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The document discusses the improved quality of life in the 21st century compared to previous centuries, emphasizing technological advancements, better transportation, and enhanced healthcare. It argues against the view that current living standards are lower, citing examples such as the use of robotic technology in agriculture and government investments in infrastructure. Additionally, it addresses the value of spending on cultural and sports events, highlighting their benefits in expanding knowledge and providing relaxation.

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Inter 43 Writing 9 March (1)

The document discusses the improved quality of life in the 21st century compared to previous centuries, emphasizing technological advancements, better transportation, and enhanced healthcare. It argues against the view that current living standards are lower, citing examples such as the use of robotic technology in agriculture and government investments in infrastructure. Additionally, it addresses the value of spending on cultural and sports events, highlighting their benefits in expanding knowledge and providing relaxation.

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Buổi 2:

19. People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than
those living in previous centuries. Do you agree or disagree? (page 39)
- better (adj) = superior (k dùng “more”, từ này = better), more
advanced, more enhanced, improved (adj = V3)
- quality of life (n) = living standards, standards of living, life quality
- people living in the 21st century = citizens of the contemporary society,
 The past few decades have witnessed inexorable (adj, k
ngừng)/unparalleled (adj, k sánh bằng)/unprecedented (adj, chưa từng
có) transformations (sự chuyển đổi) in……… While a multitude of
people opine that s+v… (worsen, lower….), I strongly refute such a view
and advocate that ….(my view) – superior (adj, C1).
Cẩm Thúy Võ7:57 PM
The past few decades have witnessed inexorable transformations in
every aspect of life. While a multitude of people opine that the current
life standard is lower, I strongly refute such a view and advocate that
those living it (thay cho current living standard) is more advanced in
comparison with the previous centuries.
Phố Hoàng8:01 PM
The past few decades have witnessed inexorable transformations of
manifold (adj) aspects of life. While a multitude of people opine that
citizens of contemporary society have a lower standard of living than
before, I strongly refute such a view and advocate that life quality has
been superior to previous centuries.
Long Trần
8:01 PM
The past few decades have witnessed unprecedented transformations in
every fieldsfield in life. While a multitude of people opine that humans
living in previous centuries haves more enhanced life quality than
human those in the 21st century, I strongly refuse such a view and
advocate that citizens of the temporary society have enjoy a superior
living standard.
Phuc Vo
8:02 PM
Recent decades have witnessed constant transformations in every aspect
of life. While many people think opine (C2) that the quality of life is
lower now than in the past, I absolutely think advocate that the standard
of living has become superior to previous centuries.

 The 21st century has witnessed unprecedented transformations in


every aspect of life, leading to a widely held perception that current
living standards have been drastically/tremendously enhanced.
Personally, I would side with such a view for numerous justifications.

Body 1. First, Technological advances/breakthroughs …


revolutionize…. minimize manual work + the emergence of state-of-
the-art (hiện đại) devices/cutting – edge (hiện đại) devices  tăng work
productivity. Example: thay vì handwritten letters  Emails ……Another
salient (nổi bật) example là dùng robotic technology trong agricultural
sector (ngành nông nghiệp) để spray fertilisers (tưới phân bón) thay thế
humans  eliminate (=reduce) human errors + tăng năng suất cho ng
nông dân
First, technological breakthroughs have revolutionized socio -
economic development (idea1). Over the last few decades, manual labor has
gradually been replaced by the emergence of state-of-the-art (ADJ) devices,
thereby bolstering/augmenting/promoting/boosting/fostering the work productivity
and profits (explain). Regarding handwritten letters, email application has been
used to shorten the time of discussion and exchange information, increasing the
rate of dealing with work (example). Another salient example is robotic
technology, which has been used for spraying fertilizers, replacing humans in
agricultural sectors (example).This initiative helps eliminate human errors and
improves crop yields for farmers. (result)

Body 2. Transportation: government investments  enhance


infrastructure quality  giúp con người đi lại thuận tiện hơn.
Example: advent of express train, underground and skytrain 
transport (v) commuters to their final destination (lấy ví dụ cụ thể ở
Japan, US…)
Body 3. Better healthcare, resulted from discoveries in medical
science. Reason: government subsidies (funds)  scientific research
to cure diseases and invent vaccines + medical equipment in hospitals
and clinics  result: longer life expectancy (tuổi thọ)
*homework 1 9/3/22
*homework 2 9/3/22

21. Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Is it a good or a bad thing? (page 39)
Intro: There are widely different/divergent schools of thought on the issue of whether a large sum of money
should be allocated for partaking in cultural and athletic events or not. While a number of people opine that such
participation is detrimental, I firmly advocate that merely/solely beneficial impacts are reaped.
1. …expand horizons of participants’ knowledge of a wide diversity of cultures, traditions and customs  foster
their relationships/widen their social circles trong những events đó eliminate cultural differences. Ex: Hue
Festivals or Hoi An Memory – đc tổ chức thu hút travellers nationwide and worldwide  boost hình ảnh quốc gia
và giới thiệu…. tới foreign friends.
2. … feel a sense of relaxation  spectators’ stress levels can be radically/drastically minimized = screaming,
shouting out to support favorite teams or players. Example: World Cup or Champion League…..Simultaneously
(cùng lúc đó), fairplay spirits and sportsmanship (tinh thần thượng võ) can be instilled into people.

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