Creative Writing Module 4_quarter 2
Creative Writing Module 4_quarter 2
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SENIOR HIGH SCHOOL
Creative Writing
Quarter 2 – Module 1
(Lesson 4)
Reading and Writing Drama
b. Write at least one scene for one-act play applying the various elements,
techniques, and literary devices HUMSS_CW/MPIj-IIc-20
WHAT I KNOW
Instructions: Recall what you have learned or read about staging modalities. Read
and answer the following statements. In your notebook, write the letter of your answer
to the question in each item.
4. What is the first thing that you should do or choose in writing a one-act play script?
a. setting
b. characters
c. stage modality
d. subject
6. What staging modality is also known as picture frame stage since the audience sits
in rows facing the stage?
a. proscenium
b. traverse
c. arena
d. chromium
7. What type of staging modality wherein the audience are sitting on the sides of the
stage?
a. proscenium
b. traverse
c. arena
d. chromium
8. Which type of staging modality was used in 1895 production of the famous Oscar
Wilde play, “The Importance of being Earnest”?
a. proscenium
b. traverse
c. arena
d. chromium
10. Why is the proscenium stage considered as a traditional type of stage modality?
a. because a curtain underlines the division of the actors and the audience
b. because the curtain is not flashy
c. because the stage is made of wood
d. because its structure is like the stage in fashion walk
WHAT’S NEW
Activity 1. Observe the similarities and differences of the pictures below. Write your
answers using the three-circle Venn Diagram. Write your answers in your notebook.
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WHAT IS IT
A. What is Staging?
Staging refers to the performance of a drama or play in a stage. The stage is
the area where the actors perform, and it is usually a raised platform. It is essential to
understand how to explore different staging modalities vis-a-vis envisioning the script
because these give great impact to the performance. Thus, the mode of the stage
must be fit to the script or kind of drama or play.
According to Roberts (2017), plays were performed in ancient Greece in
amphitheater or arena theater that caters as many as 25,000 audiences. Actors had
to perform in a declamatory style since microphones are not yet used during this
time. Throughout the history of drama, the architecture of stages has influenced and
contributed a lot to the style of drama and vice versa.
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• Develop the action first, then compose the dialog before you decide anything
else. Keep the plot simple for a one act play and it should move consistently
throughout the play.
• Develop the characters. Write out a character sketch beforehand to help you
flesh out your characters and bring them to life. Give your characters a motive
in life (or lack thereof) and up the stakes by making them face a problem. This
is central to any story.
• Generate the setting. The setting for a one act play will be one scene, but you
have to still develop the scene so the audience sees everything about the story
line. Include as many of the five sense as you can. Lighting helps the setting.
Make sure you write in notes about how the lighting should look.
• Add in the stage directions after you write the action. Write notes about how
each character should respond and what props you'll need. For example, if the
characters should be facing another direction and talking to another character,
note it in the script.
• Find performers that fit each part. Hold auditions to find the right actors and
actresses. Be upfront with them about whether this gig is a paying gig or a
volunteer gig.
• Make copies of the play for each cast member. Save the document in case you
need extra copies. Give copies of the one act play to each member of the stage
and prop handling too.
• Practice the play. Ask for feedback from all the people involved in the play. Hire
or ask an expert to help with the production too. Hold one final practice before
opening the show. This should be a dress rehearsal. Treat this final as the real
thing and tie up any loose ends.
The script below is an excerpt of the one-act play written by Cherly Tessa
Lungay, Chandy Rafael Pelaez, and Niña Taray under the supervision of their teacher,
Mr. Jefred Son U. Aligsao of Talisayan National High School – Division of Misamis
Oriental which was performed as their culminating activity in Work Immersion.
Balikbayan Girl
An Adaptation of The New Yorker in Tondo by Marcelino Agana Jr.
Characters:
PROLOGUE
SCENE 1
The parlor of Mendoza's house in San Jose
L1 MRS. M (Kamolo kanaog paingon sa purtahan)- bisita, permanente nalang bisita! Puro
nalang bisita tibook adlaw! Jusko naingon naman kita ini pagka Kris Aquino!
(Iyahang g abrihan ang purtahan. Paingod og solod si Tony nga nay dala bulak)
L2 MRS. M: Oh, ikaw man diay kanaa Tony! Abi kobag naa ka sa siyudad?
L3 TONY: (Nakurat)- ikaw naba kanaa aling Atang?
L4 MRS. M: (Nikatawa)- Oo loy! Kinsa man diay imong pagtoo? Nagtoo ka na ako na si
Sharon Cuneta?
L5 TONY: Wala naman gayud ko nakaila nimo aling Atang .
L6 MRS. M: (Naulaw, kamoo kapot sa iyang bag- ong gupit na buhok)
Nagpasalon ra intahon ko loy, bati diay?
L7 TONY: Nindot ‘noon te! Abi gani nako ikaw na si Kikay.
L8 MRS. M: Ikaw gayud Edgar, poros ragayud Ka binoang hangtod karon, Ali dayon.
(Kalit nay ni kanta)- “Welcome, Welcome, Welcome”
L9 TONY: Kinsa ba kaha naa sila aling Atang?
L10 MRS. M: Heee! ako mga silingan nga pilingon singer! Pasagdi kanaa sila. Kumusta na
diay tood imo mama?
L11 TONY: (Naglingkod)- maayo gihapon te, gimingaw na daw siya dire sa San jose.
L12 MRS. M: (Niabay kang Tony)- Pila na gani ka katuig nilakaw Tony?
L13 TONY: Tulo ra ka bulan te.
L14 MRS. M: Tulo ka bulan? Kalooy sab ni Mareng, sigurado ko wala na gayud to
makaagwanta. Mooli gayud toa.
L15 TONY: Lage te, lahi ra biya ming mga Engineer, kung nay project kuhaon dayun mi
insigida.
L16 MRS. M: Jesus! Dapat lang makauli na diri imohang mama, gimingaw nakog dula og
tongits uban siya.
L17 TONY: Gimingaw na gihapon siya ana ante.
L18 MRS. M: Lisod gayud limtan imong kaagi. Kung taga San Jose ka mobalik gayud ka
dire. Pero ambot lang sa ako anak na si Kikay. Katong panahon nga nia pa siya sa
New York, wala man nibatig kamingaw.
L19 TONY: (Nakulbaan)- Kanus-a diay ni-ari balik si Kikay aling Atang?
L20 MRS. M: Kadto rang niaging Lunes loy. Tan-awa ra gani unsa iyahang gi buhat sa ako.
Gipaspasan kog pa-salon, pamanicure bisag moadtog merkado hala dapat plakada
akong nawong sa makeup. Nahimo na ‘noon ko kataw-anan sa uban. Di najud nako
mapugngan ako anak. Giignan pako og dapat Amerikano daw dapat kog dating.
Ginoo pasayloa!
L21 TONY: (Nikatawa) – Nahimoot ko ni Kikay te oy. Asa diay si Kikay karon Aling Atang?
L22 MRS. M: Toa sa kuwarto Loy, nikatulog pa.
L23 TONY: (Nitan-aw sa orasan)- Nagkatulog pa?
L24 MRS. M: Ana siya Loy (Fake American accent)- “New York people do not wake-up
before 12 o’clock noon.
L25 TONY: Mag-alas 10 naman ante.
L26 MRS. M: Kung nasayod kalang Loy, pag-abot niya dire hala sali inom, sige rag
lakwatsa, disco dire, disco didto. Hesusmariajosep!
L27 TONY: Palihog nalang kog ingon niya te nga nibisita ko. Palihog nalang gihapon ko og
hatag danhing bulak sa iyaha.
L28 MRS. M: Ngano man, molakaw na ikaw? Ayaw sa Loy malipay gayud to makita ka
hulat lang sa ako pukawon si Kikay.
L29 TONY: Oo sige te.
L30 MRS. M: Og Loy, hapit nako malimtan, ayaw kog tawaga nga Aling Atang molagot toa
si Kikay.
L31 TONY: Huh? Kay ngano man ante?
L32 MRS. M: Ah basta, perteng artiha danhing anak nako, dapat dawkog tawagon tawagon
nga Mrs. Mendoza.
L33 TONY: Ok. Sige aling a-- este… Mrs. Mendoza.
L34 MRS. M: Daw Tony, ayaw kalimti, tawaga na si Kikay og “FRANCESCA”
L35 TONY: Pranceska?
L36 MRS. M: Dili Pranceska, Fran.. ces… ca.
L37 TONY: Ok. Segi Mrs. Mendoza.
L38 MRS. M: Sige ako na pukawon si Franceca Loy.
SCENE 2
L1 TOTOY: Toonnyyy?
L2 TONY: Totoy! (Gibangga ilang mga tiyan)
L3 TOTOY: Tarantadong talong!
L4 TONY: Manok na Pula! Pila naba ka tao imo naraid?
L5 TOTOY: Wow! Ikaw pila naman ka bangko imo nakawatan? (Nikatawa).
L6 TONY: (Gitoklod si Michale daw nakit-an ang is aka kaha nga sigarilyo)- Oh yosi
panghatag ra ged.
L7 TOTOY: (Kamolo sigarilyo)- Abi nakog nia ka sa Cagayan.
L8 TONY: Oo brad, niari rako dire para kang Kikay.
L9 TOTOY:(Nisindi sa yosi)- Dawbi Brad! Permente nalang bati ang dungog akong
gakadunggan kang Kikay.
L10 TONY: Lage brad, ako sab (Nilingkod).
L11 TOTOY: (Nilingkod og apil) Ana gani mga silingan nga naboang na daw siya karon
L12 TONY: Gikan man si Kikay sa New York.
L13 TOTOY: Huh? Diay? Niunsa man siya didto?
L14 TONY: Nagskwela siyag Hair culture daw Beauty Science. Nia pay diploma!
L15 TOTOY: Wow! Taasag buhok ni Kikay. Lahi ra ged nis Kikay.
L16 TONY: Ay Oh, dili na siya si Kikay, kay siya na si Francesca.
L17 TOTOY: Fran… cis… ca?
L18 TONY: Ang Ms. San Jose nahimo na siya og Ms. New York (nagkatawaha)
L19 TOTOY: Si Iday? Usa ka Amerikana? Ayaw kog yaga-yagae (nagkatawaha) kaila ta
dana niya sugod pa atong namaligya siya sa puto.
L20 TONY: (Nagkatawa) Kadumdom ka sa una katong getulod nato siya sa kanal?
L21 TOTOY: Oo oy, kadumdom pako ato, gelakag pa ged ta niya taman pikas kanto
hahahaha.
L22 TONY: Kusog pa ged kaayo manumbag hahaha.
L23 TOTOY: Hayysstt… ang sa una nga Kikay layo ra kaayo sa karon.
L32 MRS. M: Well, Totoy? Well Nena? I said good morning. Nganong inana man mo
makatotok sa akoa?
(CHUMBA: (nagkanta) Bakit kayo ganyan makatingin, super sexy naman ng ating bituin. Si
aling Atang pwede bang patikim)
L33 MRS. M: Umalis nga kayo dito. Layas!
L34 NENA: Ikaw na aling Atang?
L35 TOTOY: Ginoo ko, aling Atang!
L36 TONY: Tol, dili na siya si aling Atang, siya na si Mrs. Mendoza karon.
L37 NENA: Ginakusi ko nimo sa una katong bata pa bitaw ko aling Atang.
L38 MRS. M: You were a very naughty girl, always fighting with Kikay. Labi na si Totoy
nga permig pangawat sa mangga.
L39 TOTOY: Naa pa ang manggahan?
L40 MRS. M: Oo, naa pa sa luyo.
L41 TOTOY: Nena! Manguha ta mangga ta!
L42 MRS. M: Segi testingi ged ninyo kay pang bimbingon ta ged mo.
L43 TOTOY: Joke joke ra gani.
L44 MRS. M: Saba diha Totoy, ali ubani ko sa kusina.
L45 TOTOY: Hala! Ngano man? Unsaon man ko nimo aling Atang?
L46 MRS. M: Abno! Magpatabang rako sa pagdala sa mga butang.
SCENE 3
L8 TONY: Paghunahuna gud Nena, tuo kag sayon makipagbreak sa tao nga engaged
nas ako ah.
L9 NENA: Onsa man ged. Ako o si Kikay?
SCENE 4
L1 MRS. M: Paminaw, nana si Kikay pero ayaw ninyo siya'g tawaga nga Kikay
FRAN…CIS…CA dapat!
L2 KIKAY: Ohhh, hello, hello, darling, you darling, Nena my dear! How cute you become
(Kiss Nena). Tony, my little pal (Shake hands) and Totoy my friend. Come sit down!
Ohh1 Mumshie! Mumshie!!!
L3 MRS. M: Onsa naman sad?
L4 KIKAY: How many times must I tell you mumshie dearest, to never serve
juice in water glasses.
L5 MRS. M: Dili man ged nako makita imong gusto nga baso.
L6 KIKAY: Ohh poor, mumshie, nevermind.
L7 MRS. M: Sige nah, mag adto sa kog merkado.
L8 KIKAY: Don't forget to put lipstik okaayy?
L9 MRS. M: Hayyy ambot.
L10 KIKAY: Poor mumshie, she is problem, (waves her cigarette dayon gi dagkutan ni
Totoy)
L11 KIKAY: Merci.
L12 TOTOY: Huh? Si Totoy man ko dili man Merci akong ngalan.
L13 KIKAY: I said Merci it means thank you in french.
L14 TOTOY: Merci.
L15 NENA: Istoryahi pud mi kung onsay naa sa New York.
L16 KIKAY: Aahhh, New York? Ready namo sa mga amazing, exciting romantic
stories?
L17 TONY: Pila diay ka kamonths or year didto?
L18 KIKAY: 10 months, 4 days, 7 hours and 21 minutes!
L19 TOTOY: Grabi, topa gihapon imong utok didto?
L20 KIKAY: Yes! Yes! Darling, nagpabilin pa gihapon akong gugma didto. Kung maglingi
ko bisag asa naa gihapon didto akong heart. Feeling nko, I am not home, even though
I am already here gina ingon nila nga nakauli nako but feel nako naa pa gihapon ko
didto! Oh! New York, my very own New York.
L21 NENA: Siguro, mulakaw na ta.
L22 TONY: Mao ged, murag nakadisturbo man siguro ta diri.
L23 NENA: Pasagdan nalang nato siya nga maghandumhandum sa iyang kaagi.
L24 TONY: Siya pa ang babae nga permi natog gakauban sa pag pangaligo sa sapa sa
una?
L25 TOTOY: (Gi awat awat si Kikay) Oohh New York, my dream place, my very
own New York, my dream place, my very own New York.
L26 KIKAY: Oh listen, now, in New York, it's springtime. The daises are just appearing in
central park. When spring comes around each year, we New Yorkers, we make a sort
of pilgrimage to an old tree. It's been growing there ever since New York was New
York. We call it "Our Time".
L27 NENA: Nasabtan teka Kikay! Inga ana gihapon ang akong gakafeel sa atong kahoy
diri.
L28 KIKAY: What tree?
L29 NENA: Ang mangga nga kahoy nato girl! Kadomdom ka atong kahoy nga atong
gasakaan.
L30 TOTOY: Nasapon pa ged ta dadto ni aling Atang! Hahaha ge huboan pa ged kog short
L31 NENA: Mao gyud! Nidagan pagid ka nga hubo tanan hahahaha.
WHAT’S MORE
Activity 3. Read and analyze again the given sample of one-act play script.
1. Determine the staging modality that is suitable for the script and explain in 3-5
sentences.
2. Identify the (a) elements, (b) techniques and (c) literary devices found in the
sample.
3.
ASSESSMENT