke causes health problems not only
for smokers but for non-smokers who inhale other people’s smoke. In view of
this, smoking should be banned in all public places, even though this would
restrict some people’s freedom of action. What are your views?
Many children are forced to stay at school and study subjects that will be of little
value to them in the future. These children may disrupt the education of the
majority and should be allowed to leave school early to find themselves a job.
What are your views?
Rapid technological change has shaped the world we live in today. Far from
having a positive influence, living in a high-tech world dependent on computers
and mobile devices has distanced us from what is really important in life. How
far do you agree?
Too much emphasis is put on earning money rather than looking for a good
quality of life. To what extent do you agree with this idea?
Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only
be brought about by governments and large institutions. How far do you agree
or disagree?
Employers should ensure that there are equal numbers of males and females in
managerial posts in companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is the only means to improve the social and psychological well-being
of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the future, written exams will no longer exist. Instead, people will only learn
practical skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The most valuable skills learned are practical, rather than the ones we learn while
in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Emails are the most valuable tool for communication in the twenty-first century.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no
place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?
Although societies around the world are richer and more advanced than ever
before, people are not as happy as they used to be. Some people, therefore, feel
that in order to be happy it is better for people to be poor and less advanced. Do
you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Advertising is made more and more appealing to the general public nowadays.
How beautiful it is, it serves no useful purpose and encourages people to spend
too much money on things they do not really need. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
Children should not be encouraged to learn about the arts. Time in school should
be purely devoted to academic subjects like language and maths. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Future plans to design prisons for learning and working, with bigger cells
containing computers that will enable study and communication have been
criticized for trying to turn prisons into “holiday camps” and for “wasting tax
payers’ money”. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views?
The desire for higher status or greater wealth than others is what motivates most
people to succeed in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
statement?
In recent years, many countries have become extremely concerned about the
increase in crimes committed by young people. Tough measures and strict
punishments are necessary to stop youths from r-offending. To what extent do
you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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A second language is regarded as essential to success in the modern world. It
should be compulsory for all children to study a second language as soon as they
start school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the last 20 years, there have been significant developments in the fields of
information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and
communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have
more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Some people believe that advances in technology designed to reduce crime, such
as closed-circuit television systems, invade the personal privacy of innocent
people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different
from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative
effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Museums often contain objects of great value from ancient civilizations around
the world. Some people say these items should be returned to their countries of
origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people believe that travelling alone is far better than travelling with a
group. Others believe that this is dangerous and should not be encouraged by the
parents of young people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past.
Some people think the changes have been very positive, while others believe they
have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that historic buildings should be preserved in their original
forms. Others argue that this is both inadvisable and impossible. Discuss both
these views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, more and more emphasis is being placed on the acquisition
of practical skills rather than knowledge from textbooks or other sources. Discuss
the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
In some families there is more than one television in the home, with each family
member even having their own TV. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
of having more than one TV set per home.
Some people think that health care is a basic human necessity that should not be
provided by the private companies, but should be provided by the state. Discuss
the advantages and disadvantages of health care being provided by the private
sector.
E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this
impact has been negative as well as positive.
Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages?
It is important for travelers and business people to understand the cultures they
come into contact with, however briefly. What are the main advantages of doing
so? What do you think is the main disadvantage of not doing so?
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify the serious
ones and suggest ways that governments and individual tackle these problems.
The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world’s
cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle the
situation?
Millions of people in the world do not have enough to eat. What do you think are
some of the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to reduce
it?
Although many countries are becoming richer, these societies still have members
who are poor and struggle each day to survive. Why do you think this happens
and what can wealthy societies do to help their poorer citizens?
One of the most serious problems that cities now face is crime. What are the most
effective measures to tackle crime in urban areas?
Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the
world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you
suggest?
Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you
think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress.
What do you think are the causes of this? Can you suggest some possible
solutions?
People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can
this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think
are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can
you suggest?
More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into
work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the
environment. What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people
not to travel such long distances into work?
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