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The document outlines an IELTS writing task focused on comparing online learning and classroom learning, emphasizing the structure of an essay. It discusses the advantages of both learning methods, highlighting flexibility and cost-effectiveness for online learning, while noting the interactive environment and discipline of classroom learning. The document also provides guidelines for essay writing, including criteria for assessment and common linking words.

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IELTS Essay Eriting ppts

The document outlines an IELTS writing task focused on comparing online learning and classroom learning, emphasizing the structure of an essay. It discusses the advantages of both learning methods, highlighting flexibility and cost-effectiveness for online learning, while noting the interactive environment and discipline of classroom learning. The document also provides guidelines for essay writing, including criteria for assessment and common linking words.

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IELTS Writing

Esha Ali
Essay writing

More than 250 words

40 minutes
Question: Some people think that online learning is better
than classroom learning. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

Brainstorm and make an outline


Advantages of
Advantages
Classroom
of Online
Learning
Learning

Interactive Better focus


Flexibility and Cost-
environment and discipline
accessibility effectiveness.

Group projects and Students are less likely


Working professionals
face-to-face teacher to multitask during in-
pursuing online degrees Platforms like Coursera
support. person lectures.
without disrupting their and Udemy offer
jobs. affordable certifications.
Structure
Introduction
Paraphrase the question statement.
Thesis statement; Address the question briefly.
Briefly outline the main points you will discuss.
Main Body Paragraphs (2)
A topic sentence stating the first main point.
Explanation and supporting details.
Example (if relevant).

Conclusion
Summarize the main points.
Introduction
Online learning is becoming increasingly popular, with many people believing it is more effective than traditional classroom
learning. While online learning offers flexibility and affordability, I believe that classroom learning remains more effective due to
its interactive and structured environment.(Thesis statement)

Main Body Paragraph (1)


One of the key benefits of online learning is its flexibility and accessibility. Students can attend classes from any location and
schedule their lessons around personal commitments. This is particularly beneficial for working professionals who wish to
enhance their skills without compromising their jobs. For instance, many individuals pursue online degrees or certifications while
maintaining full-time employment. Additionally, online learning is often cost-effective, as it eliminates the need for travel and
accommodation expenses. Platforms like Coursera and Udemy provide affordable courses that are accessible to a global
audience.

Main Body Paragraph (2)


However, classroom learning offers significant advantages, particularly in fostering an interactive and engaging environment. In a
classroom, students can participate in group discussions, collaborate on projects, and receive immediate feedback from
teachers, which enhances understanding and retention. For example, group projects encourage teamwork and communication
skills, which are harder to replicate in online settings. Furthermore, classroom learning promotes better focus and discipline.
Attending classes in person provides a structured schedule, reducing the likelihood of distractions such as multitasking, which is
common in online learning.

Conclusion
In conclusion, while online learning provides flexibility and cost-effectiveness, it cannot replace the value of classroom learning.
The interactive and structured environment of traditional classrooms fosters better engagement, discipline, and holistic
development, making it the more effective approach to education.
Topic Sentence

It is the first sentence of a body paragraph. It states the


main idea or point of that paragraph. It tells the reader
what the paragraph will be about.
Criteria
Task Achievement: Address all parts of the question with
relevant ideas.
Coherence & Cohesion: Logical flow, use of linking words.
Lexical Resource: Variety of vocabulary, avoid repetition.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Variety of sentence
structures, few errors.
Common Linking Words
In my opinion, It is often argued that.
Adding Ideas: Moreover, Furthermore, In addition.
Contrasting: However, On the other hand, Nevertheless.
Giving Examples: For instance, Such as, To illustrate.
Conclusion: To conclude, In summary, Overall, In nut shell
Essay Types
Opinion (Agree/Disagree)
Some people think that online learning is better than classroom learning. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Advantages and Disadvantages.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of social media in our daily lives?
Problem and Solution.
Traffic congestion is a growing problem in cities. What causes this issue, and how
can it be solved?
Discussion (Both Views).
Some people think technology makes life easier, while others believe it creates
more problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Direct Question (Two-Part Questions).
Why do people move to cities? What are the impacts of urbanization?
Dos and Don’t s
Contractions
Write out "do not" instead of "don't" in a formal essay.
Personal Pronouns (Sometimes)
Avoid "I" or "you" in formal academic essays, unless specifically
asked for your opinion.
Avoid off-topic ideas or irrelevant information
Thank you
so much

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