1. IELTS Writing Tasks 2 Summary 2
1. IELTS Writing Tasks 2 Summary 2
To get high marks in IELTS Writing Task 2, two things are essential. You
need to:
The Format
There are 5 different types of Task 2 essays that you could be asked
to write:
• Discussion Essays
If you write less than 250 words, you are unlikely to get more than a
band 5 for ’task achievement’ as you won’t have fulfilled the marking
criteria.
Most people do Task 1 first and overrun on the 20 minutes it should take
them. This doesn’t leave them enough time to do Task 2 properly. Since
Task 2 is worth double the marks, they are, in effect, throwing away
valuable marks.
As the question format is the same for all questions, you can use the
same basic technique to write any Task 2 essay.
Step-By-Step Strategy
• Both the planning & writing stages will be quicker & easier.
A key reason for low scores in Writing Task 2 is the failure to answer the
question properly. This can lose you several band scores. Whilst your
language skills may be good enough to earn you a Band 7 or 8, not fully
answering the question could reduce your score to a Band 6 or even
lower.
4) They write about the general topic rather than answering the
specific question.
Points 2-4 are all a consequence of point 1 – not spending time carefully
reading and analysing the question.
The good news is, it’s quick and easy to analyse and understand task 2
questions once you know how. You just need to identify 3 different types
of words:
1. Topic words
2. Other keywords
3. Instruction words
Sample question:
Now we’ll identify the 3 different types of words in our sample question.
The other keywords in the question tell you the specific topic you must
write about. They define the opinion or opinions stated in the statement.
By highlighting these words, it’s easy to see that you are being asked
your view on whether reward or punishment leads to better student
performance. Your essay must only include ideas relevant to these
keywords.
Now for the instructions on the type of essay you should write.
The instruction words tell you exactly what the examiner wants you to
do. 25% of your marks are determined by how well you answer the
question.
So, even if you have Band 8 language skills, you could drop down to a
Band 6 overall score for failing to follow the instructions.
The instruction words are all the words that come after the question
statement.
That’s it. We have analysed the question and know what specific
questions we need to answer in our essay.
This process should take you no more than 2 minutes in your exam.
Make it the first thing you do. The more you practice it before your test,
the quicker and easier it will become.
Question 1
Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to
increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles.
Question 2
Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced
diet.
Question 3
Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others
think that people and communities are becoming more isolated.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Answers
Topic words
Other keywords
Instruction words
Question 1
In your essay, you must either agree or disagree with this statement.
You are not required to discuss both sides of the argument.
Question 2
You are not required to state whether or not you agree with this
statement, but to take the view that it is true.
Question 3
Some people think that the internet has brought people closer
together while others think that people and communities are
becoming more isolated.
If you didn’t identify the same keywords as me, spend a few minutes
going through this section again to be sure that you fully understand it.
With only a few minutes to come up with the ideas to write about, you
need an idea generation strategy that works well for you and that you
have practiced beforehand.
We all think in slightly different ways so what works for one person might
be completely the wrong method for someone else. Different techniques
can also work well for different question types so it’s worth having two
methods that you can use confidently. You’ll then be ready for whatever
type of question you get.
There are 4 main techniques for generating ideas for your Task 2 essay:
Brainstorming
Mind-mapping
Friends technique
Examples method
Brainstorming
This is where you analyse the question and quickly jot down as many
related ideas as come into your head as possible.
The drawback with this method is that you can end up with lots of ideas
but not enough time to sort them and pick out the most relevant ones
before you have to start writing.
Mind-mapping
You can still have the problem of too many ideas but many students use
this method successfully, especially those who already have experience
of creating mind maps.
Friends Technique
Friends Technique allows you to take a step back from the stress of the
exam situation and think more calmly.
Here’s how it works. Imagine you are chatting with a friend and they ask
you the question in a casual conversation. What answers would you give
them off the top of your head? Plan your essay around these ideas.
Doing this will help you to come up with simple answers in everyday
language rather than straining your brain to think of amazing ideas using
high level language, which isn’t necessary.
Example method
Sometimes you can use this technique on its own but for many
questions, it’s a method that will help you generate ideas to support the
main points in your essay. Examiners love relevant examples.
You can even make up examples or tweak real examples to better fit the
question. The examiner isn’t going to check your facts but they must, of
course, be plausible.
You need to cover as much as possible in the planning stage and this
includes vocabulary. You don’t want to be searching your brain for the
right words while you’re writing your essay. The writing stage is the time
for focusing on grammar and linking your ideas.
You don’t need to use complex, high-level words and phrases to get a
high mark but you do need to use appropriate, topic-related vocabulary
and to avoid repeating the same words many times over.
Sample question:
In some poorer areas of large cities people are too afraid to leave
their houses at night time due to a fear of crime.
What are the causes of crime in those areas and what can be done to
tackle those problems?
Write down synonyms as you analyse the question and choose which
ideas to include in your essay.
The final step in the planning process is to set out the structure, that is,
to organise your ideas so that they flow logically from one to the next
and answer all parts of the question.
Task 2 Marking Criteria
To get a high score in the IELTS Writing exam, you need to know
exactly what the examiner wants. So, the first step to achieving success
is to understand the marking criteria.
Once you understand this, you can focus on developing the rights skills
and techniques needed to meet the criteria.
• Task Achievement
• Grammar
Task Achievement
• Answer the actual question asked (i.e., don’t just write generally,
about the topic).
1) You are required to write about the two opposing views on the best
way to learn news. Do not write about news in general.
2) You must answer all parts of the question, that is, you must write
about both views and also give your own opinion. If you don’t fully
cover all these elements, your mark could drop to as low as a
Band 5.
3) Your own opinion on the best way to learn news must be clearly
stated in your essay and supported with relevant ideas and/or
explanations. Include specific examples if you can.
Cohesion and Coherence are your ability to organise and present your
ideas so that your essay is easy to read and understand.
Note: Cohesive devices are words like 'For example', 'In conclusion',
'however' and 'moreover'.
It can be helpful to look at the two parts of this marking criteria
individually to give a better understanding of their significance.
Coherence refers to how well the examiner can understand what you
write.
Several things can affect this, such as,
• Grammar mistakes
If the examiner can’t easily read your essay and follow your ideas, you
will get a low mark for coherence. Poor paragraph structure, with ideas
set out seemingly randomly, is a common and serious mistake made by
many students.
• also
• furthermore
• for example
• such as
• as well as
• because
• although
• however
• especially
• therefore
• in contrast
• similarly
Many students make the mistake of thinking that you need to use long,
complicated words to score well. This is not the case. You just need to
use the right words correctly. You must also be able to spell them
correctly.
For a great score in the Writing test, you need to impress the examiner
Beginning your essay well will immediately start stacking up the marks
for both Task Achievement and Coherence and Cohesion.
• Paraphrased question
• Thesis statement
• Outline statement
Here’s a reminder of the 3-part structure you should use for all task 2
Writing tasks.
• Paraphrased question
• Thesis statement
• Outline statement
Paraphrased question
Question:
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and
towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
You don’t have to replace them all but do so where possible without
making the sentence sound awkward.
It’s fine to repeat one or two words. Don’t spend too much time trying to
think of synonyms or use ones you are not 100% sure are correct.
Thesis statement
The thesis statement states your opinion on the topic. In most instances,
you simply need to decide whether to agree or disagree with it and to
reiterate the main idea of the statement.
Example: This essay argues that the loss of young people from the rural
landscape has problematic consequences.
This thesis statement states the opinion of the writer and paraphrases
the question again in a way that makes this view clear.
Outline statement
Finally in the introduction, you must outline the two main points that
you’ll cover in the rest of the essay. This acts as a guide to the examiner
and also helps to keep you focused and on track as you write.
Do it in one sentence, or you can add them onto the end of the thesis
statement if appropriate.
Example: The two most serious are, the depletion of the rural workforce
and the loss of local education facilities.
These two ideas will become your two main body paragraphs.
Question:
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and
towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.
Introduction:
These three sentences exactly follow the 3-part structure and also
avoid the common mistakes.
• Topic sentence
• Explanation
• Example
Outline statement:
The two most serious are, the depletion of the rural workforce and the
loss of local education facilities.
It outlines the two main points that will be covered in the rest of the
essay.
These two ideas will become the two main body paragraphs.
Topic Sentence
The topic sentence plays an important role here. It states the main idea,
acting as a signpost for what is to come next, that is, what the
paragraph will be about.
That’s all it needs to do so it doesn’t need to be complicated.
Let’s look at our question again and the topic we identified as the main
idea for main body paragraph 1.
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and
towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.
You will already have your ideas ready from when you planned your
essay. Now they need to be formed into a sentence.
Topic sentence 1:
When 18–30-year-olds move to towns and cities in search of new
opportunities, they leave behind an ageing population to do all the work
Now for the second paragraph. Here's the main idea and an example
topic sentence.
Topic sentence 2:
In many rural areas, there is no longer a village school for the local
children to attend.
Topic sentence 1:
Here we have two sentences giving more detail on the idea and two
sentences setting out an example.
Don’t worry if you can’t think of a real example. It’s fine to make one up,
as this one is, as long as it’s believable.
Topic sentence 2:
In many rural areas, there is no longer a village school for
the local children to attend.
Note that I've added the word ‘furthermore’ to the beginning of the
second paragraph as a cohesive device to link the two ideas.
Summary
As you can see, you don’t have time to include many ideas. Here’s a
summary of what each main body paragraph includes:
• A topic sentences
• An explanation
• An example
If you do this well, you’ll improve your score for both task achievement
and cohesion and coherence which together make up 50% of the
overall marks.
First, let’s consider what you should not do when writing a conclusion.
You should not:
If your essay is already long enough, leave it out as it won’t earn you
extra marks. Your time will be better spent checking your grammar
and spellings.
• In conclusion
or
• To conclude
There’s another piece of good news. If you followed all the instructions
on how to write a good introduction, your introduction will be a summary
of what your essay is going to include.
Since your conclusion is about what the essay did include (your opinion
and the main points), all you need to do now is to paraphrase this same
information.
Introduction:
The migration of the younger generation to urban areas is leaving many
rural locations populated predominantly by the elderly. This essay
argues that the loss of young people from the rural landscape has
problematic consequences. The two
most serious are, the depletion of the rural workforce and the loss of
local education facilities.
Summary sentence:
In conclusion, the significant rise in the average age of people living in
rural areas has resulted in a lack of suitable people to fill the workforce
and the closure of the majority of village schools, causing hardship to
local communities.
Study the way I've used synonyms and a different sentence structure to
form this conclusion from the introduction. This really is all you need to
do.
Here are examples of each type of sentence that you could use for this
Task 2 essay:
With our conclusion written, the essay is complete. It is well over the 250
minimum word limit so; no prediction or recommendation sentence is
needed.
Finished essay
The migration of the younger generation to urban areas is leaving many
rural locations populated predominantly by the elderly. This essay
argues that the loss of young people from the rural landscape has
problematic consequences. The two most serious are, the depletion of
the rural workforce and the loss of local education facilities.
(315 words)
Learning to write good Task 2 essays takes a lot of practice. Use this
lesson and the two on introductions and main body paragraphs to learn
the technique then, do as much practice as you can on all five questions
types.
The 5 Types of Task 2 Essay
The Question
The first part of the question will be a statement. You will then be asked
to give your own opinion about the statement. Here is some typical
wording that might be used:
Sample Question:
The most common mistake that students make is not giving an opinion.
The question will clearly state that you must choose one side of the
argument. If you fail to do this, you will get a low score for task
achievement.
It doesn’t matter which side of the argument you take or even, that you
agree with it. Choose the one you can develop the best argument for.
Make sure that you don’t change your opinion part way through the
essay, and don’t give reasons for the opposing view.
Essay Structure
Now let’s look at a simple structure you can use to write opinion
essays. It’s not the only possible structure but it’s the one I recommend
because it’s easy to learn and will enable you to quickly plan and write
a high-level essay.
1) Introduction
• Paraphrase the question
• Give your opinion
• State two supporting reasons
4) Conclusion
• Summarise opinion and key reasons
For this essay, I’m going to disagree with the statement and argue that
job satisfaction is more important than a big salary.
2) Generate ideas
• Brainstorming
• Mind-mapping
• Friends technique
• Examples method
Examples:
Uncle Barry – boasted about high salary but hated his job.
Ideas:
I’ve got more ideas here than I need so I’m going to pick two to develop
in the essay – one for each of the main body paragraphs.
For example:
With that done, we can focus on the first paragraph of the essay – the
introduction.
Question:
(272 words)
The Question
The first part of the question will be a statement containing two opposing
views.
You will then be asked to discuss both sides of the argument and give
your own opinion. Here is some typical wording that might be used:
Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down.
Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild
animals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples
from your own knowledge or experience.
Common Mistakes
The most common mistake that students make is not giving their
opinion. The question will clearly state that you must choose one side of
the argument to agree with. If you fail to do this, you will get a low score
for task achievement.
It doesn’t matter which side of the argument you take or even, that you
actually agree with it.
However, you must give equal attention to both sides. A common error
is to provide a stronger argument for the view you favour. This leads to
an unbalanced essay and a low score for task achievement.
Essay Structure
Now let’s look at a simple structure you can use to write you essay. It’s
not the only possible structure but it’s the one I recommend because it’s
easy to learn and will enable you to quickly plan and write a high-level
essay.
1) Introduction
• Paraphrase the question
• State two supporting reasons
• Give your opinion
4) Conclusion
• Summarise the key points and state your opinion
This is an essential step in the planning process and will ensure that
you answer the question fully. It’s quick and easy to do. You just need
to identify 3 different types of words:
1. Topic words
2. Other keywords
3. Instruction words
Topics words are the ones that identify the general subject of the
question.
Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down.
Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild
animals.
So, this question is about ‘zoos.
The other keywords in the question tell you the specific topic you must
write about. They define the opinions stated in the statement.
Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed
down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in
protecting wild animals.
The next task is to generate some ideas to write about. There are
several different ways to think up ideas.
• Brainstorming
• Mind-mapping
• Friends technique
• Examples method
I’ve got more ideas here than I need so I’m going to pick two to develop
in the essay – one for each of the main body paragraphs.
We’re almost ready to start writing our essay but first, we have one other
small task to do.
4) Vocabulary
For example:
With that done, we can focus on the first paragraph of the essay – the
introduction.
Question:
Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down.
Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild
animals.
Some people argue that zoos help to preserve wild creatures, while
others say that they are inhumane and should be abolished. While the
development of breeding programmes contributes to the preservation of
endangered species, I believe that the poor conditions that many
animals
held in captivity are kept in make the existence of zoos unacceptable.
The Question
Here are two typical problem solution essay questions. They consist of a
statement followed by the question or instruction.
• What issues does this cause and how can they be addressed?
• What are some resulting social problems and how can we
deal with them?
• What problems arise from this and how can they be tackled?
• Why is this? How might it be remedied?
• What are the reasons for this, and how can the situation be
improved?
• Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to
tackle this problem?
And here are a few questions where you only have to write about the
solution.
It’s important that you are able to recognise the common synonyms,
words and phrases used in problem solution questions. Here are the
key words and their synonyms used in the questions above.
Cause– I misread the timetable and thought the bus left at 22.45
when it actually left at 22.35.
6 Common Mistakes
Essay Structure
Now let’s look at a simple structure you can use to write problem
solution essays. It’s not the only possible structure but it’s the one I
recommend because it’s easy to learn and will enable you to quickly
plan and write a high-level essay.
1) Introduction
• Paraphrase the question
• State 1 key problem/cause and related solution
4) Conclusion
• Summarise the key points
This structure will give us a well-balanced essay with 4 paragraphs.
Most questions will state problems, causes and solutions in the plural,
that is, more than one. However, it is acceptable to write about just one.
This will give you an essay of just over the minimum 250 words. To
write about two problems/causes and solutions will require you to write
between 350 and 400 words which are a lot to plan and write in the 40
minutes allowed.
• Generate ideas
• Identify vocabulary
1) Analyse the question
This is an essential step in the planning process and will ensure that
you answer the question fully. It’s quick and easy to do. You just need
to identify 3 different types of words:
1. Topic words
2. Other keywords
3. Instruction words
Topics words are the ones that identify the general subject of the
question and will be found in the statement part of the question.
Many students will do this first step of the process and then write about
the topic in general. This is a serious mistake and leads to low marks
for task achievement.
The other keywords in the question tell you the specific topic you must
write about.
By highlighting these words, it’s easy to see that you are being asked to
write about the problem of traffic congestion in large cities. Your essay
must only include ideas relevant to these ideas.
The instruction words are the question itself. These tell you the type
of problem solution essay you must write. This is a ‘causes and
solution’ question.
2) Generate ideas
The next task is to generate some ideas to write about. There are
several different ways to think up ideas. We looked at the four main
ones.
• Brainstorming
• Mind-mapping
• Friends technique
• Examples method
You might want to try this yourself before reading on for my ideas. Here
are my ideas:
Cause:
• Too many cars on the roads – increasing numbers of people own
cars, more convenient than buses & trains
• Inadequate public transport – crowded, old & dirty
• Poor road layout
• Rush hour traffic – most people travel to & from work at the
same times each day
Solution:
• Car sharing, park-and-ride scheme, congestion charge
• Improve public transport – more frequent and better quality
• Improve infrastructure – bus lanes, cycle lanes will make it safer
for people to cycle
• Flexible working hours
3)Vocabulary
During the planning stage, quickly jot down some vocabulary that
comes to mind as you decide which cause and solution you are going
to write about, especially synonyms of key words. This will save you
having to stop and think of the right language while you’re writing.
For example:
• traffic jam
• heavy traffic
• queue
• vehicles
• commute
• rush hour
• private transport
• infrastructure
With that done, we can focus on the first paragraph of the essay – the
introduction.
Question:
One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion.
What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
One of the most serious issues facing the majority of large urban areas
is traffic jams. The main reason for this is that there are too many private
cars on the roads these days and a viable solution is to introduce more
park-and-ride schemes.
The number of people owning cars increases year on year, with most
families now having more than one car. Most people like the
convenience of travelling at the time they want to rather than being
restricted to public transport timetables, so they prefer to drive
themselves around rather than taking the bus or train. This is despite the
fact that they frequently have to sit in long traffic queues as they near the
city center. Whenever I have to attend a meeting in the city, I always
drive because it means that I can leave home when I want to rather than
getting stressed about getting to the station in time to catch the train.
The Question
Advantages and disadvantages essay questions fall into two mains
categories:
• Questions that ask for your opinion.
The first part of the question will always be a statement. You will then be
asked to write about both the advantages and disadvantages of the
idea
stated. You may also be required to state your opinion.
Here are two more sample questions for illustration. For the first one,
you
must give your opinion but in the second, you should not.
Essay Structures
Now let’s look at two simple structures you can use to write advantages
and disadvantages essays. They not the only possible structures but
are ones I recommend because they are easy to learn and will enable
you to quickly plan and write a high-level essay.
These structures will give you a well-balanced essay with 4 paragraphs.
Analysing the question will ensure that you answer it fully. It’s quick and
easy to do. You just need to identify 3 different types of words:
• Topic words
• Other keywords
• Instruction words
Topics words are the ones that identify the general subject of the
question and will be found in the statement part of the question.
Here is the question we’re going to be working on. I’ve highlighted the
topic words in blue.
Many students do this first step of the process and then write about the
topic in general. This is a serious mistake and leads to low marks for
task achievement.
The other keywords in the question tell you the specific topic your
essay must be about.
By highlighting these words, it’s easy to see that you are being asked to
write about the conflicting issues of tourism being ‘a main source of
income’ in many places, yet also being ‘a source of problems.
Your essay must only include ideas relevant to this aspect of tourism.
The instruction words are the question itself. They tell you exactly what
to include in your essay.
Note the use of the synonyms ‘benefits’ and ‘drawback’ in the second
sentence of the question.
2) Generate ideas
The next task is to generate some ideas to write about. There are
several different ways to think up ideas.
• Brainstorming
• Mind-mapping
• Friends technique
• Examples method
• Increased crime
There are far too many ideas here to include in an essay of just over
250 words. Think up a few then pick one advantage and one
disadvantage that you think you can develop well.
3) Vocabulary
During the planning stage, quickly jot down some vocabulary that comes
to mind as you decide what you're going to write about, especially
synonyms of key words. This will save you having to stop and think of
the right language while you’re writing.
Question:
A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of
income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems
if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the
modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh
its drawbacks?
One of the main advantages is the number of jobs the tourist industry
creates for local people. The many hotels, restaurants, shops and other
facilities provide employment for the residents. A good example of a
country that is taking full advantage of a booming tourist industry is
Thailand. Regions that were once dominated by poor fishing villages
are now full of thriving holiday resorts. With everyone now having a job,
the general standard of living has greatly increased. The economic
boost to these local communities has also had a massive impact on the
national economy which is growing year on year, largely due to tourism.
2) Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and
allow their children to do whatever they want.
Is this a good way to raise children?
What consequences could this style of parenting have for children
as they get older?
It’s easy to mistake double question essays for one of the other four
types of Task 2 essays, especially opinion or discussion essays. Each
should be answered in a slightly different way.
Analyzing the question properly is essential to avoiding this error. I’ll
also show you how to do this and give you a simple 4-part structure for
planning your essay.
Essay Structure
1) Introduction
• Paraphrase the question
• Outline sentence – state your answer to both questions
Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and
fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all
the world’s
fossil fuels have been depleted.
This is an essential step in the planning process and will ensure that you
answer the question fully. It’s quick and easy to do. You just need to
identify
3 different types of words:
• Topic words
• Other keywords
• Instruction words
Topics words are the ones that identify the general subject of the
question and will be found in the statement part of the question.
Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering
industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we
will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been
depleted.
Many students will do this first step of the process and then write about
the topic in general. This is a serious mistake and leads to low marks
for task achievement.
Now that we know what the general topic is, we need to understand
exactly what aspect of fossil fuels we're being asked to write about.
The other keywords in the question tell you the specific things you
must write about. For double question essays, these will often be in the
instructions, that is, the actual questions.
By highlighting these words, it’s easy to identify the topics. Your essay
must only include ideas relevant to these ideas.
The instruction words are the questions themselves. These tell you
exactly what type of information is required and each will become the
topic for one of the two main body paragraphs.
How can we conserve these resources?
What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?
The first body paragraph will answer the first question (How?) and the
second body paragraph will answer the second question (What?).
2) Generate ideas
Choose one main idea for each part of the question. My advice on
making your selection is to choose ideas you can quickly think of an
example to illustrate.
3) Vocabulary
During the planning stage, quickly jot down some vocabulary that
comes to mind as you decide which ideas you are going to write about,
especially synonyms of key words. This will save you having to stop
and think of the right language while you’re writing.
For the ideas I’ve chosen, useful words will include:
• sustainable
• renewable energy
• energy-efficient
Finished Double Question Essay
Question:
The world is currently reliant on oil, coal and natural gas for the majority
of its energy requirements but there will come a time when these run
out. This essay will discuss how we can help to prevent our non-
renewable resources from becoming depleted by using our cars less
frequently and it will name some natural forces that can be harnessed to
generate power.