In 'The Journey Within' by Annelise Heurtier, Aveleen embarks on a challenging quest to discover the identity of the Chosen One, as foretold by the Tree, while grappling with her father's impending death. Throughout her journey, she encounters various obstacles and surreal experiences that test her resolve, including a mysterious lake at the Brown Mountain's crater. Ultimately, Aveleen's journey leads her to confront her emotions and the reality of her father's condition, leaving her uncertain about her mission's outcome.
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In 'The Journey Within' by Annelise Heurtier, Aveleen embarks on a challenging quest to discover the identity of the Chosen One, as foretold by the Tree, while grappling with her father's impending death. Throughout her journey, she encounters various obstacles and surreal experiences that test her resolve, including a mysterious lake at the Brown Mountain's crater. Ultimately, Aveleen's journey leads her to confront her emotions and the reality of her father's condition, leaving her uncertain about her mission's outcome.
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‘The Journey Within’ by Annelise Heurtier Extract 1 Aveleen kicked off her boots and let out a long sigh. She had been walking for two days solid. How could it be that the Brown Mountain still seemed so far away? Had she taken a wrong turn and set off down one of those devious, false trails that send devious: you round and round in circles? deceptive, Her body was slumped against the rock where she had stopped underhand to rest. Her stomach churned with distress. Would she be back waterskin: a in time? Would she reward the trust that Celegorn had placed in container for her? Aveleen grabbed her waterskin and took three anguished carrying water gulps. anguished: No matter how clear the signs, she still refused to accept that her experiencing pain father would soon be joining the Other Worlds. He may have been or suffering well past his 150th season, but he still seemed so . . . youthful. fatigue: extreme Not once had his body shown any sign of fatigue. Not once had tiredness his mind flagged. flagged: become Yet the Tree had spoken. And the Tree was never wrong. A less energetic handful of its leaves had started to turn silver, a clear sign that nigh: near for Celegorn the end was nigh. The time had come to find a new Chosen One to lead the people for the next cycle. Many hopefuls had appeared in turn before the Tree. Like Lothar, the engraver’s eldest son, who was said to have battled a Giant. Or Amæthon and Govannon, both born leaders of men. And others still, all spurred on by their determination to rule. Yet for the first time in her people’s history, the Tree had rejected each and every candidate. Who was the unwitting Chosen One? Her friend Olirin, who had departed six moons ago to explore the kingdoms of the North? But he was just a child, too young to deem himself a leader. Would she find the answer at the top of the Brown Mountain, as her father had assured her? Deep in thought, Aveleen pulled on her dust-covered boots and returned the waterskin to her pack. If she was going to daydream, she may as well do it on the move, otherwise she would stand no
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chance of being back before the last leaf on the Tree turned stiff with silver. She was in a very strange place: a vast plain dotted with rocks, ash trees and sea buckthorn. It resembled her own land, but at the same time it was different. Two suns shone in the white sky. The plants swayed despite the lack of any breeze. Where was she, exactly? She was not even sure if the region had a name.
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Extract 2 Celegorn had not given her many details. After spending a night beneath the Tree, he had simply announced: ‘The Tree has spoken. The identity of the Chosen One is hidden in the lake at the crater of the Brown Mountain. I want you to make crater: a large a journey.’ hollow in the ground ‘In a lake?’ Aveleen had asked. ‘And why me?’ ‘It must be you, for I cannot trust the others not to bring back their own name.’ ‘Where is this lake? There is no such mountain in our land.’ ‘This is not a typical journey. The starting point is in the centre of the Tree. Go, get yourself ready!’ The sound of voices banished the image of Celegorn from her mind. A few feet in front of Aveleen, the path was blocked by a pair of farmers arguing over a bundle of wheat, which was at risk of being ripped to shreds before the matter was settled. Where could these two have come from? Were they even real? The young girl brushed these questions aside and welcomed the chance to ask about her route. They did not seem in the least surprised at seeing the traveller. ‘This is the last bundle,’ he said, ignoring Aveleen’s query entirely. ‘I need it to bake bread. There’s nothing sweeter than the sound of a loaf crisping up in the oven—’ ‘No, we need it to make cake, you stupid toad,’ the woman protested. ‘Then we can sell ’em, and for a good price!’ Aveleen looked at the couple for a moment. Standing side by side with their hands on their hips, tight-lipped and frowning heavily, they looked almost identical, like a mirror image of each other. They reminded her of someone, but she could not think who. ‘Why don’t you sow your grains of wheat?’ Aveleen suggested after a moment’s thought. ‘With a bit of patience, you’ll be able to make bread and cake!’ The man and the woman looked the girl up and down, as if seeing her in a fresh light. ‘That’s not a bad idea, you know. Wise words, young lady—’
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‘You should’ve thought of that!’ the woman yelled at her husband. ‘Same for you!’ As a fresh barrage of insults thundered from the odd couple, barrage: an Aveleen decided to continue on her way, having lost all hope overwhelming that they might come to her aid. But after only a few steps, the number of things farmers caught up with her. ‘Wait!’ they shouted in perfect harmony. ‘You’re on a false trail. If you want to reach the Brown Mountain, you must not set foot on it. You have to walk alongside it, otherwise you’ll never leave the valley.’
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Extract 3 Aveleen managed to abandon the path she had been stuck on for two days. But it was not too long before she became thoroughly frustrated. The slope was slippery, and the summit was still so far off . . . Would she be able to make it the whole way? She was not even sure how many days the journey was meant to last. ‘It will take as much time as is necessary,’ Celegorn had assured her. How could he say such a thing when the smallest delay might prevent her from bidding him farewell? bidding him Aveleen hitched herself onto a small ledge as one of the suns was farewell: saying goodbye to him setting. Carved into the cliff face was a bronze door, so high that it would have loomed over the heads of the Giants from her own land. Aveleen ran her hands over the bronze before recoiling sharply. The door was opening in the middle. ‘Welcome.’ A slender woman with big, shimmering eyes beckoned her inside. Aveleen let her bag slide to the ground and started forward, unable to offer any resistance. Her first few paces left her stunned. She marvelled at the space, the light, the sky – how could all this exist inside a mountain? There was so much to admire that she found it hard to breathe. Trees, flowers, animals, buildings and people . . . wherever she laid her eyes, she was struck by the exquisite perfection around exquisite: her. The feeling overwhelmed her, as though her five senses had delicate and finally realised their true purpose. beautiful The woman gave her garments whose colours did not exist in her garments: clothes land. She then presented her with all manner of unfamiliar dishes, crystalline: clear, like desserts that were somehow both piping-hot and icy-cold, or like a crystal biscuits whose texture and flavour shifted with every bite, one second as dense as a storm cloud, the next as light as sea foam. Aveleen felt she could spend an entire lifetime exploring the wonders of this place and still not skim the surface. Time seemed to stand still. She stayed there for several days, maybe months, until the woman with the crystalline eyes returned to her side.
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‘Tomorrow, you are to become one of us. If you live with us for ever more, you will not know pain or suffering, you . . . ’ Aveleen let herself be cradled by the woman’s words. Her face was so reassuring, the tone of her voice so enchanting. Again there was a certain familiarity. Her face evoked a vague memory evoked: brought of Celegorn, which stirred Aveleen. How could she have forgotten to mind her mission? They were relying on her. She decided to leave the City.
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Extract 4 Aveleen had gone for several days without any boots. The mountain had rallied in its efforts to frustrate her progress, and rallied: renewed now her soles had given way to the rocks and deserts that she its strength had crossed. Deserts halfway up a mountain? Aveleen had lost resolute: count of how many times she thought she might die of thirst, determined only to stumble on a drop of water in a plant she knew from her own land. More than once she had considered turning back to the City. What if she found nothing at the end? But Aveleen remained resolute. She reached the crater of the Brown Mountain one cold day at dawn. She had walked through the night, unable to focus on anything except putting one foot in front of the other. The plain below was gleaming in the setting light of the twin suns. It seemed so very distant. How many months had passed since she had left? How many green leaves could there still be on the Tree? Just ahead, the lake in the mountain’s crater sparkled like a patch of sky that had fallen from the heavens. She felt her heart pounding as she scrambled down the last of the gentle slope, her eyes never leaving the lake. A few steps away there was a fearsome rumble, and the earth began to shake beneath her feet, causing her to sink to her knees. When she opened her eyes, she saw before her a vast chasm blocking her way to the lake. After a moment’s stunned silence, a mighty wave of anger tore through the young girl. Why this final obstacle when she was just feet away from completing her quest? Aveleen flung back her head and let out a howl of rage and bewilderment. bewilderment: the feeling of A swoosh of wings cut short her cries. Aveleen turned to being confused see a crow staring at her, its feathers lustrous in the evening light. Straight away the bird inspired an intense dislike in her. lustrous: shining Something in its eyes made her deeply suspicious. Yet again, however, the crow reminded her of someone . . . Why was she so utterly incapable of establishing who? ‘Why don’t you just pick the name of the Chosen One yourself, you idiot?’ the crow cawed. ‘You would have spared yourself the journey. Look at you, all covered in muck. I don’t know if the villagers will laugh or cry when you tell them about your miserable failure.’
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Extract 5 The crow still stared at Aveleen with mocking eyes. ‘Unless . . . unless I go on your behalf? Here, give me your gold necklace and I’ll take care of it.’ Aveleen was so incredulous she wanted to burst out laughing. A large golden ladybird chose that very moment to land on Aveleen’s hand. The girl watched as it took off again and settled a few inches from the precipice. Then something happened. Instead of making a turn, the ladybird carried on straight ahead, before zigzagging across the void. At first, Aveleen thought her weary body was making her see things. But as clear as day, the ladybird was standing in the middle of the chasm. Aveleen approached the gap and, still on her knees, started tapping it. It was quite incredible . . . she could see the chasm, but in several places, she felt firm ground too. The Tree had protected her people since time immemorial. It was since time unthinkable that she had been led to a dead end. There had to immemorial: for a be a way to reach the lake. There had to be. very long time – beyond memory Aveleen started ripping handfuls of wild grass from the ground. It was only when she saw the two piles that had formed either side of her that she had the idea. She stood up slowly and threw the first lot onto the precipice. The grass marked out a path. Aveleen shoved the rest of it into her leather pack. Her heart racing, she placed a foot on the green walkway as the crow flew off. There it was. The Lake sparkled like a silver fish. Aveleen caught sight of her reflection in the water. She brought a hand to her cheek. She seemed different. As Aveleen entered the cold water, her clothes drifted around her like broken wings. She emerged from the depths hours later with a sense of emptiness. There was nothing at the bottom of the lake.
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Nothing. Beneath the algae algae: a green water plant there was nothing but fine sand. On the bank, Aveleen curled up to regain some warmth. She fell into a deep sleep, oblivious to the rolling sky over her head that was about to engulf her.
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Extract 6 Aveleen woke with a jolt and immediately made herself remember. The Lake. She must have missed a clue, some stone, or a piece of wood that had gone unnoticed with the name engraved on it. She opened her eyes abruptly, but the scream she wanted to unleash stayed in her throat. unleash: to let out What was she doing in her house? dilapidated: run down, looking Celegorn was facing her, hunched over more than ever. Old age very old or had suddenly caught up with him; his body seemed completely neglected dilapidated. Aveleen felt tears in her eyes. She was not sure if it was sorrow at seeing her father in that state, joy at being reunited with him or fury that she had come home without a name. ‘Tell me what you saw up there’, Celegorn said. Aveleen disappeared into the depths of her memory. The crow, the chasm, the bottom of the lake, the cold, the weeds. ‘So you did not see a single face?’ Celegorn asked. Aveleen shook her head vigorously. Apart from her reflection in vigorously: with the surface, there had been nothing. energy Her father was now giving her an unusual look. Aveleen felt as if the blood was draining from her body. Yes, she had seen a face in the lake. Her own. She was numb. Could she be the Chosen One? ‘I have always believed in you,’ Celegorn continued. ‘But when it became clear that you would not offer yourself to the Tree, I knew I had to help you realise who you are, who you have been since you were young. I watched you throughout your journey. You showed wisdom, loyalty and great courage. You were able to make difficult decisions. Do you remember?’ ‘So this quest was your idea? The Tree never said that the name was at the summit? But if that’s the case, how can you be sure that I am the Chosen One?’ ‘There is not much time,’ Celegorn said in his quiet voice. ‘You have been gone seven days, and only a few leaves remain on the Tree. If you feel it within you, then come.’
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Aveleen passed through the whispering crowd. No woman had ever put herself forward. But when the Tree, their protector, embraced the girl in its branches, illuminating her with a silver halo, no one could illuminating: question the identity of their new guide. lighting up Aveleen looked up at them and smiled. halo: a circle of light above the Now she knew that it was her. head And she was ready.