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The document discusses the percentage of music concert attendance among three age groups over five years, highlighting that the 16-24 age group increased to 70%, surpassing the 25-44 age group at 60%, while the 45+ age group, despite a significant growth to 50%, remained the lowest. Additionally, it explores the debate on the ideal age for children to start school, arguing that starting at age seven is more beneficial for mental health and academic performance compared to starting earlier. The conclusion emphasizes that early schooling may lead to stress and mental health issues, while starting at seven fosters a more positive learning experience.

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The document discusses the percentage of music concert attendance among three age groups over five years, highlighting that the 16-24 age group increased to 70%, surpassing the 25-44 age group at 60%, while the 45+ age group, despite a significant growth to 50%, remained the lowest. Additionally, it explores the debate on the ideal age for children to start school, arguing that starting at age seven is more beneficial for mental health and academic performance compared to starting earlier. The conclusion emphasizes that early schooling may lead to stress and mental health issues, while starting at seven fosters a more positive learning experience.

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This graph illustrates the percentage of people in three diffrent age

groups which are 16-24 years old, 25-44 years old and 45+ years old.
Overall, the percentage of people from different age groups increased
significantly over a 5 years period with 16-24 years old with the highest
and 45+ years old with the lowest percentage in the year 2015
In contrast, the percentage of 45+ years old people who attend music
concert grew dramticly 2 times more from 25% to 50% compare to 16-
24 years old and 25-44 years old which elevated steadily throught out 5
years. Although with the growth of nearly double, 45+ years old people
still remained the age group with the lowest percentage of people
attending music concert.
On the other hand, after a 5 years period, the 25-44 years old age group
with 60% lost its place as the group with the highest percentage to the
16-24 years old with 70 % of people. Although the 16-24 years old age
group started with a lower percentage of 40%, this group surpassed 25-
44 years old age group and created a gap by 10%.
In summary, 3 of the age groups had noticeable growth in percentage
over a 5 years period.The 16-24 years old age group took the lead with
70% while the 45+ age group still remained the age group with the
lowest percentage.

The ideal age for children to start school has been a topic for many
parents and educators. Some say that children should start going to
school as soon as possible, others argue that starting school at the age
of seven is better for kids. This essay will discuss both perspectives and
explain why starting at the age of seven is more beneficial in the long
run.

On the one hand, starting school early is not rare in some regions,
particularly in Asia, where the academic programs is often heavy and
require more critical thinking than the children can at their age. So they
have to start early in order to understand and remember what they are
taught. This result in mental health problems, mainly from the
overwhelming informations that they’re given and peer pressure from
other students that perform better. Take China for example, this is one
of the countries that have the most competive education system due to
the population. Consequently, sucide cases have risen a lot over the last
10 years.

On the other hand, children who started school at the age of seven can
understand and remember the marterials that they’re being taught
better, they can also solve the problems that are suitable for their age.
This make them view studying with a differrent perspective like fun and
exciting rather than stressful and boring. Moreover, starting at the age
of seven can also help children to learn with their own pace. For
example, studies showed that kids who started at the age of seven are
more likely to be more creative than those who started earlier.

In conclusion, starting school earlier does not equal to better academic


results, this maybe even affect their mental health. Starting school is
the age of seven is ideal for a child to make their study more effective
and enjoyable.

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