Writing b1 Handout Compiled (Updated)
Writing b1 Handout Compiled (Updated)
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
LEAD IN
6. It was a long day, but she still had energy to cook dinner.
8. Some people were taking a nap, for they had been working all morning.
INDEPENDENT AND DEPENDENT CLAUSE
A. WHAT IS A CLAUSE?
A clause is a building block of a sentence. It's a group of words that contains:
● Subject: do-er of the action → it is usually a noun, pronoun, noun phrase
● Verb: the action
● Sometimes, a clause will have an object which is a receiver of the action.
Examples:
There are two main types of clauses: Independent clauses and Dependent
clauses.
B. INDEPENDENT CLAUSE
An independent clause, also called the main clause, expresses a complete idea.
The structure of independent clauses includes a subject and a verb (action).
Sometimes it may need an object to complete the thought.
Examples:
Examples:
● Although it was late, ...
=> This clause states that “it was late” but doesn't say what happens
next.
● Since she tried so hard, ...
=> This clause explains why something happened, but it doesn't say what
happened.
Examples:
She finally achieved her goals. She finally achieved her goals since
Since she tried so hard. she tried so hard.
COMPOUND SENTENCE AND COORDINATORS
D. COMPOUND SENTENCE
A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses joined
together. We can use a comma (,) and a coordinator (coordinating
conjunctions) to join two independent clauses.
Structure:
Example:
Independent clause 1: He likes watching TV.
Independent clause 2: He is so busy with work.
=> Compound sentence: He likes watching TV, but he is so busy with work.
In this example, there are two independent clauses that express two complete
thoughts. To form a compound sentence, a comma and a coordinating
conjunction “but” are used to show a contrast between them.
For Used to indicate She stayed inside, for it was too hot to go
reason or purpose. outside.
And Used to show She cleaned the house, and she prepared
addition. dinner.
Nor Used to express a She didn’t go to the park, nor did she visit
negative idea in the her friends.
second part of a
(After ‘nor’, the order of the subject and the
sentence.
auxiliary verb is switched: she visited ⇒ did
she visit)
Yet Used to express He was tired after a long day, yet he still
contrast or stayed up to finish his book.
surprise.
Below are a few mistakes that students may make when writing compound
sentences.
It was getting late, but Wrong coordinator It was getting late, so they
they decided to go decided to go home.
home.
She went to the grocery Beginning a sentence She went to the grocery
store. And she bought with a coordinator store, and she bought
some fresh vegetables. some fresh vegetables.
PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Decide if these following underlined clauses are dependent (D) or
independent (I).
2. She finished her work, and she spent the evening relaxing with a good
book.
5. She prefers to exercise in the morning, whereas her sister likes to work out
in the evening.
7. She finished her work early, but she stayed to help her colleagues.
8. The sun was shining brightly, yet the air was still cold.
9. While most people were resting, he continued working late into the night.
10. He went to the store so that she could buy ingredients for dinner.
Exercise 2.
Choose correct coordinating conjunctions to complete these following
sentences.
1. The project was difficult, _____ the team worked together and got great
results.
A. or
B. but
C. for
D. nor
2. He needed to explain the plan, _____ everyone on the team could
understand their roles.
A. for
B. but
C. so
D. yet
4. She wanted to communicate her ideas clearly, _____ the connection was
too poor.
A. for
B. but
C. so
D. nor
5. We can either explain the plan now, _____ we can wait until everyone is
here.
A. so
B. or
C. but
D. for
6. She didn’t care about the problem, _____ did she ask for help.
A. and
B. but
C. nor
D. yet
Exercise 3.
Use the coordinators to combine these following sentences into one.
1. It started raining heavily. They decided to stay indoors and play games.
=> It started raining ____________________________________________________________ .
2. Some people were still sleeping. Others had already started their day.
=> Some people _______________________________________________________________ .
4. At the end of the day, people continue to work. They spend time with their
families.
=> At the end of the day, people ______________________________________________ .
5. The teacher explained the lesson clearly. The students listened and took
notes carefully.
=> The teacher _________________________________________________________________ .
8. Not everyone has a busy day. Everyone does not spend it the same way.
=> Not everyone _______________________________________________________________ .
9. Some people were busy all day. They still found time to relax in the
evening.
=> Some people were busy ___________________________________________________ .
10. The project deadline was moved up. Everyone had to work late to
complete their tasks before the end of the day.
=> The project deadline _______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________ .
Exercise 4.
Complete these following sentences using your own ideas. Make sure
the resulting sentences are meaningful and show the connection
between 2 clauses. There is one example that has been done for you.
=> Mike failed the exam, for he did not pay attention to the teacher's
instructions.
Exercise 5.
Speaking Exercise - Complete the answers to the following IELTS
Speaking Part 1 questions.
Answer:
To begin a new day, I usually __________________________________, and ___________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Question 2: Do you prefer staying indoors or going outside during your free
time? Why?
Answer:
I prefer ____________________________________________, for ________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Question 3: How do you relax after a long day at work or school?
Answer:
I often ______________________________________, or _____________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Question 4: Is there any part of your daily routine that you dislike but cannot
avoid?
Answer:
I do not enjoy ______________________________, nor _______________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Question 5: Tell me about a time when things didn't go as planned for you.
Answer:
I planned ________________________, but __________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
UNIT 1.
WRITING PART 2
OBJECTIVES
LEAD IN
Work in pairs.
0. It was warm outside. The classroom was very cold. => Contrast
A. DEFINITION
A complex sentence is formed by combining an independent clause (main
clause) with one or more dependent clauses.
An adverbial clause:
● Is a dependent clause that functions as an adverb within a sentence.
● Provides additional information about when, where, how, or why the
action in the main clause takes place.
● Is introduced by subordinating conjunctions, which connect them to the
main clause.
● Cannot stand alone.
Examples:
⬆ ⬆
Adverbial clause Main clause
=> The adverbial clause tells us why the action of the main clause ("the concert
was delayed for 1 hour") took place.
⬆ ⬆
Main clause Adverbial clause
=> The adverbial clause modifies the verb "asked" by explaining why “I asked him
to move”.
✪ PUNCTUATION
1. If the dependent clause comes before the independent clause, a comma is
used to separate them.
Because it rained suddenly , the concert was delayed for 1 hour.
C. PURPOSE
Adverbial clauses of purpose describe the intention or goal behind an action.
They answer the question ‘for what purpose?’. They use subordinators such
as so that, in order that, etc.
Examples:
● He turned off his phone so that he could focus on his work
● She studied hard in order that she could pass the exam.
D. CONCESSION/ CONTRAST
Adverbial clauses of concession and contrast tell us about times when things
don’t go as expected. They usually start with words like although, even
though, though, while, whereas, etc.
Examples:
● Although it was expensive, he decided to buy the jacket.
● He prefers to stay home whereas his friends enjoy going out.
PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Choose correct options (A, B, C, or D) to complete these following
sentences.
1. She loves to read in the evening _________ it helps her relax after a long day.
A. so
B. although
C. while
D. since
3. She set up her workspace near the window __________ she could enjoy the
sunlight while working.
A. so that
B. although
C. when
D. but
4. _________ she didn’t sleep well last night, she woke up early to start her day.
A. Because
B. So that
C. Even though
D. Nevertheless
5. Many people chose to work from home rather than commute _________ the
roads were icy.
A. in order that
B. whereas
C. although
D. because
6. He took a quick break ________ he could stay focused for the rest of his
workday.
A. although
B. so that
C. therefore
D. whenever
7. ________ some people exercise early in the morning, others prefer to work
out in the evening.
A. Because
B. So that
C. Hence
D. Whereas
8. She finished all her chores in the morning _______ she could spend the
afternoon relaxing.
A. even though
B. because
C. whereas
D. in order that
9. _______ her friends go out every evening, she likes to spend her nights at
home.
A. Since
B. While
C. Whatever
D. In order that
10. She set several alarms _________ she did not want to miss her early morning
flight.
A. as
B. for
C. and
D. while
Exercise 2.
Fill in the blanks with given words in the box. Each word is used ONCE
only.
6. She made a detailed plan _________________ she could explain each step
clearly to the entire team.
1. The festival only happens once a year. People come from all over to
attend.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
2. She wanted to visit the museum. Her friends preferred going to the
amusement park.
=> She wanted __________________________________________________________________ .
3. She practiced every day. She could improve her skills before the
competition.
=> She practiced _______________________________________________________________ .
4. We had limited time. We should choose the quickest route to reach the
destination.
=> We should choose __________________________________________________________ .
5. The town was small. It had a rich history and unique traditions.
=> ____________________________________________________________ unique traditions.
6. Some animals are active during the day. Others come out only at night.
=> Some animals _______________________________________________________________ .
8. She felt confident during the interview. She had studied the topic well.
=> _________________________________________________________ during the interview.
9. The online course was convenient. Some students found it challenging to
stay focused at home.
=> ______________________________________________________________________ at home.
10. They had planned every detail. Unexpected issues still came up during the
event.
=> Unexpected issues __________________________________________________________ .
Exercise 4.
Paraphrase these following sentences with the given words. There is one
example (0) that has been done for you.
0. Mike failed the exam, for he did not pay attention to the teacher's
instructions. (SINCE)
⇒ Since Mike did not pay attention to the teacher’s instructions, he failed
the exam.
2. While he wanted to continue his studies, his family needed him to start
working. (BUT)
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
3. She likes classical music, but her brother prefers jazz. (WHEREAS)
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
4. The movie was entertaining, yet it didn’t have much depth. (ALTHOUGH)
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
6. As he wanted to stay healthy, he joined the gym and started a new diet.
(SO)
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
7. Although she prefers to work independently, she joined the team project to
learn new skills and support her colleagues. (BUT)
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
8. He took extra notes during class, so he could remember all the important
details for the final exam. (SINCE)
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
Exercise 5.
Speaking Exercise - Complete the answers to the following IELTS
Speaking Part 1 questions.
Answer:
At weekend, I usually _________________________________ so that _________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Answer:
My favorite kind of weather is __________________________ since _________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Question 3: What kind of exercise do you prefer?
Answer:
Whereas some people like_____________________, I enjoy _______________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Answer:
Although I used to love______________________, now _____________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
UNIT 1.
WRITING PART 3
OBJECTIVES
LEAD IN
1. Each student takes turns to find someone using the given structure:
Examples:
● I want to find someone who wears glasses.
● I want to find someone who is taller than me
● I want to find someone who has a ruler.
2. If any student can satisfy the description, he/she gets 1 point. If no one can
satisfy the description, the student who describes gets 2 points.
RELATIVE CLAUSES
A relative clause is a group of words with a subject and a verb that gives more
information about someone or something. We can use relative clauses to
combine clauses without repeating information.
There are two types of relative clauses:
● Type 1: These relative clauses add more information to a noun, a noun
phrase or a pronoun.
○ Defining relative clauses (no comma, gives essential information)
○ Non-defining relative clauses (with comma, adds extra information)
● Type 2: These relative clauses add more information to a clause.
A. TYPE 1
This type of relative clause adds extra information to the noun or noun phrase
before it. There are two sub types:
This is the park. We had a picnic last summer here (the park).
=> In this case, the relative clause “we had a picnic last summer" adds essential
information to the noun phrase “the park". It helps the reader know the specific
“park" that the sentence is talking about.
A2. Non-defining relative clauses
● Give extra information about the person or thing
● Usually begin and end with commas (,)
● CAN’T start with the relative pronoun “that"
Example:
Mrs. Green is very popular among students. She (Mrs. Green) teaches English.
=> In this case, the relative clause “who teaches English" adds extra information
to the person “Mrs. Green". The readers don't need the relative clause to
understand the specific person that the sentence is talking about.
B. TYPE 2
This type of relative clause:
● Add more information to a whole clause/sentence
● Always start with the relative pronoun “which"
● Require a comma (,) before “which"
Example:
She finally decided to take a break. The fact that she finally decided to
take a break helped her feel better.
=> In this case, the relative clause “which helped her feel better" adds more
information to the sentence “She finally decided to take a break."
RELATIVE PRONOUNS & ADVERBS
A relative clause usually starts with a relative pronoun or adverb: who, which,
that, whom, whose, where, when, why, etc.
There are 3 types of relative pronouns:
The girl who / that (S) loves (V) reading books is my best friend.
I just bought a dress which/ that (S) matches (V) my favorite shoes.
The teacher whom/that (O) I (S) admire (V) the most is very inspiring.
● “Which or that” if the modified noun refers to things
This is the song. Everyone has been talking about the song.
This is a song which/that (O) everyone (S) has been talking (V) about.
✏️ Note:
In informal settings, object relative pronouns can be omitted from the relative
clauses
● Formal setting/Writing
This is a song which/that everyone has been talking about.
● Informal setting/Speaking
This is a song everyone has been talking about.
The country has beautiful landscapes. She was born in that country.
They moved to the countryside. The reason for this was to find a quieter life.
The reason why they moved to the countryside was to find a quieter life
PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Choose the correct options to complete these following sentences.
2. She likes to visit the café _______ they serve the best pastries in town.
A. where
B. which
C. who
D. whose
3. The reason ______ I exercise regularly is to stay healthy and fit.
A. that
B. why
C. which
D. whom
4. The manager ______ you spoke to earlier will handle your request.
A. which
B. who
C. that
D. what
5. My grandfather, ______ built this house himself, lives here alone now.
A. whom
B. which
C. that
D. who
6. She bought a phone _____ has an amazing camera.
A. whose
B. whom
C. which
D. where
7. The evening ______ we all have dinner together is my favorite time of the
week.
A. when
B. whose
C. which
D. whom
9. My brother, _______ takes the bus to work every day, prefers public
transportation.
A. where
B. who
C. whom
D. whose
10. She explained the reason ______ she did not go to work this morning.
A. that
B. when
C. which
D. why
Exercise 2.
Fill in the blanks with the words in the box. Each word can be used
MORE THAN ONCE.
1. The park, ____________ my children play after school, is near my house.
2. I have a friend ____________ can play the guitar very well.
3. The book ____________ I borrowed from the library is due tomorrow.
4. She passed her exam with high scores, ___________ made her parents happy.
6. The restaurant ____________ we had dinner last night is very well-known for
its service.
7. She loves her cat, ____________ always follows her around the house.
10. They decided to cancel the event, ____________ disappointed many people.
Exercise 3.
Using relative clauses to combine these following sentences into one.
Add the comma (,) where necessary. There is an example (0) that has
been done for you.
0. My friend invited me to join a trail this weekend. She loves hiking.
2. We visited a village. The houses in that village are built from stone.
=> We visited ___________________________________________________________________ .
3. The garden smells wonderful in the spring. This garden is full of roses.
=> The garden __________________________________________________________________ .
4. I remember the day. We went to the amusement park together on that day.
=> I remember __________________________________________________________________ .
6. I have a friend. This friend volunteers at the animal shelter every weekend.
=> I have a friend _______________________________________________________________ .
7. They arrived earlier than expected. This gave us more time to prepare.
=> They arrived _________________________________________________________________ .
8. I met a woman at the conference. She works for a well-known company.
=> I met __________________________________________________________________________ .
9. The family’s home was damaged by the storm. They are receiving help
from neighbors.
=> The family ___________________________________________________________________ .
Exercise 4.
Complete these sentences with your own ideas.
SPEAKING ACTIVITY
● Each group tries to give hints to help the representative guess the
object/person.
Example: TV
⚠️ If the group uses another structure to give hints, they will lose 1 point.
UNIT 1.
WRITING PART 4
OBJECTIVES
LEAD IN
Examples:
0. The bag that I lost yesterday was found. => C
✘ Error example: The company which makes these products are based
in Japan.
✘ Error example: The woman WHOM we spoke to HER was very kind.
Exercise 1.
Read these following sentences carefully. Identify the mistakes and
correct the errors. There is one example that has been done for you.
2. The people who work in that office is very friendly and helpful.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
3. Paris, where is famous for its cuisine, attracts tourists from all over.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
4. The teacher who explains things clearly help the students understand
better.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
6. His birthday, when was last Friday, was celebrated with a big party.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
7. The library, where I often study there, has a wonderful collection of books.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
8. I am looking for the blue T-shirt, which my mom gave it to me last birthday.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
9. He’s a writer whose his novels are loved by many readers.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
10. My neighbor, whom I invited her to the party, brought a lovely gift.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
OTHER SENTENCE ERRORS
To decide if a sentence has errors or not, we first need to understand what is
defined as a sentence.
C. SENTENCE
Every sentence must contain at least a subject and a verb and express a
complete thought.
Examples:
● My mother is a doctor.
(S) (V)
● The cat and the dog are playing together outside.
(S) (V)
3. After a long day → The fragment above lacks both a subject and a verb.
=> Complete sentence: After a long day, we feel so tired.
4. She going to the store later. -> This fragment lacks the helping/ auxiliary
verb.
=> Complete sentence: She is going to the store later.
5. Finally, he to speak out loud his thoughts. -> This fragment lacks the
main verb.
=> Complete sentence: Finally, he speaks out loud his thoughts./
Finally, he decided to speak out loud his thoughts.
6. Although he was tired -> This fragment has incomplete meaning.
=> Complete sentence: Although he was tired, he finished his homework.
E. PROGRESS CHECK
Exercise 2.
Read these following statements. Identify the errors and rewrite them
correctly.
2. I missed the bus, while I had to wait for a long time.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
8. Car / break down / on / way / yet / he / still / reach / home / safe.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
9. man / who / work / tirelessly / this / project / months / finally / see / fruits
/ labor.
=> ________________________________________________________________________________ .
Answer:
The activity that I enjoy doing is ________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
Answer:
The country which I want to visit is _____________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
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__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
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UNIT 2.
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
MULTIPLE-CHOICE QUESTIONS
Read the following questions (1-7) on Writing Task 2 and guess
the correct answers.
1. How much time do you have for Writing
Task 2?
A. 60 minutes
B. 40 minutes
C. 20 minutes
● You should spend the first 5 minutes brainstorming for ideas and the
last 5 minutes checking your essay for mistakes (grammar, spelling,
punctuation...)
● Writing Task 2 has two parts: the topic and the task type.
● The topic is the situation given in the prompt, or what you should
write about in your essay; for example: family, the environment, or
health.
● The task type is usually the question, or what the examiners want you
to do with the topic. Some common task types are “agree or
disagree” , “advantage or disadvantage”, “discuss both views”, and
“problem-solution”.
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
c. Bad habits are not easy to break b. Explain why we think breaking
bad habits is hard or easy
c. Write about the disadvantages
of bad habits
c. The good and bad sides of b. Write about the good and bad
computers sides of of our dependence on
computers
c. Give reasons why computers
are good for us
a. People need to spend more time with their families than at work. To what
extent do you agree with this view?
1. What is the topic? => The topic is “people should work less and spend
more time with their families.”
2. What should you write about the topic? => I should write if I agree
/disagree that people should work less and spend more time with
families and give the reasons for my opinion.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
c. Many teenagers use the Internet daily. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of this trend?
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
d. People nowadays spend more time sitting than being active. What is the
cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this?
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
f. In some countries, it is getting harder for young people to find work. What
do you think are the causes of this problem and what are some solutions to
this problem?
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
HOMEWORK
C. MATCHING
Exercise 3.
Matching the prompts (1-10) with the correct topics (A-E) and task types
(i-iv). Each prompt may match with more than one topic.
B. Technology
ii. Agree or Disagree
OBJECTIVES
Brainstorming
Steps to Mindmapping
2. Write as many ideas related to the topic as you can think of. The
ideas should be written in phrases or words, NOT in sentences. At
this stage, don't care about grammar or if the ideas are good or bad
3. Use symbols and drawings (lines, arrows, etc.) and numbering (1,2,3)
to show the relationships among ideas (main ideas and their
supporting ideas, causes and effects, etc.)
4. Cross out bad ideas (too general, too limited, not related to the topic,
etc.)
A. INDIVIDUAL MINDMAP
On your own, read the prompt below and practice mind mapping. Work quickly.
Don’t worry about how good each idea is. Don’t worry about spelling and
grammar either. Just try to create a lot of ideas, as many as possible, within a
few minutes.
BRAINSTORMING AREA:
BRAINSTORMING AREA:
HOMEWORK
D. MATCH IDEAS
Exercise 1.
Look at the following prompt. Then decide where to put the items in the
table. The first one has been done for you as an example.
make junk food more expensive play computer games more than sports
OBJECTIVES
LEAD IN
1. What is the topic of the paragraph? 2. What’s the writer's most important
A. English opinion about the topic?
C. The writer’s teacher B. It’s easy to find ways to practice
English
C. English is a very useful subject
Supporting Sentences
● Give information that explains and expands the main idea expressed
by the topic sentence.
● Answer questions – who? what? when? why? and how? about the
main idea – and give details.
● Can have many goals:
A. Give reasons: Lukas quit school because he has found a really
good job.
B. Give facts: More than 10% of the student population is
international.
C. Give examples: For example, most Vietnamese students love
Maths.
D. Define: Many tourists visit Bangkok, which is the capital and
largest city in Thailand.
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
2. Reading novels, such as the Twilight series, can help students improve
their English.
3. A water park is a perfect place for this year’s school trip.
4. Going to school instead of staying home was the best decision.
B. MATCH SENTENCES
Exercise 2.
Match the supporting sentences (1-4) with corresponding topic
sentences (A and B).
A. Learning maths can be really easy since there are many ways to
practice.
B. Maths is a really useful subject
1. According to research, students with good math scores in high schools
earn more money when they start working. _______________
2. Shopping is a great opportunity to learn maths because we always need to
calculate how much money we can spend on one item. _______________
3. By easy I mean we can learn it both in the classroom and in our daily life.
_______________
4. For example, maths is very important if you want to learn business or
engineering, and these two careers pay very well. _______________
C. CATEGORIZE
Exercise 3.
Match the supporting sentences (1-4) from Exercise 2 with the
corresponding goals listed below.
(a) give reasons (b) give facts (c) give (d) define
examples
HOMEWORK
D. MATCH SENTENCES
Exercise 4.
Match the supporting sentences (1-8) with corresponding topic
sentences (A and B).
A. Low-fat diets are an excellent way to stay healthy and slim.
B. High-protein diets are favoured by athletes and competitors.
2. _______ They are preferred by the general public because they help
with weight reduction.
8. _______ A low-fat diet is a diet that includes lean meat and lots of
vegetables.
E. CATEGORIZE
Exercise 5.
Match the supporting sentences (1-8) from Exercise 4 with
corresponding goals listed below.
(a) give reasons (b) give facts (c) give (d) define
examples
UNIT 2.
WRITING PART 4
OBJECTIVES
THEORY
● Depending on your paragraph style, you may want to ask and answer
questions like who? what? when? why? and how? about the main
idea to help you think of the supporting ideas. You don’t need to use
all of these question words, pick the ones that fit the topic sentence.
● Think about how you would organize your paragraph: which
information comes first? which information should come later?.
● Note: A paragraph may also include a concluding sentence that
paraphrases the topic sentence but this sentence is not a must.
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
3. Bad topic sentence: Schools should force students to wear uniforms, but
maybe not.
Why bad: __________________________________________________________________
New topic sentence: ______________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
B. ASK QUESTIONS FOR SUPPORTING SENTENCE
Exercise 2.
Read each topic sentence (1-4). What information would you expect the
writer to include in the paragraph? Write a question that the supporting
sentences should answer. Use a who? what? where? when? why? or
how? question. The first sentence has been done for you.
1. Since 2008, every student in Malaysia has been required to wear uniforms.
=> Why must every student in Malaysia wear a uniform?
4. There are many benefits to wearing uniforms, even outside the school.
=> _________________________________________________________________________
A. Why would students feel equal to their peers when wearing uniforms?
=> When every student needs to wear the same clothes, which have the
same style and quality, the students won’t be able to show if they are
rich or poor. Thus, everyone will feel equal to one another.
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Write a paragraph using one topic from Exercise 3. Remember: the first
sentence should be the topic sentence and the following sentences are
supporting sentences (use Exercise 3 to help you). An example has been
done for you.
[Topic Sentence] When you learn English with friends, it can be very fun
and helpful. [Why fun?] When you do things with people you know, you
will be more relaxed and can actually enjoy yourself, even when learning.
[Why helpful?] It is easier to make mistakes and recognize others’
mistakes when it comes to friends. We won’t feel shy or uncomfortable
anymore, as friends are people whom we can trust. [Conclude] If you
want to succeed in learning English and have some fun, try to learn it with
friends.
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HOMEWORK
E. WRITE A PARAGRAPH
Exercise 5.
Write a paragraph using the remaining topic from Exercise 3. Remember:
the first sentence should be the topic sentence and the following
sentences are supporting sentences.
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UNIT 4.
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
6. A good pair of shoes can give you the feeling of COMFORT even after a
long day of walking.
A. a feeling of physical or emotional ease
B. the ability to think of new ideas
C. the way how people use money
PRACTICE
A. OUTLINING
Exercise 1.
Use the given ideas in the box to complete the following outline for the
paragraph of “Wearing uniforms can have negative effects.” There are
TWO extra ideas that you don't need to use.
not customized to each student frustrating for those who are finding
out their identities
make students feel like they have to wear the same clothes helps reduce
obey the rules pressure to buy expensive or
fashionable clothes
OUTLINE
▸ Limit self-expression:
● clothes: (0) way to show uniqueness
● uniform: restrict the freedom of choice
=> (1) _____________________________________________________________________
=> (2) _____________________________________________________________________
▸ Uncomfortable + impractical
● Uniforms: (3) _____________________________________________________________
=> not fit well, made from uncomfortable material
=> (4) _____________________________________________________________________
▸ (5) ____________________________________________________________________________
● Children body change and grow => school require specific uniform for
each year => costly
● Conclusion: increase equality but affect comfort, creativity, and finances.
B. PARAGRAPH WRITING
Exercise 2.
Use the above outline to write a paragraph starting with this topic
sentence: “Wearing uniforms can have negative effects”
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UNIT 5.
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
THEORY
Prior to writing any essay, you need to analyze the given prompt:
● First, identify the topic words, which show the general topic of the
prompt.
● Then, identify micro-topic words, which show you which specific
part of the main topic that you need to discuss.
● Finally, identify the instruction words, which show the task types (i.e.
agree/disagree - cause/solution).
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
Recently, eating out is becoming more and more common. [GENERAL
TOPIC]
However, many people believe that cooking and eating at home are
better for the individuals and the families than eating out at
restaurants or canteens. [SPECIFIC TOPIC]
C. DISCUSS IN PAIRS
Exercise 3.
In pairs, discuss with a partner to choose which side (agree or disagree)
that you will both work on, and which two supporting ideas you want to
use to argue.
“Personally, I disagree with the statement since I find eating out much
more convenient than cooking and eating at home. Going to restaurants or
canteens means that people don’t need to spend so much time buying
ingredients, cooking, and cleaning up. This, in my opinion, gives them
more time to take care of other important family duties. For example, many
parents nowadays work long hours and thus have little time left for their
children at the end of the day. In such cases, it's much better for them to
take their children out to eat at restaurants than to spend hours on
cooking. This way, the parents will have more time to talk to their children
and help with their school work. This in turn will help strengthen their
bonds with the kids.”
QUESTIONS:
F. BRAINSTORM
Exercise 6.
Use the plan below to brainstorm supporting ideas for TWO more
reasons from Exercise 2.
AGREE DISAGREE
Example Example
UNIT 5.
WRITING PART 2
OBJECTIVES
● learn phrases for expressing opinions
THEORY
“Personally, I disagree with the statement since I find eating out much
more convenient than cooking and eating at home. Going to restaurants
or canteens means people don’t need to spend so much time buying
ingredients, cooking, and cleaning up. This, in my opinion, gives them
more time to take care of other important family duties. For example,
many parents nowadays work long hours and thus don't have very little
time left to spend with their kids at the end of the day. In such cases, it's
much better for them to take the children out to eat at restaurants than
to spend hours on cooking. This way, the parents will have more time to
talk to their children and help with their school work. This in turn will
undoubtedly help strengthen their bonds with the kids.”
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
Exercise 2.
Fill in the gaps with for example, such as, or since. Add commas where
necessary. There may be more than one correct answer.
1. When you visit the ethnic neighborhoods of Miami, you feel that you are in a
foreign country. ________________ in Little Havana you can easily imagine that
the average July temperature in San Francisco is about 65°F, but it is 85°F in
Los Angeles.
3. Mexico's Yucatan Peninsula has many luxury beach resorts, _________________
the region has many beautiful beaches and is located near the capital city of
Mexico.
Exercise 3.
Fill in the gaps with the expressions for giving opinions, reasons and
examples given in the theory box below. The first one has been done for
you.
(1) (opinion) In my opinion, tourists should always try local food whenever they
when I visited Paris last year, I took great joy in trying the wide range of local
dishes available. French dishes are cooked in millions of different ways with all
I never got fed up with the food despite my long stay there. What’s more, the
meals I enjoyed there also taught me a lot about French culture. Unlike the typical
American meal, French meals usually consist of many courses and can take up to
2 hours. (reason) This may be (5) ______________________ the French like to take
Many people say that cooking and eating at home are better for the
individuals and the families than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
C. EDIT
Spend at least 5 minutes on re-reading your paragraph. Check for
possible mistakes and problems. Use the check-list below to help you.
HOMEWORK
A. WRITE A PARAGRAPH
Exercise 5.
Write ONE paragraph to respond to the prompt in Exercise 4. However,
this time you should argue for the opposite viewpoint.
B. EDIT
Spend no less than 5 minutes on re-reading your paragraph. Check for
possible mistakes and problems. Use the check-list below to help you.
OBJECTIVES
● Correct the essay writing homework for this lesson Unit 5:
Supplementary Writing Part 1 and 2
● Review agree/disagree paragraph
LANGUAGE INPUT
Exercise 1.
Choose the best definition for the CAPITALIZED word in the following
sentences.
1. She ate the whole extra-large pizza by herself IN ONE SITTING.
A. completed without taking any breaks
B. happening unexpectedly or without planning
C. repeatedly or happening all the time
2. An EXCESS of fast food in one’s diet can harm overall health.
A. a rise in the amount or number
B. an amount that goes beyond what’s necessary
C. the typical amount, level, or standard of something
3. The high CONSUMPTION of fast food is related to rising obesity rates.
A. the act of giving one thing for another
B. the act of removing or wiping out something
C. the act of using up resources or goods
4. He set a monthly BUDGET to limit his spending on fast food.
A. a detailed outline for achieving a goal
B. a plan for managing money or expenses
C. the process of experiencing new things
5. McDonald's is a well-known fast-food CHAIN with locations worldwide.
A. a connected series of businesses or locations
B. a local office or location of a larger organization
C. an organization that provides goods or services
6. The sugar CONTENT in many fast foods is surprisingly high.
A. the ideas in a piece of writing, speech, or film
B. a set of instructions for preparing a meal
C. the amount of a substance contained in something
OUTLINING EXERCISE
Exercise 2.
Use the given ideas in the box to complete the following outline for the
AGREE paragraph of “Fast food is responsible for increased obesity.”
There are TWO extra ideas that you don't need to use.
Fast food: high in calories and unhealthy substances (sugar, unhealthy fat)
OUTLINE
▸(4) ____________________________________________________________________________
● target children and teens with attractive images and deals
=> (5) _____________________________________________________________________
=> obesity later in life.
Conclusion: High-calorie content, convenience, and marketing make fast food
a major contributing factor to higher obesity rates.
PARAGRAPH WRITING
Exercise 3.
Use the outline you have finished to write a paragraph starting with this
topic sentence: “I agree that fast food is responsible for increased
obesity.”
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UNIT 6.
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
● identify complete sentences and fragments
● write simple sentences
LEAD IN
Which of the following are sentences? Which are not and why?
1. He is a writer.
2. My father and my mother don’t cook
3. The IELTS contains four different tests
4. In the living room
5. The final exam very easy
6. A woman in the corner
7. I like reading novels
THEORY
He a writer. He is a writer.
The final exam very easy. The final exam was very easy.
The recording will heard once The recording will be heard once only.
only. (passive voice)
✏️ Note that the second sentence has two subjects, my father and my mother.
This is called a compound subject. The third sentence has a compound verb,
and the last sentence has a compound subject and a compound verb. They
are all simple sentences because they contain only one clause.
PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
● Write S next to the complete sentences and F next to the
fragments.
● For the complete sentences, circle the subject and underline the
complete verb.
● For the fragments, add, remove or change ONE word to turn the
fragments into sentences.
Examples:
1. Pho is a famous Vietnamese food. __S__
3. The dish consists of rice noodles, broth, beef and herbs.
5. Pho first appeared in the early 20th century, but its exact origins still
debated.
6. Some think that pho was inspired by the French, while others believe
that it came from China.
7. Nonetheless, Vietnamese people today to consider pho fully Vietnamese.
8. There are many different styles of pho such as Hanoi and Saigon styles.
9. Many new pho variants been invented, such as pho cuon or pho xao.
Exercise 2.
Use given words to form complete sentences. There is an example that
has been done for you.
Example:
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6. She / often / walk / along / beach / in / afternoon / and / enjoy / sunset.
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Exercise 3.
Arrange the following words to make the complete sentence.
Example:
0. museum / the bakery. / is / The / near
=> The museum is near the bakery.
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2. sings / beautifully / plays / the / and / piano / She / skill. / with / great
=> _______________________________________________________________________________
3. grow / spring / quickly / season. / and / The / flowers / trees / during /
the.
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6. teacher / The / and / discusses / topic / the / books. / the / notes /
students / write / and / in / their
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7. use / laptop / for / prefers / old / to / sister / My / work. / typing / her
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9. room / the / happily. / sings / and / little / dances / The / in / living / girl
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Exercise 4.
Exercise 5.
Choose the best options to complete these following sentences.
Exercise 6.
Use your own ideas to complete the following sentences. There is an
example (0) that has been done for you.
Example:
=> The girl with the blue T-shirt is the president of the English club.
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7. One of the most famous stars ___________
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SPEAKING ACTIVITY
Exercise 7.
Work in pairs.
You should ask and answer at least 3 questions for each topic.
Example (topic 1)
B: She is a singer.
B: I like her because her songs are amazing. I like the song “You
belong with me” most.
UNIT 6.
WRITING PART 2
OBJECTIVES
● write compound sentences using FANBOYS
● write complex sentences with Adverbial Clauses, Relative Clauses, and
Noun Clauses
LEAD IN
A dependent clause also includes a subject and a verb but does not express a
complete thought. If begins with a subordinator such as when, while, because,
if, or that. A dependent clause by itself is a fragment.
● If he is a writer
● When my father and mother don’t cook
● Because the IELTS contains four different test
COMPOUND SENTENCES
Coordinating
Function Examples
conjunction
For Used to Cats don’t like water, for they’re not ocean
add a reason. or river animals.
And Used to add a Cats like eating fish, and they enjoy eating
similar, equal idea. mice.
Nor Used to add a Cats don’t like water, nor do they like dirty
negative equal litter boxes.
idea.
*Note: nor means and not. It joins two negative
independent clauses. After “nor”, you should
use inversion (question word order).
But Used to add an Cats don’t like water, but they love warm
opposite idea. places.
Yet Used to add an Cats don’t like water, yet they’re willing to
unexpected or get wet to catch some fish.
surprising
continuation.
🌟 A complex sentence contains one independent clause and one (or more)
dependent clause(s). In a complex sentence, we place the more important
idea in the independent clause and the less important idea in the dependent
clause.
Examples:
Although native speakers are you don’t need to be one to get the job.
preferred,
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Dependent clause Independent clause
You are supposed to bring your ID when you arrive at the testing center.
⬆ ⬆
Independent clause Dependent clause
ADVERBIAL CLAUSE
An adverbial clause acts like an adverb. It tells you the when, where, why and
how.
An adverbial clause begins with a subordinating conjunction such as although,
because, when, and if. It can come before or after the independent clause.
● Although native speakers are preferred, you don’t need to be one to get
the job.
● You are supposed to bring your ID when you arrive at the testing center.
RELATIVE CLAUSE
NOUN CLAUSE
A noun clause begins with a wh- question word, that, whether and sometimes
if.
A noun clause acts like a noun and can be the subject or object of an
independent clause.
● We still don’t know what causes the phenomenon.
● That the students were unprepared for the presentation is not acceptable.
In the first sentence, “what causes the phenomenon” is the object of the verb
“know”. In the second sentence, “That the students were unprepared for the
presentation” is the subject of the verb “is”.
PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Write (I) next to independent clauses and put a period (.) after them.
Write (D) next to dependent clauses.
Examples:
1. It is important to have enough sleep the night before. __I__
2. When you finish the test __D__
4. During the test, a timer will be displayed in a visible location _____
Exercise 2.
Form a compound sentence by joining the independent clauses below
with an appropriate coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) that best fits
the meaning.
Example:
0. We drove home. We went to bed.
=> We drove home, and we went to bed.
1. I can have a week in Rome. I can go to Paris for three days.
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2. I have never visited Moscow. I have also not been to St Petersburg.
=> _________________________________________________________________________
3. The pain was really bad. He refused to see a doctor.
=> _________________________________________________________________________
7. We wanted to visit our friends. We didn't have enough money to get a
flight.
=> _________________________________________________________________________
Exercise 3.
Form compound sentences by adding another independent clause to the
following independent clauses.
Example:
0. The cinema was sold out, so
=> The cinema was sold out, so we watched movies at home.
Exercise 4.
For each sentence below, put round brackets ( ) around the independent
clause and square brackets [ ] around the dependent clause of each
sentence. Underline the subordinators.
Exercise 5.
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SPEAKING ACTIVITY
Exercise 8.
Answer these following IELTS speaking questions. You should use the
suggested structure to begin your answers.
I love ________________________________________________because________________
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UNIT 6.
WRITING PART 3
OBJECTIVES
✔ is an academic essay
Examples:
Many cities face major problems regarding traffic jams and congestion.
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Topic Topic
What causes these problems and what are some possible solutions?
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Task 1 Task 2
PRACTICE
A. MULTIPLE CHOICE
Exercise 1.
Look at the following essay questions and choose the answer that
expresses the correct topic.
a. Causes of problem
b. Effects of problem
c. Benefits of solution
d. Solutions to problem
e. Drawbacks of solution
1. Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some
of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
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2. Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. Why is this a
problem? What could be done about the housing shortage?
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3. Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What causes
this problem? How does this problem affect individuals and society in
general?
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4. Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. Some people
suggest cities should build more houses to address this situation. What are
the advantages and disadvantages of this suggestion?
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C. CATEGORIZE INFORMATION
Exercise 3.
Below is a list of ideas that a student has brainstormed for the Task 2
prompt above. Classify these ideas under CAUSES and SOLUTIONS,
Some ideas are not relevant and will need to be eliminated.
HOMEWORK
D. IDENTIFY INFORMATION
Exercise 4.
Read the following essay prompts and identify the topic and task(s) of
each question.
1. New technologies such as the smart fridge, smart cabinets, and robots
make home life much easier for people. What are the advantages and
disadvantages of using smart technologies at home?
Topic ___________________________________________________________________________
Task(s) _________________________________________________________________________
2. New technologies have changed the way children spend their leisure time.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Topic ___________________________________________________________________________
Task(s) _________________________________________________________________________
3. An increasing number of people now using the Internet to meet new people
and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together
while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides
and give your opinion.
Topic ___________________________________________________________________________
Task(s) _________________________________________________________________________
UNIT 6.
WRITING PART 4
OBJECTIVES
🧠 Brainstorming tips
✔ Use WH-questions to generate ideas: Why? Who? What? How?
✔ If the Tasks are related, e.g., Causes and Solutions, it may help to
brainstorm each Cause with a corresponding Solution
Examples:
PRACTICE
A. BRAINSTORM IDEAS
Exercise 1.
Look at the following essay questions and brainstorm some ideas using
the techniques above.
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city
life can be extremely difficult.
What are some problems of living in a city? How can governments make
urban life better for everyone?
HOMEWORK
D. BRAINSTORMING
Exercise 2.
Read the following Task 2 prompt and brainstorm ideas for the question.
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UNIT 8.
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
Fill in the gaps with the appropriate words as given in the box
below.
3. It should not take you too long to write (around 4 min max).
Examples:
PROMPT
Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or
sports stars) should not be paid too much money. Do you agree or
disagree?
MODEL INTRODUCTION
1st SENTENCE
Topic: Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or
sports stars) should not be paid too much money.
Topic restatement:
Some people argue/believe that celebrities’ income should not be too high.
2nd SENTENCE
Conclusion writing:
A good conclusion of Task 2 should:
● be only 1-2 sentences long
● start with a signpost (In conclusion/ To conclude/ In short)
● go hand-in-hand with the introduction (i.e. it restates the same option
that you introduce at the beginning)
● not be an exact copy of the introduction. Paraphrase!
● not include a new idea
Example:
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
=> It is argued that music, art, and drama are no less important than other
subjects, especially for elementary school students. Personally, I fully agree
with this opinion.
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2. It is claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports
person or musician. Do you agree or disagree? (Agree)
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HOMEWORK
C. WRITING PRACTICE
Exercise 3.
Write an introduction and a conclusion for the following prompts (1-2).
Many people in the music business feel that people who download music
illegally should be given higher fines. Do you agree or disagree?
Introduction
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Conclusion
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It is claimed that these days people pay more attention to artists (writers,
painters, and so on) and give less importance to those who work in
science and technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction
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UNIT 8.
WRITING PART 2
OBJECTIVES
● develop paragraphs using reasons and results
● use a variety of expressions of reasons and results
THEORY
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
MAIN PROMPT
Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports
stars) should not be paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
A. PARAGRAPH OUTLINING
Paragraph 1:
Topic sentence (Main idea/Reason): Because people doing other jobs work
equally hard or harder but don’t get paid as much.
Supporting Sentences
B. GAP-FILLING
Exercise 1.
Complete the first body paragraph. Circle the expression/signposts of
reasons or results.
The first reason why celebrities should not be paid excessively high income
lies in the fact that (1) ___________________________________________________________
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On one hand, entertainers only produce their work once and use it to earn
money continually. For example, a singer can produce just one song and
perform it many times after that. Each performance only takes them around 5
minutes but brings back a good amount of compensation. On the other hand,
workers of other jobs do not get paid what they deserve despite their hard
work. For instance, teachers (2) ________________________________________________
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However, they cannot reuse the same lesson plan for all classes, even of the
same level, because (3) _________________________________________________________
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C. PARAGRAPH WRITING
Exercise 2.
Now write the second body paragraph. You should write about 80-100
words.
Focus on:
● Expressions of reasons and results
● Subject - Verb agreement (singular vs. plural)
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HOMEWORK
D. PARAGRAPH WRITING
Exercise 3.
Write one body paragraph in which you develop one main idea for the
following prompt. Remember to apply signposts/expressions of reasons
and results in your writing.
📒 You already have the introduction and conclusion of this in Unit 8 Writing
Part 1.
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UNIT 8.
WRITING PART 3
OBJECTIVES
● review the result of Agree/Disagree essay
● identify Coherence and Cohesion mistakes in IELTS Agree/Disagree
essays
● practice improving Agree/Disagree essays in terms of Coherence and
Cohesion
THEORY
Key concepts:
✔ Thesis statement: This sentence states the writer’s main opinion and will
be supported by all the ideas in the whole essay. It’s usually the last
sentence in the introduction.
✔ Topic sentence: This sentence states the main idea of a paragraph. It’s
usually the first sentence in the paragraph.
✔ Coherence: Ideas are clearly organized and flow logically from one to
another.
✔ Cohesion: Correct use of cohesive devices such as discourse markers
and pronouns to link sentences and paragraphs.
How to improve coherence and cohesion:
✔ Before writing, you should make an outline to make sure that your ideas are
organized and logical.
✔ All topic sentences should support the thesis statement.
✔ All supporting sentences in a paragraph should support the topic sentence.
✔ Use discourse markers to connect sentences and paragraphs. Make sure
you use discourse markers correctly as well.
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Read the sample essay and complete the outline that follows.
It is true that in the current era of modern technology, letter writing has
greatly declined in popularity. Nevertheless, I don’t think that this skill will one
day go extinct.
Firstly, not everyone can afford the luxury of purchasing and utilizing
electronic devices. There are many people living in poor or remote areas of
the world who lack access to computers or mobile phones. Even if these
devices are available, Internet services in these places might be too
unreliable or expensive. Some of these people even lack access to basic
human needs such as food and running water in their households.
Hand-written letters might be their only possible means of long-distance
communication.
In conclusion, I believe that letter writing will never die out completely. It
may be less popular now due to communication technology, but there are still
many occasions when a letter is the most appropriate or necessary form of
communication.
OUTLINE
(you may use shorthand/ notes to fill in the gaps)
Body paragraph 2:
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Body paragraph 3:
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Exercise 2.
From the thesis statement and the topic sentences, can you guess the
prompt of this IELTS Writing Task 2?
Your answer:
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Exercise 3.
These body paragraphs each contain some sentences that do not
support the topic sentence. Improve this coherence by identifying these
extra sentences and crossing them out.
(1) Firstly, not everyone can afford the luxury of purchasing and utilizing
electronic devices. (2) There are many people living in poor or remote areas of
the world who lack access to computers or mobile phones. (3) Even if these
devices are available, Internet services in these places might be too unreliable
or expensive. (4) Some of these people even lack access to basic human
needs such as food and running water in their households. (5) Hand-written
letters might be their only possible means of long-distance communication.
(6) In my opinion, there are times when there is no alternative to writing a letter.
(7) Letters are generally more formal and carefully composed than emails or
text messages. (8) This makes them more suitable for occasions when
formality is necessary, such as in legal matters, official complaints, and formal
letters of thanks or sympathy. (9) Letters of thanks or sympathy are especially
important when one wants to establish good relationships.
Exercise 4.
Underline the best discourse markers to improve the cohesion of the
body paragraphs.
Firstly, not everyone can afford the luxury of purchasing and utilizing electronic
devices. There are many people living in poor or remote areas of the world who
lack access to computers or mobile phones. (1) Furthermore / Despite, even if
these devices are available, Internet services in these places might be too
unreliable or expensive. Some of these people even lack access to basic
human needs such as food and running water in their households. (2) In
addition / As a result, hand-written letters might be their only possible means
of long-distance communication.
(3) Secondly / Next, in my opinion, there are times when there is no alternative
to writing a letter. Letters are generally more formal and carefully composed
than emails or text messages. This makes them more suitable for occasions
when formality is necessary, such as in legal matters, official complaints, and
formal letters of thanks or sympathy. Letters of thanks or sympathy are
especially important when one wants to establish good relationships.
Exercise 5.
Write the introduction and the first body paragraph in response to the
correct prompt in Exercise 2. You must pick the side opposite to the one
in the model essay (Agree). As you write, aim for:
OBJECTIVES
THEORY
The theory for this session is delivered through the guided discovery activity
(In-Class Activities Exercise 1). Make sure you take notes during the lesson.
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
A. ANSWERING QUESTIONS
Exercise 1.
Read the sample essay and answer the questions that follow.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of zoos? Do you think keeping
animals in zoos is a good practice?
It is a common knowledge that keeping animals in zoos brings about
both advantages and disadvantages. I personally believe that the demerits far
outweigh the merits.
The most obvious benefit of zoos is that they are ideal choices for
family outings. Viewing wild animals always brings great delight to both
parents and children since it helps satisfy their curiosity about the natural
world. In addition, zoos can be very educational. For example, it has been
proved that the practice of viewing animals helps children develop empathy
towards other creatures that share the same planet with them. Besides, many
zoos have audio guides that teach children about ecosystems and the
importance of taking care of the Earth.
Despite all the upsides mentioned above, the fact that animals are kept
in zoos poses several problems, the first of which is zoochosis. This illness
mainly affects animals in captivity and it makes them experience extreme
depression. Regardless of the effort that zoos put into recreating the natural
habitats, they cannot provide animals with the great expanses of open land
that they need. It is this limited freedom that causes them to suffer from
zoochosis. Another downside is that not all zoos treat their animals ethically.
It is uncommon for them to euthanize their animals when more room is
needed for new, more exciting ones or when the animals are considered unfit
for breeding.
QUESTIONS
1. Which paragraphs are the introduction, the body and the conclusion of
the essay?
2. Which best describes the main ideas that are covered by the writer?
b. gives the writer’s opinion on whether there are more advantages
or disadvantages?
Body focus
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4. How many main advantages are given? What phrases or words are used
to introduce them?
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6. How many main disadvantages are given? What phrases or words are
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Conclusion focus
8. What does the conclusion do?
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B. BRAINSTORMING
Exercise 2.
Work in pairs to brainstorm for the following prompt. Come up with an
outline with:
Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Do you think the
advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?
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HOMEWORK
Exercise 3.
Find 7 synonyms of advantage and disadvantage from the sample
essay.
Advantage Disadvantage
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UNIT 9.
WRITING PART 2
OBJECTIVES
● understand and practice using discourse markers
● practice writing 1 body paragraph and the conclusion
THEORY
Discourse Markers
Discourse markers connect sentences in a paragraph together and build a
strong essay in terms of coherence and cohesion.
To introduce a
To give example To add an idea To explain
consequence
Similarly However,
Likewise In contrast
On the contrary
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Below are the introduction and the first body paragraph of a response to
this prompt:
Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Do you think the
advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?
Fill in the blanks with the Discourse Markers (DMs) from the Theory
Humans have been keeping cats and dogs as pets for thousands of
years. There are indeed both advantages and disadvantages to this practice.
(1) _________________________ I personally believe that the pros far outweigh the
cons.
B. WRITING PRACTICE
Exercise 2.
Complete the essay above by writing one body paragraph on the
advantages of pet ownership and the conclusion.
Try to use the ideas brainstormed in Unit 9 Writing Part 1 in your writing.
Time limit: 20 minutes
You should:
● use expressions of advantages
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C. PEER-CHECK
Exercise 3.
1. Does the body paragraph contain at least 2 advantages? What are they?
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2. Is there support for each of the advantages? What type of support is it:
explanation, example, or consequence?
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3. Circle any expressions of the advantages and disadvantages you see.
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HOMEWORK
Use discourse markers (DMs) and write a supporting sentence for each
of the following ideas. An example has been done for you:
Example
=> The job wasn’t interesting. However, the pay was good.
1. Some people believe that the use of animals in scientific research and
experiments is necessary. (Use a DM to show a contrasting idea)
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2. Animals are exploited cruelly in circuses (Use a DM to explain the idea)
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3. People use dogs for several purposes. (Use a DM to give an example)
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UNIT 10.
WRITING PART 1
OBJECTIVES
● recall the structure of Advantages - Disadvantages essay
● recognize Coherence and Cohesion mistakes in IELTS Advantages -
Disadvantages essays
● improve an Advantages - Disadvantages essay in terms of Coherence
and Cohesion
THEORY
✔ State your opinion in the introduction and the conclusion if asked “Do you
think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?”. This should be your
thesis statement.
✔ The topic sentence should sum up all ideas in the paragraph.
✔ The topic sentence should not contradict the thesis statement.
IN-CLASS PRACTICE
Exercise 1.
Read the sample essay in response to the following prompt and
a. complete the thesis statement for the essay.
b. choose the best topic sentence, A or B, for each body paragraph.
Be prepared to justify your answer.
The use of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, has become a lot more
common in the last decade. Do you think the advantages of this trend
outweigh the disadvantages?
Sample essay
Nowadays, social media has completely transformed the way we
communicate. Although this has brought about lots of benefits, it has also had
quite a few negative effects. (Thesis statement)
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A. There is no question that people benefit from the use of social networks and
instant messaging.
B. I believe that people should take advantage of social networks and instant
messaging.
These technological tools make social interaction extremely convenient. For
example, Facebook, Twitter, and Zalo allow people to socialize regardless of
where they are in the world. On these platforms, users can easily learn about
products and services relevant to their interests, buy directly from companies,
and enjoy quick customer service without leaving their houses. Additionally,
communication apps are a great way for businesses and customers to interact.
This is particularly beneficial for those who live far away from their loved ones.
Exercise 2.
The following section from body paragraph 1 is not organized logically.
Re-order the sentences so that the paragraph is more coherent. Be
prepared to justify your answer.
(1) These technological tools make social interaction extremely convenient. (2)
For example, Facebook, Twitter, and Zalo allow people to socialize regardless
of where they are in the world. (3) On these platforms, users can easily learn
about products and services relevant to their interests, buy directly from
companies, and enjoy quick customer service without leaving their houses. (4)
Additionally, communication apps are a great way for businesses and
customers to interact. (5) This is particularly beneficial for those who live far
away from their loved ones.
Exercise 3.
Improve the cohesion of the last two paragraphs by
1. underlining the most appropriate discourse markers in the 2nd body
paragraph
2. adding discourse markers to the conclusion
Conclusion
HOMEWORK
Exercise 4.
Write the introduction and at least the first body paragraph for the
following prompt. As you write, aim for:
✔ A clear thesis statement in the introduction that answers the prompt
✔ A clear topic sentence to start the body paragraph
✔ Supporting sentences that are clearly related to the topic sentence
✔ Discourse markers to connect sentences and paragraph
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