Language Style
Language Style
Writing
Introduction
Coordination
Original Sentence:
I spent my entire paycheck last week.
I am staying home this weekend.
Revised Sentence:
I spent my entire paycheck last week,
so I am staying home this weekend.
Conjunctive Adverb Coordinating Conjunction
Revised sentence:
Even though Tracy would be late for
work, she stopped to help the
injured man.
Example:
We enjoy cooking and reading.
Example:
Before I got married, my mother told me that I
should plan things well in advance, that I
should use a wedding planner to take care of
the details, that I should pick a day at least
six months away and stick with it, and that I
should focus my energy on getting to know my
future husband. So I did.
Word Choice
- Using contrasting
words or phrases is
another way to
emphasize particular
points or ideas.
- As with repetition,
contrast is
particularly effective
when combined with
parallelism.
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