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Faulty Parallelism

The document discusses parallel structure and parallelism in sentences. It provides examples of parallel structure using words, phrases, clauses and other grammatical elements. It also discusses identifying and correcting lack of parallelism. Parallel structure creates a clear, balanced and emphatic style when expressing equal or similarly important ideas.
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Faulty Parallelism

The document discusses parallel structure and parallelism in sentences. It provides examples of parallel structure using words, phrases, clauses and other grammatical elements. It also discusses identifying and correcting lack of parallelism. Parallel structure creates a clear, balanced and emphatic style when expressing equal or similarly important ideas.
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Sentence elements that are alike in


function should also be alike in
construction.
These elements should be in the
same grammatical form . . .
Parallel structure
Parallel is a word in mathematics.
Two or more ideas in a sentence
are related and serve a similar
purpose, they are phrased on same
parts, similarly put together.
 WORDS:
Thinking
Running
INFINITIVES:
To see
To understand
 PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE:
At the time
In the house
SUBORDINATE CLAUSE:
Because I care
After they met
Grammatically Equal
Equal in Sentence elements
It usually appear in a series, in
compound structures, in
comparisons, and in contrasted
elements
Can be two or more words of the
same part of speech, two or more
phrases of the same type, or two or
more clauses of the same type.
 a and b
 a, b, and c
 a or b
 a, b, or c
 not only a but also b
The clauses or phrases joined by
conjunction should have similar
grammatical structure.
 Example:
My first-year English professor was
informative, lively, and a source of
information.
My first-year English professor was (a)
informative, (b) lively, and a (c) source
of information.
Faulty parallelism
 change the elements a and b into noun
phrases or the element c into an adjective.
ALWAYS CHOOSE THE SIMPLEST OPTION.
Change the final element into an adjective
Example:
My first-year English professor was
informative, lively, and inspiring
PARALLEL IN WORDS
isthe placement of equal ideas in
words, phrases, or clauses of
similar types.
Parallelism shows coordinate
structures in sentences.
Usually, you can observe this
parallel structure when you are
enumerating things or ideas.
It is in this case where elements of
the same ideas or grammatical
pattern are linked together.
Iftwo or more ideas in a sentence
stand for ideas that are of equal
importance or similar purpose, they
gain clearness and emphasis if they
are expressed in the same
grammatical structure.
Parallelism means:
“like construction for like ideas”.
In ordinary writing, the principle of
parallelism implies balanced in series.
N N
Adj Adj
PrepP PrepP
Gerund Gerund
Infinitive Infinitive
Phrase Phrase
Clause Clause
Ex.
My English professor not only
demonstrated how to reason persuasively
but also how to avoid logical fallacies.
My English professor not only
demonstrated (a) how to reason
persuasively but also (b) how to avoid
logical fallacies.
Note that element a begins with a verb
but element b doesn’t.
To repair the faulty parallelism, you can
add a verb to the start of element b.
However, since the same verb will work
for both parts of the construction, the
elegant solution is to drag the verb to
the front of the whole construction.
Ex.
My English professor demonstrated not
only (a) how to reason persuasively but
also (b) how to avoid logical fallacies.
He warned me to revise my essay and
that I should pay close attention to
parallel structures.
He warned me (a) to revise my essay
and (b) that I should pay close attention
to parallel structures.
To repair the problem, choose either an
infinitive
Add that clause on both sides of the a
and b construction.
He warned me to revise my essay and
that to pay close attention to parallel
structures.
PARALLEL WORDS
Thinking and running often
accompany one another as I
exercise.
I do not enjoy thinking or running.
PARALLEL PHRASES
She like to look but not to listen.
You will find the light bulbs in the
closet or under the kitchen.
PARALLEL CLAUSES
The manager praised her
employees because they were
dedicated and because they were
willing to work on weekends for
free.
Your new training program was
stimulating and challenging.
Parallel adjectives
He blocks and tackles skillfully.
Parallel Verbs
He is a man who has worked hard
and whom we all respect.
Parallel dependent Clause
I shall return to Purdue, and she
will return to smith.
Parallel Independent Clause
Dianne revels in sweet chocolate
eclairs, long moonlit walks, and
classic jazz music.
Adjective- adjective- object
PARALLEL in STRUCTURE
SERIES OF WORDS
She wanted three things: money,
power, and security.
SERIES OF INFINITIVES
There was an opportunity to do my
taxes, to request an extensions, or
to explain my situation.
SERIES OF PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES
He found cleaning supplies in the
closet, under the sink, but not in the
garage.
SERIES OF CLAUSES
The company doesn’t care about who
you are, how you got here, or why you
have come.
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Gian plays basketball and skillfully.
Gian plays basketball skillfully.
Jessabyl enjoys reading plays and
poetry.
Jessabyl enjoys reading plays and
poetry.
Two noun
Justine blocks and tackles skillfully.
Justine blocks and tackles skillfully.
Two verbs
Craig looked in the drawers and
under the beds.
Craig looked in the drawers and
under the beds.
Two Prepositional Phrases
Identify the parallel structures . .
Makati, Marikina, and Antipolo are
just some of the progressive cities in
the Philippines.
Makati, Marikina, and Antipolo are
just some of the progressive cities in
the Philippines.
(Series of Nouns)
Identify the parallel structures . .
Cell phones are becoming small,
interactive, and beautiful with varied
features.
Cell phones are becoming small,
interactive, and beautiful with varied
features.
(Series of Adjectives)
Identify the parallel structures . .
Writing, swimming, and watching
movies are his favorite past time.
Writing, swimming, and watching
movies are his favorite past time.
(Series of Gerunds)
Identify the parallel structures . .
Larry felt unsure of himself, out of
place, and oddly awkward.
Larry felt unsure of himself, out of
place, and oddly awkward.
(Series of Phrases)
Identifythe parallel structures . .
Misha campaigned against crime and
she mobilized volunteer group against
drugs.
Misha campaigned against crime and
she mobilized volunteer group against
drugs.
(Series of Clauses)
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