Chapter Six
Chapter Six
SPEECH
INTRODUCTION
Dear student, this is the six chapter of the course. The chapter is designed to discuss the
important basic points that would enable you to have fundamental knowledge on speech. In
this chapter, you will learn about the meaning, type, importance, parts of speech, the
characteristics of a good speaker and the guidelines for an effective delivery of speech.
LEARNING OBJECTIVE
Define speech
Although there are many different types of oral presentations, they can be divided into three
general categories: Presentation to inform, persuade and to entertain. Since entertainment is
rarely the purpose of speeches by entry level employees and supervisors, we will discuss only
informative and persuasive presentations.
INFORMATIVE PRESENTATIONS
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informative presentations are intended to increase understanding, not to change an attitude.
The majority of informative presentations are informal in nature, most employees are
expected to organize and present informal briefings and reports to colleagues and supervisors
as a normal part of their jobs.
Many types of informative presentation are used in business situation. Although, the names
given of various informative presentations differ greatly from company to company here we
will discuss some of them. Examples of informative presentations are:
Oral briefing
Oral report
Instruction
Community good will
Oral Briefing
Oral briefing is designed to present a summary of facts in a short period of time (usually
fifteen minutes or less). A briefing may be given to an individual (such as an employee,
supervisor, of client). Many briefings are informal; when an employee or supervisor
informally presents information to colleagues at a weekly meeting other briefings are more
formal, such as a briefing on the status of a particular project given to an entire department.
Since briefings last only a short time, few visuals are required.
Oral Report
Oral report is designed to present complete details and requires a longer period of time
(usually more than fifteen minutes). A report may be a research report on the feasibility of
producing a new item, an analytical report examining various ingredients such as those used
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to strengthen a type of plastic, a demonstrative report explaining how to use a new machine or
company product, or an investigative report examining a problem area. Often decision making
groups are required to prepare both written and oral reports on a problem and their
recommendations for solving it. Like the briefings reports may be informal or formal but tend
to be more formal than the most briefings.
Supervisors use briefings and reports to communicate company policies and operational
procedures down ward to employees. Employees use briefings and reports to:
Instructions
This is aimed at making clear a process or policy or even the philosophy of a company mostly
to younger (newly coming) employees. It requires listeners to follow the explanation, learn
from the instructions and then apply it within the organization.
These are made by organizations that realize the value of remaining in contact with the
community. Sensitive organizations spend considerable time and money to support their
public relation offices that are meant to after and leave a positive company image in the minds
of the community.
PERSUASIVE PRESENTATIONS
Business people view persuasion as coercion. They feel that the only way to get people to do
what they want is by force or trickery. Neither of these methods is effective and neither is
really persuasion.
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“Persuasion is communication intended to influence choice” but it is not the same as coercion.
To coerce is to eliminate or exclude options. To inform is to increase the number of person’s
options or choices (the more you know, the more choices you have). To persuade is to limit
the options that are perceived as acceptable”
There is no force or trickery in persuasion. The receivers of the persuasive message must
weigh the logic and evidence and make their own decision. Once that decision has been made,
they alone are responsible for it, although the sender helped influence the decision.
In business your ability to achieve the company’s goals depends on your ability to persuade
others. If you cannot use force or trickery or cannot expect listeners to be persuaded by
information alone, how do you persuade them?
1. Introduction
2. Body and
3. Conclusion
INTRODUCTION
Introduction is to take place at the first few minutes of our speech. The introduction of an oral
presentation should:
As you begin your presentation, listeners’ attention may be focused on many personal things.
So in this introductory part you are expected to direct the attention from individual concerns
and thoughts to your presentation. Same common techniques for gaining attention are:
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Briefly cite two or three specific incidents or examples that relate to the topic.
Quote or paraphrase a well-known publication or expert.
Briefly demonstrate the item or skill you will be discussing in your
presentation.
Capturing the initial attention of your listeners does not guarantee that they will listen to the
remainder of your presentation. To keep their attention you must convince them that the
presentation will benefit them in same way- that is, will help them satisfy personal or job-
related needs.
Assure the audience that you are qualified to speak on the subject
The speaker is expected to demonstrate his qualification to speak on the topic by referring to
his personal experience, the detailed research he has done on the topic, the interview he has
conducted with knowledgeable peoples or the articles and books he has read that were written
by experts. By doing so the speaker should have to convince the audiences as he has the
knowledge on the topic.
Here the speaker is expected to state the purpose and a summary of the main points to be
covered. The average listener finds it much easier to follow and remember the ideas contained
in the presentation when the introduction lists the key points that will be covered.
BODY
In the main body of the speech the main points that are summarized in the introduction part
needs to be discussed in detail. Most speakers cover, two, three or four main points in their
presentation.
Researchers have found that people are “capable of accurately receiving and remembering
only seven facts, ideas or “bits” of information at a time”. There fore, organize the
information into seven or fewer key ideas or main point.
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The number of main points that should be included depends on (1) how many points are
needed to adequately develop the topic (2) the time limit and (3) the knowledge and interest
of the audience.
The main points can be organized in a variety of methods. The arrangements that seem to be
most relevant to business and professional situations are:
Topical arrangement
This arrangement is used to break a topic into clusters, divisions, or parts. No spatial,
chronological, or casual relationship exists between the main points in a topical arrangement;
each is merely one of several topics pertaining to the same subject. It is probably the easiest,
and therefore, the most popular method of arrangement. It is most effective when arranged in
one of the following ways:
This arrangement organizes main points according to their spatial location, such as front to
rear, north to south, bottom to top, left to right. The layout of a manufacturing plant could be
described by its left, center and right wings.
This arrangement is used to present events in the order (or by the date) of their occurrence and
to present steps in the order in which they occur or in the order in which they should be
followed.
This arrangement divides the speech in to two basic categories: The analysis of the problem
and the explanation of one of several solutions.
The Conclusion
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The conclusion normally contains two parts: a summary and a closing thought or statement.
The summary can be general (referring to the overall topic of the presentation) or specific
(listing the main points covered). The intent of the summary is to clarify for the listeners any
contusions about the purpose and main points of your presentation.
The closing thought or statement serves as a final attention getter. Its purpose is to give the
audience a thought or challenge that will keep them thinking about your presentation long
after it is completed.
Every good speech requires careful preparation. The speaker must be ready to cover the
subject thoroughly and must carefully organize the presentation. Here below are the
guidelines of being a good speaker:
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As we have seen speech is series of thoughts in the mind. There are about seven guidelines for
speech:
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speaker appearing before an informal audience should use more what you should use on a given
occasion is a matter for your best judgment. Your body movement while you are on presentation
has a significant impact on the effective delivery of your speech so need to consider these things
in your presentation.
D. Check Your Posture and Appearance
Obviously, speaker will dress and stand in a manner appropriate for the presentation .Do not let
your appearance, posture, or destructing gestures over ride your message. It is important for you
to dress properly, stand correctly and bring the focus of the audience for your message and not to
destructions, have others tell you whether your posture needs improvement. Another is to
practice speaking before a mirror or with video type equipment. In your efforts to improve your
posture, keep in mind what must go on with your body in order for good posture.
E. Make Clear Transition
It is possible to cover topics faster so that the audience may not follow them properly. There
fore, it is vital that you watch your transitions .At the end of a major point, slow down or pause
for a moment. Then, instead of abruptly starting the next idea, tell the audience that you are now
moving from your expiations of ‘communication goals’ to communication skills. Statements like
these are called transitions and they tell the audience to switch gears and prepare for the next
item in the speech. Transitions provide a rest for listeners and also give a clear signal about
where you were and where you are going now .Some common transitions that might be used are:
‘Now let’s turn to another point…’
However, there is another aspect that we should look at today…..’
‘now with our understanding of…we can discuss …’
Thus, when the transition is stated slowly, you look at the audience and incorporate gesture with
the transition. The audience will understand what is being said and will know what will be said.
F. Vary Your Volume and Speed
A boring speech may put your audience to sleep .Some ideas need to be started forcefully; others
need to be noted softly, respectfully. Look a good piece of look that is fast ,slow ,high, low, loud
or soft ,so should a speech reflect changes that match with the content of the idea .A speech
could be as boring and monotonous as a piece of music that proceeds at one volume level and
speed only .As a general rule ,you should present the easy parts of the message at a fairly quick
rate and hard to understand information at a lower ( slower pace ). The reason for varying the
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speed of the presentation should be apparent .Easy information presented slowly is irritating,
hard information presented rapidly may be difficult to understand. By observing your audiences
condition in the presentation you should vary your volume and speed of voice to hold their
attention.
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Telephoning Versus Face-To-Face Communication
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Identify and understand the procedures to be followed by the caller and the
receiver before and during telephoning
If you aim at a success of your secretarial career, and whatever career may follow that, your
success will depend on much more than your practical skills no matter how good your short
hand or typing skills, or your ability to present documents effectively you will not get for if
you can not get along with people.
Oral communication is the life – blood of our personal and business lives. Our ability to
communicate is a process which begins in childhood; the roles we play become gradually
more complex as we become adults and assume more responsibility.
The essential ingredient is you, and it is important in this respect to recognize that you play
two roles in oral communication: listening as well as speaking.
In your business life you will probably spend much more of your time talking and listening to
colleagues and clients than writing and listening to colleagues and clients than writing and
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reading. Problems will need to be discussed, information requested, instructions given. We
spend much of our lives speaking to other people, but something strange happens to many of
us when we are asked to speak in front of a group or in a formalized situation. To achieve co-
operation and effective teamwork, good human relations skills must be developed.
Private discussion
A conversation over lunch
A gossip in the lift
A chance meeting in the corridor
An informal gathering of staff
Instructing subordinates
Dealing with clients
Formal meetings
Interviews/ seminars
It takes different forms like private discussion , formal meetings, dealing with clients
etc
It requires two groups, speaker and listener
It is natural for the parties involved in it
It is supported by non verbal cues to convey information like intonation of voice,
facial expression, gesture, posture and body movement
It is supplemented by verbal language
It provides immediate feedback
It needs no charge for conversation
More reliable and effective
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It requires electronic device-telephone
It requires two people to involve –the caller and the receiver
It is persuasive
It gives immediate feedback
It needs charge for conversation
Overcomes the limitation of distance
Sharing of information with in a very short period of time
Facilitates information exchange
1. Plan what you will say-prepare supporting notes and gather any relevant
documents.
2. Consider the person to whom you will be speaking, take account of their
position, background, knowledge and experience
3. Speak appropriately to the situation – Be chatty, friendly, informal or formal,
etc, in accordance with the situation and the topic.
4. Be open – minded – consider the matter from the other person’s point of view
and be as open minded as possible, but have counter – arguments ready just in
case they are required.
5. Consider the location – you will feel more comfortable in a familiar
environment. Try to avoid distractions like telephone calls or other
interruptions.
The telephone is a channel that a modern manager can not do without. Ever since Graham
Bell made it possible for people at for away places to get connected, the telephone has been
an essential tool for business and social communication.
It is a form of instant communication which achieves quick responses, but it takes imagination
to use a telephone effectively. As you cannot see the other person or know that he/she is
thinking, your communication will be only as effective as your words and the way they are
used, for example intonation, style of delivery. It is ear –to – ear communication which means
that it doesn’t allow the use of body language unlike that of face -to – face communication.
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In any organization, the person on the telephone represents the company. That person gives an
impression of the company to the outside world; whether making or receiving the call. There
can be nothing more damaging for public relations, or better for losing business than a
telephone call which leaves the caller frustrated and no better informed than before he or she
started. The impression any organization wishes to convey to the out side world is of an
efficient, friendly, progressive company eager to give product and service and ensure good
public relations.
It is a very useful channel for quick local, national, and international communication. But it
has a severe limitation – communicators and communicates have to depend exclusively on
voice. The total absence of visual and near – total absence of other non-verbal support (except
notably for tone of voice) makes it imperative that we follow certain guidelines when we use
the telephone channel for one – to – one calls or conference calls.
As well other successful written and oral communication, telephoning requires preplanning by
the caller and desirable behaviour during the conversation by both persons who are
conversing. As some commercial advice “Reach out and touch someone”. Though you are not
meeting face –to – face, your conversation will be voice – to – voice and you want it to be as
favourable as possible.
Before telephoning
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6. Have paper and pen handy for note – taking, taking telephone messages require
both oral and written communication skills. A pencil and telephone message
pad should be kept by the telephone. The message pad provides headings
which act as a reminder to obtain the necessary information from the caller.
During telephoning
Merit Demerit
It enables more people to participate at once Unwise use of both verbal and non-verbal
language may be the cause for quarrel
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It avoids misunderstanding when two In face-to-face communication the communicator
communicators talk Uses non verbal language may be influenced by external environment i.e.
like facial expression etc ace-to-face status, physical appearance etc
Merits Demerits
Sharing of ideas easily in a short period of time It cannot be supplemented by verbal language
Over come the limitation of distance It is not very effective when the receiver is not
present at the time of dialling
Facilitate effective person-to-person or organization Since it is faster it is difficult to reply one by one to
to organization information exchange etc all information etc
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Active Listening
Introduction
Dear student, this is the eight chapter of the course. The chapter is designed to discuss the
important and/or basic points that would enable you to have the fundamental knowledge on
active listening.
In this chapter, you will be learning about the meaning, type, importance of active listening,
significance of active listening in organizations and the different causes of poor listening.
LEARNING OBJECTIVE
Effective listening is not a passive communication activity. It takes a great deal of effort and
motivation to become and remain an effective listener. However, good listening is a
prerequisite for success in business and the professions. Effective listening is certainly not the
answer to all business problems, but it is one of the first steps leading to solutions. The case
cannot be made strongly enough that organizational effectiveness is hampered by employees
and managers who do not listen well. Individual career advancement also can be impeded by
poor listening. Unfortunately, poor listening is often more apparent to others than it is to the
poor listener.
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8.1 Types Of Listening
1. Content listening
2. Critical listening
3. Active listening
The purpose of this type of listening is to understand and retain the speaker’s message you
may ask questions, but basically information flows from the speaker to you. Your job is to
identify the key points of the message. It doesn’t matter whether you agree or disagree,
approve or disapprove only that you understand. Content listening enables you to understand
and retain the message.
This is meant to both understand and evaluate the meaning of the speaker’s message at several
levels. Logic of the argument, strength of the evidence, and validity of the conclusions the
implication of the message for you or your organization, the speaker’s intentions and motives
the omission of any important or relevant points. Critical listening generally involves
interaction as you try to uncover the speaker’s point of view. You are bound to evaluate the
speaker’s credibility as well. It enables you to evaluate the information.
The aim of this type of listening is to understand the speaker’s feelings, needs, and wants so
that you can appreciate his or her point of view, regardless of whether you share that
perspective by listening in an active or empathic way; you help the individual vent the
emotions that prevent a dispassionate approach to the subject. Avoid the temptation to give
advice. Try not to judge the individuals feelings. Just let the other person talk. Active listening
is used to drown out the other person.
Regardless of whether the situation calls for content, critical, or active listening, all three
types of listening can be useful in work – related situations, so it pays to learn how to apply
them.
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In business environment, three different sources of information demand effective listening:
customers, employees, and supervisors.
By listening to customers, the organization can learn objective information about its products
or services. For example, customers can suggest desired product improvements that the
research and development department may have overlooked. Listening to customers can tell
us a great deal about the competition. Most companies like to compare and contrast
themselves with other companies’ people, information, goods and services. Customers will
communicate their opinion of you, your company, and its competition if they are encouraged.
It also increases sales and the level of customer satisfaction.
Listening to employees is a way of showing support and acceptance, which make for a more
open climate, and an open climate makes employee satisfaction and productivity more likely.
To show that they are listening managers’ responses must communicate acceptance. “There is
a genuine working together a whole new cooperative spirit--- but the most dramatic change is
in the atmosphere. It was hard to cooperate when you were in a war. The change is almost too
good to be true” Joseph Leonard
Perhaps it is obvious that employees of an organization should listen to their bosses since their
position depends on pleasing higher authority. However many employees do not recognize
how important it is to appear to be listening of course, giving the appearance of listening
without actually listening is unwise, but effective listening to a supervisor involves not only
good listening skills but also giving a good indication that listening is taking place.
Actually, effective listening can give you some power over your superior. People listen to and
agree with powerful people. Therefore, if you want your boss to listen to you, you need to
establish a power image.
Your goal in increasing your power over your superior is essentially to create in his or her
mind this image of you. You may say “This is a person who is like me in very important
ways, who is loyal to me and the organization, who will help me achieve my goal, who will
help me feel good in the process, this also is a person who has some expertise I value and
need.” Listening and responding play a key role in getting that image established.
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Generally, effective listening plays crucial role for the success of the organization by
increasing interpersonal communication and by creating common understanding between
employees and supervisors.
People are not born with the ability to listen effectively, listening skills are learned.
Unfortunately, many of us have developed poor listening habits. Poor listening can be
attributed to several causes, many of them involving bad habits that can be broken.
a) Physical Barriers
Some barriers to effective listening are not directly under our control. A noisy type writer, a
duplicating machine, someone’s loud voice, or a nearly vacuum cleaner could prevent us from
hearing an important message. Visual distractions also pose barriers to effective listening
concentration is the key to deal with physical barriers to listening.
b) Personal Barriers
1) Day dreaming
It is the most common listening problem because it affects every one frequently a speaker
may mention some person or thing that triggers an association in our minds, and off we go.
When we return to reality and start listening again, we may find that the third point is being
discussed and we have no recollection of points one and two.
2) False attention
Is a protection technique that everyone uses from time to time to take out the speaker when
we are not really interested in what some one is saying, we pretend to listen we nod our heads
and make occasional meaningless comments and eye contact to give the impression that we
are listening but our mind is a million miles away from the speaker.
3) Prejudgment
Is one of the most common and difficult barriers to listening because it is an automatic
process people could not operate in life without holding some assumptions. However, in new
situations, these assumptions are often incorrect. In addition, some people listen defensively,
viewing every comment as a personal attack. To protect their self-esteem, they may distort a
message by tuning out anything that doesn’t confirm their view of themselves.
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4) Listen selectively out listening
You stay tuned out until you hear a word or phrase that gets your attention once more. The
problem with out-listening is that it leaves you not with a memory of what the speaker
actually said but with a memory of what you think the speaker probably said.
5) Closed mindedness
If a fault that happen, more outside the class room especially when we are arguing we often
refuses to listen to other side of argument, especially when we have already made up our mind
we think there is no use in listening since we know all.
6) Personality listening
This is natural for listeners to evaluate the speaker but our impressions should not interfere
with our listening some time you may be tempted to tune out. We can find different types of
personal barriers that cause poor listening during the communication process and this personal
barriers are controllable than physical barriers.
c) Semantic barriers
Refers to the different uses and meanings of words and symbols therefore, they do not
necessarily have the same meaning for everyone. For your clarity of the word semantic
barriers you can refer from barriers of communication in the previous discussions.
You can improve your listening ability by becoming more aware of the practices that
distinguish good listeners from bad listeners:
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Listen for concepts and key ideas as well as for facts, and know the difference
between fact and principle, idea and example, and evidence and argument
Stay a head of the speaker by anticipating what will be said next and by
thinking about what is already been said.
Look for unspoken messages often the speaker’s tone of voice or expressions
will reveal more than the words themselves
Keep an open mind by asking questions that clarify understanding, reserve
judgment until the speaker has finished.
Evaluate and criticize the content, not the speaker
Provide feedback, let the speaker know you are with him or her, maintain eye
contact, provide appropriate facial expressions.
Take meaningful notes that are brief and to the point.
One way to assess your listening skills is to pay attention to how you listen when some one
else is talking, are you really hearing what is said, or are you mentally rehearsing how you
will respond? Above all try to be open to the information that will lead to higher quality
decisions, and try to accept the feelings that will build understanding and mutual respect.
Becoming a good listener will help you in many business situations especially those that are
emotion laden and difficult.
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Interview
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Dear learner, after completing this chapter, you will be able to:
The word ‘interview’ refers to all types of planned, face-to-face encounters in which at least
one of the participants has a specific objective in mind – Cheryl Hamilton and Cordell
Parker.
Interview is a two party communication in which at least one person has a specific, serious
purpose.—Ronald B. Adler & Jeanne Marquardt Elmhorst
This definition makes it clear that interviewing is a special kind of conversation, differing
from other types in several ways. Most importantly, interview is always purposeful. Unlike
other spontaneous conversations, an interview includes at least one participant who has a
serious, predetermined reason for being there. Interviews are also more structured than most
conversations. As you will soon learn, every good interview has several distinct phases and
always involves some sort of question- and –answer format.
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9.2 Major Types of Interview
There are far too many types of interview situations for us to list them all. However, the basic
approach to each type is similar and they possess the same basic features as:
All effective interviews are organized into three basic steps or phases: the
opening phase, the question-response phase (body of the interview) and the
closing phase. ( these will be discussed under ‘ the guidelines to effective
interviews for the interviewer’)
Dear learner, as you were able to see, there could be various types of interview. For our
purpose, an understanding of the following basic types of interview can be easily transferred
to other types of interview situations.
In this chapter therefore, we will deal with the three major types of interview namely:
Employment interview, Employee appraisal interview, and Grievance interview.
The critical organizational decisions are those to be made by the organization regarding the
selection of the best candidate for the job and the critical personal decisions are those made by
you (the candidate) regarding the type of job and organization for a career decision.
The ultimate productivity of the organization depends on the ability of its management to
recruit and select the best personnel for the job. In addition, your career often depends on your
ability to select the right job with the right organization.
An employment interview is basically designed to explore how well a candidate might fit a
job. This exploration works both ways: the employer explores who the right person for the job
is and the candidate (you) explores the organizations’ and job’s fitness with his/ her
qualifications, skills and career choices.
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Different types of employment interview can be used by organizations to discover as much as
possible about applicants.
Stress interview: - the stress interview is used by interviewers to see how well
a candidate handles stressful situations. During a stress interview, you may be
asked questions which are specifically designed to make you uncomfortable
and to unsettle you. You may also be subjected to long periods of silence,
criticism of your appearance, deliberate interruptions or even a hostile reaction
by the interviewer. This is a type of interview which is regarded by many
managers as inappropriate or unethical.
Dear learner, now you know the specific possible types of interview you might encounter
during an employment interview. So keep in mind these interview types so that you can get
the best out of you employment (job) interviews that you are going to have in the future. In
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the next sections we will examine other types of interview like performance appraisal
interview and grievance interview. Let us discuss these one by one.
Performance appraisal interviews are scheduled regularly between superior and subordinate to
discuss the quality of subordinates’ performance. More specifically, these interviews have
several functions, including the following:
Letting the employee know where he/ she stands- this is achieved through the
feedback that employees get which includes praising good work, communicating
areas that need improvement and conveying to the employee his/ her chance for
development.
Developing employee skill- such interview can be a chance for the employee to
learn new skills. If you were a supervisor, among other roles, you should be a
teacher to your subordinates. You can use such interviews to show an employee
how to do a better job.
Setting goals for the future- one of the results of every performance appraisal
interview should be a clear idea of how both the subordinate and supervisor will
behave in the future.
Dear learner, every performance appraisal interview will have the above functions and could
follow different styles which will be discussed in the following sections.
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There are three styles of appraisal interviewing which can be used in the appraisal interview
situations.
Problem solving
Tell and sell: a tell and sell appraisal interview style can range from a friendly persuasive
style to an authoritarian approach. In any case, the manager who tells and sells believes that
his/her evaluation is correct and aims at passing along this evaluation to the subordinate. The
disadvantage of this style could be the fact that it can be unfair and unproductive if the
managers’ evaluation is incorrect. For instance, you as a supervisor might believe that your
subordinate is unproductive. But this could be due to some external factors whereas you
believe that it is because of the persons laziness. In this case your evaluations are incorrect
and hence you can be unfairly judging your subordinate.
Despite these disadvantages, this style can work well in the following situations:
iii. with employees who are not willing to evaluate themselves and who appreciate
direction
Tell and listen (listen and tell): this approach adds a new element to the performance appraisal
interview, namely, the manager’s willingness to hear the employees’ point of view. With this
style, the manager offers his/her assessment and lets the subordinate react to it. During the
final parts of the interview, the manager again takes control in identifying future goals for the
employee.
Here, even though there is a two way communication, a pure tell and listen approach could be
basically persuasive. The managers’ motive to listening is to let the employee have a say but
there is no guarantee that the subordinates comment will change the managers’ ideas.
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The listen and tell is a more employee oriented variation where the manager lets the
subordinate to begin the session by describing his/ her beliefs after which the manager will
have a turn. This approach has three advantages
iii. It gives the manager an idea of how well the employee knows his/her own
strengths and weaknesses.
Problem solving: A problem solving performance appraisal interview style involves the
employee to a greater degree than the previous two approaches. In this interview style, the
manager and the employee work together to define areas of concern and to develop
appropriate solutions. Thus, the problem solving style makes the manager less of a judge and
more of a helper. Both the boss and employee realize that their best interests are served by
having the employee succeed and they have the attitude that it is possible to leave both parties
satisfied. While the interviewer retains the power that comes with a managerial position, boss
and employee cooperate so that neither orders nor threats are necessary.
The grievance interview is any type of one-to-one encounter involving conflict and its
resolution. Examples of situations leading to grievance interviews include employee-
employer disputes over working hours or wages, customer-salesperson conflicts and even
teacher-student conflicts. The grievance interview is unique in that emotions often run at a
much higher level than in the other type of interviews. However, the basic structure of a
grievance interview includes most of the same factors that operate in other interview
situations. The grievance interview highly requires the interviewer to be a good listener and a
problem solver.
Dear learner, from our discussion in the previous chapters of this material, can you recall
some points about an active listener and the barriers to active listening? Well, if you can, it
greatly helps you to understand what is meant by the requirement of a grievance interview i.e.
the interviewer should be a good listener (refer to your discussions on active listening). The
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various communication skills and barriers and the discussion we have made on them so far
will be applicable to the remaining discussions of this material.
When we first began this section, we stated with a discussion on the interviews that you are
likely to have. So, with the knowledge of it, you will be succeeding in those interviews that
you will have in the future. The most important and probably the first interview that you will
have is an employment or job interview. We have seen some points concerning such types of
interviews and in the following section; we will deal with the general guidelines to an
effective employment interview.
The effectiveness of an employment interview shall be examined from two sides: from the
side of the interviewer and from the side of interviewee. If we assume that a certain
employment interview was successful, it would mean that the employer was able to select the
best candidate who fits the job and as well the candidate (may be you) was able to get the
right job with the right organization. To these ends, the following are some general guidelines
which should be followed by both the interviewer and the interviewee to make the interview
situation most successful.
The basic organization of interviews is the same for all types. All types will have an opening
phase, the question-response phase (body of interview) and the closing phase. At this various
phases, the interviewer should follow the guidelines here under to make the interview as much
effective as possible. The interviewer will have more responsibility for the manner in which
the interview is conducted.
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ii. Determine the environment - the nature of interview usually determines
the kind of environment that the interviewer should establish. Example:
- select an area that is free from phone calls and other interruptions.
Give the interviewee a brief orientation to the interview. Conclude the opening phase by
motivating the applicant to give an honest and carefully thought out answers.
Asking whatever question comes to mind is an extremely ineffective way to learn and
remember information about the applicant. Areas that should be covered include the
following:
Leadership ability
Based on these, specific questions for each area can be framed as follows:
How many jobs have you held since you left school?
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iv. Ask only lawful questions: there are certain questions that interviewers
cannot ask of applicants during a pre-employment interview. This is based on
the belief that all persons regardless of their race, sex, national origin, religion,
age or etc should be able to equally compete for a job and advance in the job
market based on their educational qualifications, experience, and specific
skills.
To assure this, the interview questions should be framed like in the following
manner:
Dear learner, can you give your answer to the following two questions by referring to the
discussions you have come across on active listening in this material? Test yourself on how
well you can remember the previous discussions by relating them with current ones.
If you are the interviewee in a certain employment interview, you should not take a passive
role in it. You must become actively involved if you hope to find a job that specifically fits
with your abilities and interests.
The following are ways to make you an active participant in your employment interviews and
be successful in getting the job you want to hold:
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ii. Be prepared for any type of question and interviewer: as an
interviewee, you cannot always predict what type of interviewer you will face.
Normally, you can expect one or combination of some types of interviewers
like the unstructured interviewer, and the structured interviewer.
The unstructured interviewer: expects you to take the initiative during the
interview by looking for detailed responses. He/she might ask you an open
ended question like “Tell me about yourself”
iv. Be prepared with the questions you want to ask the interviewer: most
interviewers will invite you to ask questions. Therefore you should be able to
ask a few questions like: ‘Would the company support me if I pursue
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MEETING
INTRODUCTION
Well planned and productive group communications are essential for conducting modern
business, to achieve objectives and results that cannot be accomplished effectively in another
way. Meetings have always taken a large part of the average manager’s time. In addition the
increased use of teams also means that meetings are even more frequent. Just because
meetings are common doesn’t mean that they are always productive. A survey by one
marketing research company showed that meetings executives consider one third of the
gatherings they attend to be unnecessary. So, to be productive, any type of meeting will
require a good preparation from all participants in general and the chairperson in particular.
The chairperson is the one who takes the responsibility for planning and conducting or
leading the meeting.
In this chapter, the meanings and objectives of meetings will be dealt. We will also look at
the ways of preparing, conducting and keeping record (minute) of a meeting. From this
chapter you will learn the importance of communication in a productive meeting and how to
be an effective meeting leader and participant.
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
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Explain how to conduct (lead) a meeting
Numerous writers have given their definition for a meeting. Perhaps you have heard this
negative comment from some meeting attendants-“a meeting is an event at which minutes are
kept and hours are lost”. In contrast let us use this positive definition:-
“A business meeting is a gathering where purposive discourse occurs among three or more
people who exchange information on a common topic or problem, for better understanding or
for solving a problem”( Murphy and Hildebrandt, 1991)
The key words in the above definition are: ‘purposive’, ‘understanding’, and ‘solving’.
‘Purposive’: a meeting is useful when the leader and participants know the reason-“specific
purpose” for a meeting.
Dear learner, what is your evaluation of the following memorandum announcing a meeting?
You may say ‘I don’t know where the meeting will be held, who the other participants will
be’ and a number of questions might run through your head as you read the above call for a
meeting. Sadly, too many meetings are called in such an imprecise manner.
‘Understanding’: the word understanding in our definition suggests that learning from the
information presented at a meeting is a first purpose. You will gain something if there is an
effort to understand through asking questions and listening actively.
‘Solving’: solving a problem is the second and major reason for a business meeting.
Meetings are an important setting for oral communication and used for a variety of purpose:
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To report on some activity or experience
To obtain assistance
To present information
What often happens is that both these purposes may occur in one meet; a part of the meeting
devoted to giving information and the other devoted to problem solving.
Dear learner, in the following discussions we will see three basic types of meeting that
usually help organizations achieve these activities or purposes.
i. Informational Meeting
Informational meetings are held to disseminate information and check on the understanding of
those who attend. For example, the following notice appeared in an employee bulletin:
At this meeting, the staff will learn, ask questions and understand the new categories. No
problems will be solved, no recommendations for change in policy will occur; rather, each
person will gain improved understanding of the issue. A usual format is to have an opening
informative speech by a person highly knowledgeable on the topic followed by a discussion.
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Dear learner, you can see that these kinds of informational meetings involve purpose and the
use of data similar to those of informative speeches (refer to the previous discussions on
speech).
Through the discussions however, there is the opportunity to clarity understanding through
give and take not so easily achieved when simply listening to an informative speech.
Here two kinds of decisions are concerned with problems and solutions. The simplest is when
a manager wishes to hear about options for solving a company problem. The scenario
proceeds like this:
2. A question is phrased that seeks to get to the heart of the issue such as “what
should be done to control training costs?”
Dear learner, one thing that you should notice here is that in this type of meetings, no
decisions are reached. The manager and review committee listen to all points of view of
attendants, comments on option and perhaps potential final solutions are discussed. But no
decision is made. The meeting is informative and explanatory. A final decision may be made
at a second, problem solving meeting.
Meetings that result in decisions for action predominate in the business world. When the
executive or even a committee has no adequate solution for a problem, he/she or the
committee seeks suggested solutions in a problem solving meeting. The problem is presented
at the beginning by either the executive or some one previously appointed to prepare a written
report on it. The meeting participants suggest solutions, discuss and evaluate them and arrive
at a decision on which action is to be taken. The problem-solving meeting requires the most
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careful planning and presiding over by the leader, as well as challenging participation by
those attending.
Successful meetings are just like interviews, presentations, or letters: they must be well
planned.
It is incorrect to assume that one person will always call a group together. Some times a
committee is authorized by another group which could be as high as the board of directors.
Initial planning involves five factors:
Now let us briefly discuss these five factors that you should plan before calling a meeting.
First, you should decide whether the meeting should even be called at all. In one sentence
you should write the problem and specific purposes. If the purpose can be better attained by
telephone, letter, memo, etc, the participants should not be called together for a meeting. A
good meeting topic must be timely, genuine, really important and meaningful. It must present
a difficulty that is within the experience of the attendants. Also the problem should be limited
adequately so that the attendants are able to solve it-at least partially- within the given time. It
should be about a matter that can immediately be decided by the group or about which
recommendations can be made to a higher administrative body.
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Many business committees have a consistent group of attendants. For instance, executive
committees may comprise vice president, other committees may be made up of persons
working on a given account or a finance committee may consist of members from purchasing
to disbursements. Additional members are also invited to supplement the regular members’
contributions or to appear to make a specific report.
Regardless of whether or not the meeting is to solve a difficult, top-level problem, the
attendants should be those who can make special contribution. Usually the more difficult the
problem, the smaller the group-some times five or even fewer. But in some informational
meetings, hundreds may be interested and gain useful explanations.
The choice of date, time and place greatly depend on the audience size and make up and the
purpose of the meeting.
First, what is an agenda? An agenda is nothing but a list of topics that are to be discussed in a
meeting. Most often it is the meeting leader (may be you) whom we call the chairperson, who
prepares the agenda so the participants know in advance the direction of the meeting.
The announcement should be made or sent early enough to give the participants adequate time
to prepare their thoughts on the matter.
As the last step before any meeting, you as the leader of a meeting should consider such
physical arrangements as: seating, material, equipment and atmosphere.
Seating: most likely you as the chairperson of a meeting will arrange seating,
perhaps in a circle or around a conference table or in a diamond or U-shape so
that all attendants will easily be able to see each other and the chairperson.
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For the success of meetings especially a problem solving meeting, the chairperson’s attitude
and efficiency-from the beginning statement through the entire discussion-are critically
important. The chairperson should be well prepared, able to think and act quickly, get along
with others, respect their opinion, know objectives of discussion and the reasoning process, be
patient and have a sincere interest in the values of cooperative group action.
Dear learner, this part of our discussion will deal with the procedures that you must follow in
conducting a meeting where you are a chairperson. What you will read from this point
onwards is equally important to the success of the meeting in which you are the chairperson
as the readings from the previous part (i.e. preparation for a meeting).
Obviously, the chairperson should prepare his/her introducing statement before the meeting.
Then, present it to the attendants beginning by stating the problem, indicating the importance
of the problem, suggest issues and may be use a quotation.
In general, the chairperson is expected to encourage participation from all attendants and keep
the discussion moving forward. To help spark discussion on each topic, write on the board or
on the overhead projector the criterions a solution should meet. List on another board the
possible solutions of the problem as the participants suggest them. Ask questions and keep the
participants from wandering into irrelevant paths.
Attendants or participants could have various roles such as initiator, contributor, opinion
seeker, information giver, contributor, recorder, energizer and the like. These can be termed
as group task roles.
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There are also group maintaining and building roles like encourager, harmonizer, group
observer, compromiser, and follower.
Knowing these various roles being played by attendants of a meeting assists the chairperson
in knowing how to react, how to handle role statements made during the meeting.
After the chair person lists suggested solutions on the board he/she should encourage
participants and the advantage and disadvantages of each suggested course of action. Here
they should be listed separately and care should be taken not to impose the chairperson’s own
opinions on the group if he/she wishes to participate. Encourage each group member to feel a
sense of responsibility for the success of the analysis. Good listening by everyone to what
others offer is extremely important. Dear learner, can you remember the importance of active
listening?
Before dismissing the meeting, you as a chairperson should review what the group has
accomplished by summarizing what parts of the problem members have solved or partially
solved. State the decision (conclusion) clearly and definitely. If the group arrived at various
conclusions, they should be listed, preferably in order of importance. Statements should also
be made on how the solution the group decided will be carried out. Appointments may be
made then announced later in a memo regarding the action.
It is a mistake to assume that even a satisfying meeting is a success until you follow up to
make sure that the desired results have really been obtained. A thorough follow-up involves
the following three steps:-
Most groups meet frequently and they rarely conclude their business in one sitting. A smart
chair person plans the next meeting by noting which items need to be carried over from the
preceding one, what unfinished business must be addressed?, what progress reports must be
shared?, what new information should members hear?
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As a chairperson, you can be sure that the promised outcomes of a meeting usually occur if
you check up on other members. If the meeting provided instructions, see whether the people
who attended the meeting are actually following the steps that were outlined, check on
whether they are being performed. A friendly phone call and personal remark can be used for
such follow up purposes.
Most home works that arise out of meetings need continued attention. Don’t wait until the last
minute because the results will be sloppy and embarrassing.
After the meeting, the secretary of the meeting, who attended prepares a set of minutes for
distribution to all attendants and any other interested party.
Definition: minutes are official records of the proceedings of a meeting which summarize
what was discussed and what decisions were made.
Minutes should emphasize what was done at the meeting rather than what was said by the
participants. Minutes should include the following major items:
viii. Time of adjournment and, if announced, the date for the next
meeting
The minutes should objectively summarize discussions and decisions or conclusions reached.
The emotions and feelings of any member expressed during the course of discussion is not
recorded. However, the names of those who contributed major points and ideas should be
recorded. The minute becomes final only when it is read at the end of the meeting or in the
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next meeting, approved and signed by the members and chairperson. Often it is circulated
before hand and then it is conformed at the second meeting including amendments and
suggestion of members, if any.
Verbative minutes
Minutes of resolution
Minutes of narration
Verbative minutes: these minutes are used primarily in court reporting where
every thing is recorded word for word. Dear learner, have you ever been to a
court room? If so, then you must have noticed someone (the secretary) who
types every thing said in the court by the judge, the jury, the attorneys of both
parties and witnesses. The recording is made without omitting a singe word
and this is what we call as a verbative minute.
Dear learner, by now you already knows what minutes are, the points that they should include
and the different ways of recording them. Now is time to see the wording of minutes.
Wording of Minutes
Minutes should be written in a past tense form using a third person reported speech.
(Examples- the chairman asked…., the reports were presented and ….) Go through the
following examples of minutes and study the wordings and the format carefully.
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Place of the meeting
_________________ order.
_________________
Following the headings and noting the time the meeting started and ended, the
body presents all major decisions reached at the meeting. All assignments of
tasks to meeting members should also be included in the body part. Any
additional documentation such as tables and charts submitted by the
participants should not be overlooked.
Here there should be a couple of blank lines for the signature of the
chairperson and the secretary who prepares the minute. Before it is being
distributed the minute should be read and approved by the chairperson.
The minutes prepared by you and your friend may not be identical. But if you
follow the above format, your minutes of a meeting might look similar.
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In order to give you a full picture the following is a sample minute, where you
can have a closer look at the format, the wordings including the tenses used.
Minutes of ET (executive team) meeting
September 16, 2007
Executive conference room
Present: Ato Alemayehu G. (chairperson), Ato Genetu M., W/rt Hamelmal Z.,
Ato Israel M., W/ro Kelemua G. Also present: Ato Lemlemu A. and
Ato Mehari T.
2. Ato Mehari to present a report on salary compensation currently offered by the company.
Due: September 29
Respectfully submitted
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Recording secretary
decision- as is the case in most routine business-they are an effective and valuable form of
communication.
Business letters are written from one business firm to another or from a business firm to an
individual customer. They are the most common form of written messages used by the
business to communicate with people and organizations outside the firm. Therefore, business
letters are often the main means of establishing business relations with the outside world.
Hence, in this chapter, you will be provided with detailed discussions and explanations on the
characteristics of good business letters, the conventional parts of business letters, and the
different types of business letters.
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Dear student, after you complete reading this chapter, you will be able to:
11.1 Definition
Dear student, can you give your own definition of business letters? You can use the space
below to write you definition.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
______________________________
Business letter is a communication from one person to a company or vice versa and from
one company to another.
Business letter is the medium used for written messages often to the persons outside the
firm.
Business letters are purposeful internal and external medium of communication designed
to communicate business messages or information between the letter producer and the
reader who could be a supplier, a potential customer or another business firm.
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Now take a look at the above ways we used to define business letters and then compare them
with your definitions that you gave earlier. If you have missed some points in your definition,
do not worry because the coming discussions are geared towards acquainting you with what
business letters are and so much more than just defining them.
Letter
They will provide you with guidelines for the choice of content and style of presenting your
message specifically adapted to the purpose of your message and the receiver of your
message. We will discuss these characteristics that your letter should possess in addition to
the 7 C’s of effective communication:
1. Accuracy: you should strive for accuracy not only in the mechanical and
technical details but also in references and statements, dates, spellings,
(especially the names of persons or of firms), the use of language and
punctuation, and argument. Be accurate in all things and it is much
better to rewrite a letter than to send it out containing incorrect material.
2. Thoroughness: when you read your letter over before releasing it, you
should make sure that it contains the essential points that you want covered. If
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you are writing a reply letter to a correspondent, be sure that your answer is
comprehensive and covers questions that he/she expressed or implied. Do not
make it necessary for him/her to write again for information you ought to have
given him.
3. Conciseness: a concise message saves time and expense for both the sender
and the receiver. Conciseness, as you may recall from our discussion in the
first chapter of this material, is saying what you have to say in the fewest
possible words with out sacrificing the other qualities of your message. It will
contribute to emphasis and avoids/eliminates unnecessary words so that you
can make your important ideas stand out.
4. Clarity: to write a letter that will be clear to the receiver, you must first
have a definite idea of what you mean to say. If you are vague in your
thoughts, how can you expect the reader to grasp it immediately? To be clear,
however, does not mean that you should use many words to express an idea. It
just means that you should chose and use the rights words.
Tip: read your letter over and over again before sending it and do not be
satisfied unless and until it possesses clarity.
Dear learner, so far you have been able to see the specific characteristics your letter should
posses in a detailed manner. Having these characteristics in mind, how can you be able to
frame your letter? Here you will be offered an answer to this question. The answer is simply
to plan it very carefully following five steps. In our previous discussion on meetings,
interviews, speeches, etc , you have gained an insight on the importance of planning. So, here
also, you need a thorough planning process to be able to write an effective business letter that
possesses the above listed good characteristics. The following discussions are devoted toward
s enabling you plan your letter.
To communicate effectively, first you should go through the following five basic steps before
writing your message.
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Know the purpose of the message
Know your purpose: the first step when you plan for communicating your
message is to determine your specific purpose. For example, is it to get an
immediate replacement for defective articles? Or is your main purpose to
announce your firm’s new location? Or to apologize for a serious error? In
addition to the specific purpose of each message, all communications have, of
course, an underlying general purpose- to build goodwill. For example, in a
refusal or a collection letter, the purpose should be two fold- not only to refuse
a request or to ask for money, but also to maintain the customers’ goodwill.
Analyse your audience: after reading about the communication process and
principles at the first chapter of this material, you can realize how much
important it is to adapt your messages as much as possible to the recipient’s
views, mental filter and needs. In your letter, consider the areas on which your
recipient is likely to be well informed or uninformed, pleased or displeased,
negative, positive or neutral.
Choose the ideas: with your purpose and recipient in mind, the next step you
will take is to choose the ideas for your message. If you are answering a letter,
you can underline the main points to discuss and jot your ideas briefly in the
margin or on a memo pad. If you are writing a complex message, you can
begin by listing your ideas as they come to you. Then consider what facts will
be most useful for that person.
Collect all the facts: having determined what ideas to include, ask yourself if
you need any specific facts, updated figures and the like. Be sure you know
your company policies, procedures, product details if the message requires
them. Perhaps you should check with your boss, colleagues, subordinate or the
files for an exact percentage, name of an individual, a date, an address or a
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statement. Sometimes you may also need to enclose a useful brochure, table,
and picture or product sample.
Outline and organize your message: before you write the message, outline it
( in your mind or on a piece of paper). The order in which you present your
ideas is often as important as the ideas themselves. Disorganized writing
reflects disorganized, illogical thought processes or careless presentation.
Having done so, you need to decide on the organization of your letter where
you could have two major alternatives. You can either use a deductive or direct
approach where you begin with the main ideas and present discussions next or
you can use the inductive or indirect approach in which you start with the
relevant statements and later present the main idea.
A letter is a written message in a particular format. Properly planned, well designed and
neatly typed letters contribute towards the reputation and goodwill of a business organization.
The business letter mostly has seven standard parts.
They are arranged and discussed here in their top to bottom order:
The heading
The date
Inside address
Salutation
Body
Complementary close
Signature block
1. The heading: the heading shows where the letter comes from. It includes the
organization’s name, full address and almost always a telephone number.
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below the last line of the letter head. It is indicated in either in the upper right-
hand corner or upper left-hand corner.
Both methods are acceptable, however, the first method proceeds in the logical
order of day, month and year and hence it is conventional.
3rd. Company
4th. Building
7th. Country
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by a polite title and the name of the person and a colon. When a letter is
addressed to an officer by name “Dear sir” is used. If a person has a specific
title, it is written before his/her name instead of the usual sir.
Subject: the subject of a letter gives a brief title of the message. Thus, the purpose
of the subject line is to let the reader know immediately what the message is
about.
5. Body: this is the main part of the letter that contains the main message of the
letter and the idea of the writer. In the first paragraph, reference to any
correspondence which has already taken place, should be given. In the second,
the main message should be stated. The paragraphs that follow should contain
further details if necessary.
In the closing paragraph, the writer must clearly state what action he/she
expects the reader to take or he/she may end the letter indicating his/her
expectations, wishes or intentions. The paragraphs are not given any heading
unless the letter is very long and deals with several important points.
6. Complementary close: this is the polite way of ending a letter. It is typed two
spaces below the last line of the letter (body).
7. Signature area: signature is the signed name of the writer. It is placed below
the complementary close. The name of the writer is usually typed four spaces
below the close line providing enough space for signature.
Identification mark: identification mark is put in the left margin to identify the
typist of the letter two spaces below the signature
Example: Enc_____________
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Enclosure (s) _________
Copy to: copy is used when there are other organizations or individuals are
required to receive and know the message.
Dear learner, the following two pages will show you two letter structures having two different
formats which are both aimed at increasing your understanding of the discussion you have
read on the conventional parts of business letters.
There are two basic and most widely used letter formats which are worth a discussion.
a. The full block format: is becoming very popular format. It can be typed rapidly
because none of the parts of the letter are indented as is the case in the modified
block format.
b. Modified block format: in the modified block format, the date, the complementary
close and the signature block begins at the horizontal centre of the page.
Name of company,
Purpose
Signature signature area
Conclusion
Business title
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Enquiry letter
Business people periodically made routine requests for information. Those routine enquiries
are neutral messages that require no persuasion, and therefore, should be written using a direct
plan. The enquiries may be about a product, service, or a person. A letter of enquiry must be
written so that the writer will obtain all the information necessary to make a decision about
the product, service or person. If you receive such letters in the work place, consider what you
or your company would want to know and ask specific questions.
An enquiry about products or services should make receiver of your message glad to respond
and should end by requesting. The enquiry may include only one sentence such as requesting
a catalogue or it may also have several paragraphs in which questions are asked on the
following areas:
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Time required for shipment of goods
Dear learner, please have a close look at the following two sample letters for an enquiry and a
response to the inquiry. It will some how strengthen your understanding of the above
discussion. Look at the following example of an enquiry letter.
March26, 2007
Mr Yohannes Tigabu
Professor
Addis Ababa University
Addis Ababa
Dear Mr Yohannes,
Based on your experience in this area, I was wondering if you would be interested in
attending. The deadline for admission is May 23. It would be a great honour to have
A SAMPLE OF RESPONSE LETTER FOR THE PREVIOUS LETTER OF
ENQUIRY
Hydraulics department
Addis Ababa University,
Addis Ababa , Ethiopia
April 2,2007
Alemayehu Yirga
Professor, AMU
Arbamich
Dear Mr Alemayehu,
Thank you very much for your letter dated 26th March.
Claim letter
I would be honoured to attend your symposium on the management of water resources in
A claim letter
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problem with the seller’s product or service. A claim letter requests some type of adjustment.
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g e enclosing the admission sheet sent to me, and the articles I recently published on the
subject. Good luck in organizing the event. I cannot wait to be there!
Sincerely,
Many compliant letters would probably be more successful if they carried an implied claim
that the writer wanted some adjustments to be made as a result of a poor product, service or
unfair treatment, practices and so on.
While writing claim letters, you should be courteous and avoid emotional language. Your
reader who becomes angry with the strong language you used in your letter will be less likely
to do as you ask. Instead of using an emotional language, begin you claim letter directly
telling what the problem is. Once you have identified the problem, give explanations
including all possible back ground information such as the date, the model number, the
amount etc.
Dear learner, look at the following two ways of presenting your claims and tell which one of
them is wrong and which is right and why?
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
1. I delivered this letter to you sometime in the early afternoon on December 3. Although you
promised to deliver it by 3 pm in the next day, you failed to do so.
2. As shown in the enclosed copy of my receipt, I delivered this letter to united express at
3:30 PM. According to the signed documentary displayed in the office, any package received
by 4 PM is guaranteed to arrive at 3 PM the following business day. I have not received any
yet.
Tell exactly what went wrong and how you are inconvenienced. If it is true and relevant
mention some thing positive about the company or its products to make your letter appear
reasonable. Finally tell what type of adjustment you expect. Do you want the company to
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replace the product, repair it, issue a refund, and simply apologize or what? End the letter on a
confident note. In some situations you may not exactly know what type of adjustment is
reasonable, and then you would leave it to the reader to suggest an appropriate course of
action. This might be the situation where you suffered no monetary loss but simply wish to
avoid such an unpleasant situation in the future. It could be regarding a discourteous service,
long waiting lines, ordering the wrong model because of having received incomplete
information. For instance, you can say --- please let me know how I might avoid this problem
in the future. Look at the sample claim letter below regarding a defective product.
BIFFA RETAILER
ARBAMINCH,
ETHIOPIA
P.O.BOX 887
In the following section i.e. adjustment letters we will look at a sample adjustment letter
which is written in response to the above
Marchmodel
8, 1999claim letter. So keep the above example in
Mrwhile
your mind Yaregal Atnafu
going through the discussions that follow.
Marketing manager
Adjustment letters
TTY food complex,
An adjustment letter is written to inform the customer, or the supplier, etc of the actions taken
Addis Ababa
in response to their claim letter. So, the objective of the adjustment letter is customer
satisfaction
Dearand
Mr business
Yaregal, reputation. In writing the adjustment letter, you should consider the
claims very
We promptly because
have ordered 4000 any delay
Kg of rice will causenumber
our order further BR/009/99
annoyance.dated
In addition
Februaryyou
23,should
1999. Today
offer further when theand
cooperation shipment arrivedofwesatisfaction
assurance checked its contents
to promptand found
good only
will 3400
and good
Kg of
relationship packed
with rice out of which 65 packs were badly damaged. It seems one of the
the customer.
cases was not packed properly or some heavy load had been placed over it in transit.
If the claim is unclear or unreasonable or unjust, state why you are refusing or partially
accepting the claim. The overall tone of your adjustment letter should adopt a gracious and
There is a great demand for your product in the town at this time of the year and we
confident approach. Show confidence in the recipient’s honesty and in the essential worth of
expected to clear the whole stock during the next two months. But it appears some of
your own
ourcompany and
customers willitshave
products.
to be disappointed.
Guide lines for writing an adjustment letter
With enormous resources at your command we hope you can save the situation by
Respond promptly: your customer is already angry or upset
sending the remaining 600 Kg of packed rice immediately by quick transit service.
Begin the letter directly, telling the reader immediately what
adjustment
Regarding the damaged is being
packs, we made.
want your advice. There are two alternatives: either
you will allow us to sell them at reduced price in which case we shall send you the
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total amount realized after deducting our usual 7% commissions or permit us to return
them to you at your cost for replacement.
Adopt a courteous tone: use neutral or positive language
If appropriate, some where in the letter thank the reader for writing
and apologize if the customer has been severely inconvenienced or
embarrassed because of you company’s action.
Before we wind up our discussion of adjustment letters, it would be very good for you to look
at the following sample adjustment letter in response to the previous sample claim letter.
Purchasing section
Biffa Retailer
Arbaminch,
Ethiopia
Dear Madam,
Thank you for your letter number BR/110/99 dated March 8, 1999. We are very sorry to
learn that you have been inconvenienced owing to our mistake.
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e suggestion of quick shipment of 600 Kg of packed rice is fair and we have
dispatched them today through quick transit service, as desired by you. We hope they
will reach in time for you to keep the dates with your clients. We also agree to bear the
transportation cost of the damaged packs. Please send them back soon.
Thank for drawing our attention to this mistake because we have again carefully
Employment letters
Dear learner can you recall the points discussed about interview, especially employment
interviews? If not please refer back to that chapter because what we are about to discuss in
this section is closely tied with it. The employment letters’ objective is to get you into an
interview or written test by your prospective employer. Well planned and organized
employment letters will attract the employer for more information about you which will result
in you being called for an interview. In this section we will see two major parts of an
employment letter. i.e. application letters and resume or curriculum vitae or bio-data which
are both necessary when you apply for a job/ when you seek employment in a particular
organization.
Application Letter: the purpose of a job application letter is to get an interview. If you get a
job through interviews arranged by Arbaminch university placement office or through other
contacts, you may not need to write such letters. However, if you wish to work for an
organization that is not interviewing in your campus, or when you change jobs, you will be
required to write a letter for preparation of a job interview, because the application letter is the
first step where you show a specific company what you can do for it. It is a form of
advertising and it should be organized like a persuasive message. In your application letter
you need to stimulate your reader’s interest, it must be neat, clear, polite, purposeful and
accurate and technically correct.
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When you write your application letter, it is better if you have some knowledge about the
organization you are applying because you should be able to write about how your
qualification fits into its needs. The application letter should have several paragraphs such as
the opening, middle and closing paragraphs.
Unsolicited application letter: is sent to a company for which you would like to work even
though no vacancies are being advertised.
The opening paragraph indicates the specific position the applicant seeks, where the
advertisement was seen or how the applicant came to know of the vacant position and why the
application qualifies for the position.
The middle paragraph(s) of the application letter presents selling points unless these are
mentioned in the opening. This paragraph should give key qualifications that indicate that
indicate the applicant can do the job.
Guidelines:
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For writing the opening paragraph: To open letters by capturing the reader’s attention in
business follow suggestions below:
Mention the name of a person who is well known to the reader and you has
suggested that you apply
State that you are applying for a job, and identify the position or the type of work
you seek.
Present your key qualifications for the job, high lighting what is on your
resume: job-related education and training, relevant work experience and
related activities, interests and qualities
State your phone number with area code and the best time to reach you
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Express appreciation for an opportunity to have an interview
The type of resume format may depend on your preference and the employer organization you
target. It may be chronologically organized around dates of employment and education,
starting with the most recent position first. It may also be functional-organized around skills
in which employers are interested. The third alternative is the combination of the above two
designs which includes a section on employment by dates and a section on skills.
Parts of a Resume
2. Education
List all relevant schooling and training since high school, with most
recent first
List the name and location of every post-secondary school you have
attended with the dates you entered and left and the degrees or
certificates you obtained
State the numerical base for your grade point average, overall or in
your major, if your average is impressive enough to the employee
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List any other relevant educational or training experiences such as job
related seminars or workshops attended and certificates obtained
3. Work experience
List full-time and part time jobs, with the most recent one first--- State
the month, year you started and left each job, list the job titles and
describe you functions and responsibilities briefly.
5. Personal data
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Provide proof that your learn quickly, are a hark worker, can
handle responsibilities and get along well with others.
6. Reference
Exclude you present employer if you do not want him or her to know
that you are seeking another position, or add “resume submitted in
confidence” at the top or bottom of the resume
Dear learner, look at the following application letter and resume shown below as a sample.
They are written by an applicant as a response to the above vacancy announced by Ethiopian
Telecommunications Corporation.
Mekuria Getachew
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e 3030
Addis Ababa
SAMPLE CURRICULUM VITAE
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age To obtain the post of Junior Human Resource Officer
Introduction
To carry on efficient operations, businesses need various reports. In almost any kind of
responsible business job-whether you are a management trainee, a salesperson, an accountant,
a junior executive, or a Vice person, you may have to write reports. Your communication
effectiveness and, often your promotion and salary increases are affected by the quality of
reports you write.
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This chapter is exclusively devoted to written reports. It provides overview of business
reports. It includes their meaning, classifications, objectives and main parts. It discusses how
to prepare, organize and outline reports.
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
Discuss why businesses need reports and highlight the general purposes of
reports
Dear learner, in your personal or work life you might have come across several types of
business reports. So, It might be easy for you to define what business report is. What is
Business Report? You may put your answer on the provided space below:
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Now, try to evaluate the appropriateness of your definition against the following possible
definitions of Business Report.
A Business Report can be also defined as any factual, objective document that serves a
business purpose.
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A Business Report is an orderly and objective communication of factual information that
serves some business purpose.
As you can see from the above definitions, report is about factual information, not opinion.
What is the difference between fact and opinion? Factual information is documented and
verifiable. Example: The room is very warm. The temperature on the wall indicates that it is
85 degrees. Opinion is a perception, an interpretation. Example: Everyone in the room has
removed their jackets; therefore, it must be very.
You may be surprised at the variety of messages that qualify as reports. The term covers
everything from a fleeting image on a computer screen to reprinted forms to informal letters
and memos to formal manuscripts. Many reports are delivered orally. In general, however,
most business people think of reports as written, factual accounts that objectively
communicate information about some aspect of the business. Because business reports are a
managerial tool intended to inform or to contribute to the decision making and problem-
solving process, they must be accurate, complete and unbiased. The report facts may pertain
to events, conditions, qualities, progress, results, products, problems, or suggested solutions.
They may help the receivers understand a complex business situation; carry out operational or
technical assignments; or plan procedures, solve problems and make policy decisions about
strategic planning.
The goal in developing a report is to make the information as clear and convenient to use as
possible. Because time is precious, you tell your readers what they need to know- no more, no
less-and you present the information in a way that is geared to their needs.
Organizations use reports to provide a formal, verifiable, link among people, places and times.
Some reports are used for internal communication; others are vehicles for corresponding with
outsiders. Some serve as a permanent record; others solve an immediate problem or answer a
passing question.
Although business reports serve hundreds of purposes, most reports are used for one of the
following general purposes:
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To help implement policies and procedures
To document work performed for a client e.g. Interim progress reports, final
report
Each of these purposes imposes its own requirements on the report writer. If your readers
need information to oversee an operation, you would present your message differently than if
you were contributing a decision on a complex issue. In other words, the purpose of a report
affects its form.
Reports are commonly classified by who initiated the report, why it is being prepared, when it
is prepared, and where it is being sent. Here are some common report classifications:
Internal reports versus external report. Internal reports (used within the
organization) are generally less formal than external reports (sent to people
outside the organization).
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In addition to these categories, a report can be short or long, formal or informal. Formal
reports are generally long-more than ten pages-and encompass complex problems. Informal
reports are generally short. However, meanings of the terms “long” and “short” vary
depending upon circumstances. Short, informal reports require fewer elements in their
introductions, fewer transitional devices for continuity, fewer headings and usually a more
personal writing style than do long, formal reports. Dear reader, keep in mind that a single
report may have several classifications. For instance, a monthly sales report is generally an
authorized, internal, routine, informal report. Nevertheless, most reports can be placed in two
broad categories: Informational reports and analytical reports. Informational reports
present facts on a subject, whereas, Analytical reports present facts with analyses,
interpretations, conclusions, and perhaps recommendations. The purpose of informational
reports is to explain, whereas, analytical reports are meant to convince the audience that the
conclusions and recommendations developed in the text are valid.
Before you start writing a report, you need to consider the planning steps. For all reports
adequate preparation before writing involves the following six important planning steps
regarding purpose, reader, ideas to include, facts to collect, interpretation and organization.
The first planning step is to analyze the problem involved and know the purpose of your
report. Ask questions like “What is wanted?” “How much?”, “Why?”, “When?” Answers to
those questions will help you determine your problem, purpose, scope, limitations (in time
and perhaps in fund), and title of the report. Then try to write your purpose in one concise,
clear sentence.
Visualizing your reader or listener and his or her needs is an extremely important step in
business report preparation. Who wants (or needs) this report? Who will read it? How much
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detail do they prefer? What is the reader’s point of view? Experience? Knowledge?
Prejudice? Responsibility? Will the report be sent to several-or perhaps Hundreds of- persons
at the same time?
In short reports this third step usually involves writing down- in no particular order- any
general idea you will need to develop in order to meet the report’s purpose. If the report is
long, a detailed working plan follows. For some reports, formulating hypotheses (Hypotheses
are possible explanations or solutions for analyzing a problem) is desirable (even essential) as
a basis for determining what information you will need and then you will jot down the
tentative topic headings in a preliminary, tentative outline.
The fourth step in report preparation is to gather needed facts thoughtfully from reliable
sources. They might include primary sources (collecting data from people who are actually
closer to the problem) and secondary sources (published materials).
In this fifth step the amount of brain work depends of course on the complexity of your
research as determined by purpose and reader needs. In a short, informational report this step
may take only a few minutes. I a long, analytical report based on masses of detailed data from
many sources, this step may require weeks of study, arranging and analysis between the first
sorting and the final interpreting of data. Your analysis and interpretations should of course be
objective, free from your own personal bias (if you have any). To be honest, never omit or
manipulate relevant facts, though they may contrary to your own preferences or may require a
decision different from what you had expected.
Now is also the time reconsider the logic of your hypotheses and whether any main ideas in
your original, tentative outline should be revised. Occasionally, after investigating your
primary and secondary sources, you may find that some points in your tentative outline are
not logical or possible to complete. Conversely, some areas that should have been included in
the outline may have been omitted. And so you now revise, add, and delete topics where
necessary.
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6. Organize Data and Prepare Final Outline
After careful analysis and interpretation, you will organize the findings and make the final
outline. But before preparing such an outline, you need to know what constitutes a report
body and to consider various methods of organizing and outlining.
After you have completed the six preparation steps, you turn to the main parts of the report.
These usually contain three sections: Prefatory parts, text (Body) and Supplementary parts.
Prefatory Parts
Although the prefatory parts are placed before the text of the report, you may not want to
write them until after you have written the text. Many of these parts- such as the table of
contents, list of illustrations and executive summary-are easier to prepare after the text has
been completed because they directly reflect the contents. Other parts can be prepared at
almost any time.
Cover
Many companies have standard covers for reports, made of heavy paper and
imprinted with the company’s name and logo. If your company has no standard
covers, you can usually find something suitable in a good stationery store.
Look for a cover that is appropriate to the subject matter, attractive, and
convenient. Also, make sure it can be labeled with the report title, the writer’s
name (optional), and the submission date (also optional).
Think carefully about the title you put on the cover. Give your readers all the
information they need: the who, what, when, where, why and how of the
subject. Put a title on the cover that is informative but not too long.
The title fly is a plain sheet of paper with only the title of the report on it. It
adds formality to a report.
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The name, title, and address of the person, group or organization
that authorized the report (usually the intended audience);
If you were authorized in writing to prepare the report, you may want to
include in your report the letter of memo of authorization (and sometimes even
the letter or memo of acceptance). The letter of authorization (or memo of
authorization) is a document requesting that a report be prepared.
Letter of Transmittal
The letter of Transmittal (or memo of transmittal) conveys your report to your
audience. The letter of transmittal says what you would say if you were
handing the report directly to the person who authorized it, so the style is less
formal than the rest of the report. For example, the letter would use personal
pronouns (you, I, And We) and conversational language. The transmittal letter
usually appears right before the table of contents.
Table of Contents
The table of contents outlines the text and prefatory and supplementary parts.
Be sure the headings in the table of contents match up perfectly with the
headings in the text.
List of Illustrations
For simplicity’s sake, some reports refer to all visual aids as illustrations or
exhibits. If you have enough space on a single page, include the list of
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illustrations directly beneath the table of contents. Otherwise, put the list on the
page after the contents page. When tables and figures are numbered separately,
they should also be listed separately.
Apart from deciding on the fundamental issues of content and organization, you must also
make decisions about the design and layout of the report. The following are parts you include
in your text section:
Introduction
Establishes the tone of the report and the writer’s relationship with the
audience
Authorization- when, how, and by whom the report was authorized; who wrote
it, and when it was submitted.
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Sources and methods- The secondary sources of information that were used
and the surveys, experiments, and observations that were carried out.
Limitations- Factors affecting the quality of the report, such as a budget too
small to do all the work that should have been done, an inadequate amount of
time to do all the necessary research, unreliability or unavailability of data, or
other conditions beyond your control.
Report organization- The organization of the report (what topics are covered
and in what order), along with a rationale for following this plan.
Body
The body of the report follows the introduction. It consists of the major
sections or chapters (with various levels of headings) that present, analyze, and
interpret the findings gathered as part of your investigation. Restrict the body
to those details necessary to prove your conclusions and recommendations.
The final section of the text of a report tells readers “what you told them.” A
long report generally has separate sections labelled “Summary”,
“Conclusions,” and” Recommendations”. Here is how the three differ:
Summary-The key findings of your report, paraphrased from the body and
stated or listed in the order in which they appear in the body.
Conclusions- An analysis of what the findings mean. These are the answers to
the questions that led to the report.
Supplementary Parts
Supplementary parts follow the text of the report and include the appendixes, bibliography,
and index.
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An appendix contains materials related to the report but not included in the text because they
are too lengthy or bulky or because they lack direct relevance.
A bibliography is a list of secondary sources consulted when preparing the report. List all the
secondary sources you used in the bibliography.
An index is an alphabetical list of names, places, and subjects mentioned in the report and the
pages on which they occur. An index is rarely included in unpublished reports.
How a report is organized increases the readability of the report. The report’s reader, purpose,
and subject matter must be considered when you choose the organizational plan for the entire
report body and the text section. Then you will need to outline the topics correctly. The two
usual ways to organize a report body are by the deductive (direct) and inductive (indirect)
plans. Most business reports are organized deductively because readers wish to know early
the recommendation or conclusions.
Deductive Arrangement
Inductive Arrangement
Here you present the explanation before the main ideas or recommendation.
You present much evidence and supporting materials before arriving at the
main recommendation or conclusion.
One of the most challenging tasks in report writing is to decide on the best way to organize
the mass of details in the text section. You must make this decision before you prepare the
final outline and, of course, before you begin writing the report. You can develop the text in
one (or more) of the following ways:
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1. By criteria or topics- This is the most common. Your main headings may be
the standards, factors, solution options, benefits, or characteristics-criteria-on
which a decision rests.
7. By sources- This method is less desirable unless you are sure your reader is
most interested in what each source revealed rather than in the criteria o other
important ideas.
Methods of Outlining
After you have decided how to organize the body and the text, you will arrange the headings
and subheadings in an outline. A good outline, especially for reports two or more pages long,
is an essential tool and a real time -saver. It will become your guide for writing the report. In a
long, formal report, it also becomes your table of contents. The outline helps you- before you
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write the report- to see the relationship between topics, compare proportions and headings,
check for loopholes in logical order, and eliminate overlapping.
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