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Corrections sa thesis

The document outlines corrections needed for a thesis, including changes to the title, methodological framework, and formatting issues. It emphasizes the need for clearer language, alignment of results with objectives, and the inclusion of numerical findings to support recommendations. Additionally, it suggests improvements in discussions and graphical representations, as well as summarizing findings in the abstract and following college formatting guidelines.

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Corrections sa thesis

The document outlines corrections needed for a thesis, including changes to the title, methodological framework, and formatting issues. It emphasizes the need for clearer language, alignment of results with objectives, and the inclusion of numerical findings to support recommendations. Additionally, it suggests improvements in discussions and graphical representations, as well as summarizing findings in the abstract and following college formatting guidelines.

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Grace Baclayo Saagundo
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Corrections sa thesis

Change the title

Details on methods sample size mentioned of


respondents
Methodological Framework does not answer the
objective

Page 28.
onceptual framework Input-process -output
Page 86 indention
Chapter 5 conclusion .page 107 Use more technical direct langauge
Check format, patterns ,templates
Include some numerical findings
Recommendation Basis on stating
Back up recommendations with RRL
Include some numerical findings that make you
consider these recommendations.
In front page

Follow college formatting

See comments in objectives

Comments in RRL

Commnets in methods

Align the results in the objectives

Incorporate summarize impact negative or positive per sector of your results

*improved disscussions on graphical representations

ABSTRACT

include summarize findings in this part on the four sectors

follow college template

RRL

Farm to market road in the Philippines

Current state of FMR in the Philippines Caraga and Agusan del norte

Existing Evaluation tools

Different sectors for Impact Assessment

Page 48 . basis look

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