Untitled - English Revision 2
Untitled - English Revision 2
Written by
Narenkumar
1.
FADE IN:
HE
(V.O. Lacking motivation - refers
to Nietzsche's Quote: "Only
thoughts gained by walking have
value".)
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FADE TO:
HE
5.
(Narrating what he is
writing: age, DOB,
height, weight,
education, passion…)
Beyond that point, He finds himself unable to write and stops
altogether.
CUT TO:
HE (V.O.)
(Reads some notes)
HE (V.O.)
(Speaks about his
unattractive body)
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Standing near the shelf where the books are arranged, he's
recalling his favorite Novels, while tying to figure out his
own character. He refers to some books that deeply resonates
his own character.
HE (V.O.)
(He refers to some books
that deeply resonates his
own character.)
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He plugs the pendrive into the TV. He opens the folder— more
than fifteen movies are stored inside. He selects "Perks of
Being a Wallflower" and starts watching.
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Half an hour into the movie, He realizes he doesn’t like it.
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START MONTAGE
HE REPLAYS THE EMMA WATSONS DANCE SCENE AGAIN AND AGAIN.
MONTAGE END
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He takes out every extra thing lying in the table and puts it
aside.
He adjusts his Keyboard to fit perfectly in the imaginary
horizontal line.
(WE SEE A VISUAL LENGTH CALCULATORS APPEAR IN THE SCREEN AS
HE TRIES TO ADJUST THOSE THINGS)
Makes coffee.
Reads some short stories.
MONTAGE END
(V.O. Self-loathing in a
Depressive voice: I suck.
I'm irrelevant.
Everything I make is
worthless. I'm a looser!
Stop. Focus. I want to be
better. The best version
of me. I want to read
more books. I have to
gain more understanding
on myself on life. may be
I should go out meet
friends and socialize
with people. Before
wanting to story I want
to develop my body, look
how lean and unattractive
I look with this stupid
skeleton face. A six pack
would be nice, but how
would I manage to read
books if I spent time in
GYM. But that wouldn't
matter If I loved myself.
I think I'd love myself
if I made something
worthwhile.)
He gets up from the bed and, tired and drained, sits down at
his writing table chair. He opens his diary and begins to
write...
(V.O. Determined that if
he doesn’t write the
story he wants to write
today, somehow he must
start it tomorrow.
"Tomorrow will be the
first day of the rest of
my life")
THE END