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Thestudents like they’re
french teacher more then
there english teacher.
The students like their
French teacher more than
their English teacher.
MyMom is scarry when
shes mad but dad is
scary all the time.
Mymom is scary when
she’s mad, but Dad is
scary all the time.
My french poodle’s are
puppys and their always
getting into trouble.
My French poodles are
puppies, and they’re
always getting into
trouble.
Aftermom droped me off,
I didnt now were to go on
my first day of school.
After Mom dropped me
off, I didn’t know where
to go on my first day of
school.
Myaunt irene is a good
cook so my Uncle is a bit
over weight.
MyAunt Irene is a good
cook, so my uncle is a bit
overweight.
Itsmy dream to visit all
of the country’s in europe
someday but germany is
at the top of the list..
It’s
my dream to visit all
of the countries in
Europe someday, but
Germany is at the top of
the list..
Ilooked out the
window and I was
surprized to see too
bunny’s in my back
yard.
Ilooked out the
window, and I was
surprised to see two
bunnies in my
backyard.
My wives’ parent’s
came to visit and they
brought some yummy
french pastry’s with
them.
My wife’s parents came
to visit, and they
brought some yummy
French pastries with
them..
To many american
city’s are riddled with
crime and many
tourist’s are afraid to
visit.
Too many American
cities are riddled with
crime, and many
tourists are afraid to
visit.
The bookshelfs where
two high for me to
reach so I had to use a
latter.
Thebookshelves were
too high for me to
reach, so I had to use a
ladder.
Myfriend’s and me are
going to the beach next
week to stay at the
Jone’s vacation home
from saturday to
tuesday.
Myfriends and I are
going to the beach next
week to stay at the
Joneses’ vacation home
from Saturday to
Tuesday.
Idon’t know were your
going on vacation, but
Chrises’ Mom is taking
him to florida.
Idon’t know where
you’re going on
vacation, but Chris’s
mom is taking him to
Florida.
Please fold you’re
cloth’s after your
finished walking Mr.
Smiths’ dog, and than
we can visit your aunt.
Pleasefold your
clothes after you’re
finished walking Mr.
Smith’s dog, and then
we can visit your aunt.
The Sanchez’s are
coming over on friday
for dinner and their
bringing the desert.
The Sanchezes are
coming over on Friday
for dinner, and they’re
bringing the dessert.
Were having trouble
understanding the
buses’ schedule but we
think it run’s every
thirty minute’s.
We’re having trouble
understanding the
bus’s schedule, but we
think it runs every
thirty minutes..
Maxes’sDad drives us to
baseball practice on
Mondays my Dad drives
us on thursdays.
Max’sdad drives us to
baseball practice on
Mondays; my dad drives
us on Thursdays.
My family and me
enjoyed an awesome
meal at a nearby Mexican
restaurant they’re tacoes
are better then those at
Taco Bell.
My family and I enjoyed
an awesome meal at a
nearby Mexican
restaurant; their tacos
are better than those at
Taco Bell.
The womens’ softball
team won they’re first
championship game
mom took me to one of
the cities best
restaurants to celebrate.
The women’s softball
team won their first
championship game;
Mom took me to one of
the city’s best
restaurants to celebrate.
The Mendezes house is
always filled with the
amazing smells of Mrs.
Mendezes cuban cooking
I often go there for diner.
TheMendezes’ house is
always filled with the
amazing smells of Mrs.
Mendez’s Cuban cooking; I
often go there for dinner.
.
The bisons on the planes
of yellowstone can be
dangerous at times many
tourists have learned this
the hard way by
sustaining serious
injury’s.
The bison on the plains of
Yellowstone can be
dangerous at times; many
tourists have learned this
the hard way by sustaining
serious injuries.
.
My dog got lose last
wednesday I found him
next store eating the
flowers in my neighbors
yard.
My dog got loose last
Wednesday; I found him
next door eating the flowers
in my neighbor’s yard.
Many animals are greatly
effected by the worlds
changing climate and some
may not be able to survive
the effects of Global
Warming for much longer.
Many animals are greatly
affected by the world’s
changing climate, and some
may not be able to survive
the effects of global
warming for much longer..
I should of gone to my
friends play off game last
friday in camden.
I should have gone to my
friend’s playoff game last
Friday in Camden.
Your going to like camping
with the Bush’s but its
important that you bring
alot of bug repellent.
You’re going to like
camping with the Bushes,
but it’s important that you
bring a lot of bug repellent.
AnEagle swooped down to
steal the wolves catch the
wolf creeped sadly away to
look for more pray.
Aneagle swooped down to
steal the wolf’s catch; the
wolf crept sadly away to
look for more prey.
The box of cookies were
left on the table and John
was dissappointed to
find that every last oreo
had been devoured by
his little sister’s.
The box of cookies was left
on the table, and John was
disappointed to find that
every last Oreo had been
devoured by his little
sisters.
Thisbin of festive
christmas decorations
belong in the attic but my
Dad is to busy to move it.
Thisbin of festive
Christmas decorations
belongs in the attic, but
my dad is too busy to
move it.
The children at the
playground is afraid of
Rosses’ Mother
because shes always
yelling at other
peoples’ kids.
The children at the
playground are afraid
of Ross’s mother
because she’s always
yelling at other
people’s kids.
Theboys in the band is
popular with the
students but the
principle finds some of
there music to be
unexceptable.
The boys in the band
are popular with the
students, but the
principal finds some of
their music to be
unacceptable.
One of my sisters are
going to boston this
weekend but I don’t
know whose going with
them.
One of my sisters is
going to Boston this
weekend, but I don’t
know who’s going with
her.
The women’s softball team won their
first championship game; Mom
took me to one of the city’s best
restaurants.