Anecdotes
Anecdotes
Last week, I visited Chicago to attend a business conference. While I was there, I decided
to visit the Art Institute of Chicago. To start off, my flight was delayed. Next, the airline lost
my luggage, so I had to wait for two hours at the airport while they tracked it
down. Unexpectedly, the luggage had been set aside and forgotten.
As soon as they found my luggage, I found a taxi and rode into town. During the ride into
town, the driver told me about his last visit to the Art Institute. After I had arrived safely,
everything began to go smoothly. The business conference was very interesting, and I
thoroughly enjoyed my visit to the institute. Finally, I caught my flight back to Seattle.
Luckily, everything went smoothly. I arrived home just in time to kiss my daughter goodnight.
Sequencing Steps
Sequencing refers to the order in which events happened. Sequencing is often made easier by the
use of transition words. Following are some of the most common words and expressions used to
sequence when writing or speaking.
Create the beginning of your story with these expressions. Use a comma after the
introductory phrase.
First of all,
To start off with,
Initially,
To begin with,
You can continue the story with the following expressions, or use a time clause beginning
with "as soon as" or "after." When using a time clause, use the past simple after the time
expression, such as:
Then,
After that,
Next,
As soon as / When + full clause,
...but then
Immediately,
Examples of using these continuing phrases in a story include:
You can use the following expressions to add suspense to your story:
Suddenly,
Unexpectedly,
Suddenly, a child burst into the room with a note for Ms. Smith.
Unexpectedly, the people in the room didn't agree with the mayor.
Finally,
In the end,
Eventually,
The use of "while" and "as" introduce a dependent clause and require an independent
clause to complete your sentence. "During" is used with a noun, noun phrase, or noun
clause and does not require a subject and object. The construction for this kind of sentence is:
While I was giving the presentation, a member of the audience asked an interesting
question.
Jennifer told her story as I prepared dinner.
During the meeting, Jack came over and asked me a few questions.
We explored a number of approaches during the presentation.
Test Your Knowledge!
My friend and I visited Rome last summer. (1) ________, we flew from New York to Rome in
first class. It was fantastic! (2) _________ we arrived in Rome, we (3) ______ went to the
hotel and took a long nap. (4) ________, we went out to find a great restaurant for dinner.
(5) ________, a scooter appeared out of nowhere and almost hit me! The rest of the trip had
no surprises. (6) __________, we began to explore Rome. (7) ________ the afternoons, we
visited ruins and museums. At night, we hit the clubs and wandered the streets. One night, (8)
________ I was getting some ice cream, I saw an old friend from high school. Imagine that!
(9) _________, we caught our flight back to New York. We were happy and ready to begin
work again.
My friend and I visited Rome last summer. (1) ________, we flew from New York to Rome in
first class. It was fantastic! (2) _________ we arrived in Rome, we (3) ______ went to the
hotel and took a long nap. (4) ________, we went out to find a great restaurant for dinner.
(5) ________, a scooter appeared out of nowhere and almost hit me! The rest of the trip had
no surprises. (6) __________, we began to explore Rome. (7) ________ the afternoons, we
visited ruins and museums. At night, we hit the clubs and wandered the streets. One night, (8)
________ I was getting some ice cream, I saw an old friend from high school. Imagine that!
(9) _________, we caught our flight back to New York. We were happy and ready to begin
work again.