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The document outlines various writing tasks for essays, including opinion and discussion essays, along with structural guidelines for each type. It also provides examples of paraphrasing and rephrasing common phrases to enhance writing quality. Additionally, it discusses topics related to public health, environmental issues, leadership abilities, and the benefits of independent work.

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Writing Practice Task 2

The document outlines various writing tasks for essays, including opinion and discussion essays, along with structural guidelines for each type. It also provides examples of paraphrasing and rephrasing common phrases to enhance writing quality. Additionally, it discusses topics related to public health, environmental issues, leadership abilities, and the benefits of independent work.

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MACAM2 WRITING TEST TASK 2

1. Opinion Essay
- Introduction (Paraphrasing and Thesis Statement)
- Body 1 Paragraph (topic sentence & Supporting Sentence)
- Body 2 Paragraph (topic sentence & Supporting Sentence)
- Concession Paragraph (it is true that, however; Admittedly, Nevertheless) (optional)
- Conclusion (to conclude, it seems that) (summary topic sentence body 1 & 2)
2. Discussion Essay
- Introduction (Paraphrasing and Thesis Statement)
- Body 1 Paragraph (Opinion 1)
- Body 2 Paragraph (Opinion 2)
- Conclusion (to conclude, it seems that) (state personal opinion)
#Practice 1

1. A bunch of citizens argue that increasing the number of sports arenas is the most effective
way to enhance the public health. Yet, others think that it would have just a little impact on
public health and that other assessments are needed.
2. Some individuals believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best way to
improve public health. On the other hand, others argue that this would have little impact on
public health and that alternative measures are required.
3. One perspective suggests that improving public health depends on increasing the number of
sports facilities. However, another group believes this would be ineffective and alternative
solutions are needed.

Change some people say with

1. Many believes
2. A number of people think
3. Certain people claim

Change the best way with

1. The most effective method


2. The ideal solution
3. The optimal approach

Change “improve” with

1. Enhance, promote, better public health


2. Boost

Change increasing with

1. Adding more
2. Developing more
3. Building more

Change however with:

1. On the other hand, some argue


2. Conversely, others believe
3. However, there are those who claim
4. In contrast, some people suggest

Change “little effect” with

1. Minimal impact
2. Largely ineffective
3. Little difference

Change other measures are required with

1. Other alternative approaches are necessary


2. Other further actions must be taken
3. Other different strategies are essentials
1. No one will buy printed newspaper or books in the future, instead they will be able to
access them freely by searching online
2. printed newspapers and books will become unsold in the market in the future as people
will be able to access them online without the need to purchase them
3. no one will purchase physical newspapers or books in the upcoming years, instead they
will be able to access all of the reading materials they desire digitally without
subscription
Plastic carrier bags are commonly utilized and contribute significantly to various environmental
issues. Some argues that they should be prohibited.

1. Used wisely change into:


a. commonly used
b. frequently utilized
c. widely employed
2. Cause many environmental problems, change into:
a. Lead to numerous environmental issues
b. Result in various environmental challenges
c. Contribute to significant environmental concerns
3. Some people say, change into:
a. Some argue that
b. Some individuals claim
c. Certain people argue that
d. Some believe that
e. Some hold the view that
4. They should be banned, change into:
a. They ought to be prohibited
b. They should be outlawed
5. People are naturally born as good leaders, change into:
a. Individuals are inherently good leaders
b. People are naturally gifted leaders
c. Individuals are born with leadership abilities
6. While others feel that, change into:
a. Whereas others believe that
b. On the other hand, others argue that
7. Leadership skills can be learned:
a. Leadership abilities can be developed
b. Leadership abilities can be acquired
c. Skill for leadership can be taught

Thesis statement
It is claimed by many that leadership abilities can be learned as people can proceed in accordance
based on their will. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will detail the reason why.
In several nations, it is often acceptable by some individuals that spending huge bucks of money is
required for building high speed railway’s new access to connect the cities. Whereas, others argue
that budget on enhancing the public transport should be earned more. However, I strongly believe
that views in allocating more money on the exist facilities is more important because it is quite
efficient and this essay will detail the reason why.
Today, citizen faces several issues through their life in metropolitan. The difficulties are the lack of
job opportunity and the infrastructure’s quality get worse while the population is rising. I believe
that influencing more people about living in suburb area by the government may prevent those
troubles.
Plan :
Body 1 :

TS: The flexibility of time and place


Ex: work in café or home
Ex: work at night after babysitting

Body 2 :
TS: The fluctuation of income and pressure
Ex: No job, no payment
Ex: Meet several clients/people in business with different character

Being an independent worker has been an option for some peoples today, instead of having a full-
time employee in corporation. It is caused by the advantages of the flexibility, while the side
effects of being self-employed may occur, like the unstable income and high pressure from the
jobs.

The trend of flexibility rises when people realize that some tasks on the office’s desk could be done
without their present in building. While facing the high pressure from a boss in, Café provides the
comfort and enjoyable vibes so the creativity may help to get the work done. Besides, home is one
of the best spot for some individuals for working because they are no need to face the traffics to
the company. Their focus is not also the environment, but also the time consuming for working.
So many believe in various traditions that kids are often educated of their hard work can pursue
anything. While some argue that pushing the mindset to the limit may lead to a success, it requires
more energy for children to do so. This essay will examine both pros and cons of intense culture of
struggling.

Today’s businesses usually highlight the up-to-date product in some strategies in the promotion.
The objective is to attract the consumers and influence to buy the brand. I strongly believe that
this method may enhance the creativity of marketing’s team in a company, and this essay will
explain why.
Body 1:
1. Enhance the creativity

- Develop various type of content


- engage the customers flawlessly

Body 2:

too good to be true information

- fake review or expression


- pointless information about the new product

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