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The document outlines an assessment task for a group of five members to practice writing business emails, specifically focusing on tone and structure. Each member is required to write a follow-up email regarding their job interview for a Service Crew or Cashier position at Jollibee, expressing gratitude and eagerness for the opportunity. The emails are addressed to the store manager, Jane M. Castro, and highlight the applicants' skills and enthusiasm for the roles.

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Assessment 4- Elec 2

The document outlines an assessment task for a group of five members to practice writing business emails, specifically focusing on tone and structure. Each member is required to write a follow-up email regarding their job interview for a Service Crew or Cashier position at Jollibee, expressing gratitude and eagerness for the opportunity. The emails are addressed to the store manager, Jane M. Castro, and highlight the applicants' skills and enthusiasm for the roles.

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ASSESSMENT 4

Form a group of 5 member and practice writing a business emails,


focusing on tone and structure. You can choose on what scenario you
would like to do. Each member should write on his own while having
the same scenario with the group.

SCENARIO 3: You are a job applicant following up on an interview result.

MEMBERS:
Margarette Lleatasha Ermac
Almaira M. Cali
Angela Caryle T. Yares
Laureen V. Pilapil
Mary Ann L. Bangquiao
September 6, 2024
Jane M. Castro
Store manager
National Highway, cor Caturay st, Iligan City, Lanao del Norte

Dear Ms. Castro,

I hope this email finds you well.


I am writing to follow up on my interview for the cashier position on September 2, 2024.
I enjoyed learning more about the role and the team, and I am very interested in the
opportunity to contribute to Jollibee Tibanga, Iligan City.
I am eager to hear your decision regarding the position. Thank you for your time and
consideration.

Sincerely,
Margarette Lleatasha Ermac
[email protected]
Subject: Follow-Up on Service Crew Position Application

September 6, 2024
Jane M. Castro
Store manager
National Highway, cor Caturay st, Iligan City, Lanao del Norte

Dear Ms. Castro,

I hope this email finds you well.


I am writing to follow up on my recent interview for the Service Crew position at Jollibee
Tibanga, Iligan City, which took place on September 1, 2024. I would like to express my
gratitude for the opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences align with the
needs of your team.
I remain very enthusiastic about the possibility of contributing to Jollibee Tibanga and
am eager to bring my dedication and customer service skills to your esteemed
restaurant. If there are any further details or steps required from my end, please let me
know. I am keen to provide any additional information you may need and am flexible
with my availability for any further discussions.
Thank you once again for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of
working together and contributing to the success of your team.

Best regards,
Almaira M. Cali
Upper Hinaplanon, Iligan City
09361620710
[email protected]
September 6, 2024
Subject: Follow-Up on Service Crew Position Application

Dear Ms. Jane M. Castro,

I hope this email finds you well.


Thank you again for taking the time to interview me for the service crew position at
Jollibee on September 1, 2024. I enjoyed our conversation and am very enthusiastic
about the opportunity to contribute to your team.
During our discussion, I was particularly interested in learning more about Jollibee's
commitment to providing exceptional customer service. I believe my experience in
handling customer complaints and resolving issues effectively would be valuable in this
area.
I am confident that my strong initiative and adaptability would also be a strong asset to
the team. I am a quick learner, adaptable to new environments, and committed to
delivering exceptional results.
I am eager to learn more about Jollibee and contribute to your team's success. Thank
you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding
the next steps in the hiring process.

Sincerely yours,
Angela Caryle T. Yares
Suarez, Iligan City
09300582707
[email protected]
Subject: Follow-Up on Service Crew Position Application
September 6, 2024
Jane M. Castro
Store manager
National Highway, cor Caturay st, Iligan City, Lanao del Norte

Dear Ms. Castro,

I hope this email finds you well.


This email follows up on my application for the Service Crew position at Jollibee, which I
submitted on September 1, 2024. I am interested to join your team and contribute to the
success of Jollibee.
I am a highly motivated and committed individual with a solid commitment to work and a
desire to provide excellent customer service. I am confident that my talents and
experience would be beneficial to your team.
I am ready to learn and grow with this company, and I am especially pleased about the
opportunity to work in a fast-paced workplace where I can engage with customers and
contribute to an enjoyable eating experience. I have5 years of experience in customer
service positions and am constantly willing to learn new skills.
I'm inspired by Jollibee because of its reputation for wonderful cuisine and excellent
service. I feel that my good attitude, hard work ethic, and dedication to providing
excellent customer service would make me an asset to your company. I am convinced I
can contribute to the team's success.

Best regards,
Laureen V. Pilapil
Linamon, Lanao Del Norte
09558052303
[email protected]
September 6, 2024
Jane M. Castro
Store manager
National Highway, cor Caturay st, Iligan City, Lanao del Norte
Subject: Follow-Up on Service Crew Position Application

Dear Ms. Castro,


I hope this message finds you well.
I wanted to take a moment to thank you again for the opportunity to interview for the
cashier position at Jollibee on September 1, 2024. I appreciate the time you and the
team took to discuss how my skills and experience align with the company’s goals.
I am still very excited about the possibility of joining your team and contributing to
ensuring efficient and friendly customer service at Jollibee. I am eager to help maintain
the company's high standards by accurately processing orders, handling transactions,
and creating a positive dining experience for every customer. I wanted to kindly inquire if
there are any updates regarding the hiring process or the timeline for the next steps.
Thank you once again for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you
soon.

Warm regards,
Mary Ann L. Bangquiao
09453775159
[email protected]

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