Shs Position Paper
Shs Position Paper
PAPER
SHS GRADE - 11
LEARNING OBJECTIVES:
Define a position
paper; and
Explain the
different types of
claims.
PRE-TEST:
Supporting evidence proves a
claim to be true. Supporting
evidence can be a summary,
paraphrased or a direct quote.
Supporting evidence is a crucial
part in body paragraphs and it is
important to be discerning in the
evidence chosen.
FACTUAL KNOWLEDGE
-is the information that is
verifiable and agreed upon
by almost everyone.
FACTUAL KNOWLEDGE
Example:
Doublespeak is a language which pretends to communicate
but rather makes the bad seem good, the negative seem
positive, the unpleasant seem attractive or atleast tolerable. It
is a language which avoids, shifts, or denies responsibility; a
language which is at variance with its real or purported. It is the
language which conceals or prevents thought.
Adapted from: William Lutz, Doubts About Doublespeak p. 127, English for
Academic and Professional Purposes, Textbook. Deped- BLR)
STATISTICAL INFERENCES
-denotes the interpretation
and examples of an
accumulation of facts.
STATISTICAL INFERENCES
Example:
Based on the table presented, it shows that the F-value is
1.96 and the p-value is 0.156 which is higher than 0.05 level
of significance, thus the null hypothesis is accepted. This
means that there is no significant difference in the
performance of students under the three different methods
of teaching. This further means that students performed the
same in any of the 3 teaching methods applied by the
teachers. (LMN)
INFORMED OPINION
- is the opinion developed
through research and/or
expertise of the claim.
INFORMED OPINION
Example:
Classroom research suggests that more talk is associated with higher social
status or power. Many studies have shown that teachers (regardless of
gender) tend to talk for about two-thirds of the available time. But the boys
dominate the relatively small share of the talking time that remains for
pupils. In this context, where talk is clearly valued, it appears that the person
with most status has the right to talk most. The boys may therefore be
asserting a claim to higher status than the girls by approaching the majority
of the time for pupil talk.
(Adapted from: Janet Holmes, “Women Talk Too Much, p. 132 English for Academic and
Professional Purposes, Textbook. Deped- BLR)
PERSONAL TESTIMONY
- focuses on the personal experience
related to a knowledgeable party.
PERSONAL TESTIMONY
Example:
“This is really an extension of what teenagers have
always done: recreate the language in its own image.
But this new lingo combines 11 writing and speaking
to a degree that we’ve never seen before,” says Neil
Randall, an English professor at the University of
Waterloo and author of “Lingo Online: A Report on the
Language of the Keyboard Generation.”
After you have made your pro and con lists, compare the information side by
side. Choose the position you will take based on your audience and your own
viewpoint, ask yourself the following questions;
a) Who is your audience?
b) What do they believe?
c) What is their stand on the issue?
d) How does their interest involve?
e) What evidence is likely to be effective with them.
Language used in
writing a Position
Paper
Position paper is an academic journal written in formal
language of appropriate vocabulary. It communicates
strongly and effectively with uncomplicated language and
sentence structure.
Many position paper writers thought that the content of
their paper is all that matters. Although, the content is
important it doesn’t mean much if the reader cannot
understand what you are trying to emphasize despite great
ideas in your paper but you failed to communicate
effectively. Keep the following in your design
DICTION
- It refers to the choice of words for the
expression of ideas; the construction, disposition,
and application of words in your essay with
clearness, accuracy, variety, mode of expression;
and language.
PARAGRAPH
Clear paragraphs are essential that comes in so many
patterns of two basic principles to remember:
▪ A paragraph is a means of developing and framing an
idea or impression. As a general rule, you should address
only one major idea per paragraph.
▪ Indicate a shift of focus in between paragraphs and
clearly organize its order of information details to
logically position your paper with the use of transitions.
TRANSITIONS
Transitions establish the logical connections of
ideas between sentences, paragraphs, and
sections of your position paper to convey
information clearly and concisely.
TRANSITION TABLE
EXAMPLES:
The lecturer had a monotonous voice; furthermore, he
jumped from one idea to another so that the lecture
was very difficult to follow. (addition)
Paul went to Lakeland college; his daughter, likewise,
did her studies their. (similarity)
Caffeine is a stimulant; thus, it can keep a person
awake at night. (conclusion)
EXAMPLES:
The chairman will be late for the meeting;
meanwhile, we’re to hand out minutes of the last
meeting to the board members. (time)
It’s really cold today; we can’t complain, however, as
it’s been mild overall. (contrast)
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING
Mechanical errors are usually the main
reason for lack of clarity in essays, so be sure
to thoroughly proofread your position paper
which is free from grammar and spelling
mistakes.
CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR!
How long ___________ English?
a. do you learn
b. are you learning
c. have you been learning
d. you learn
CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR!
“Did you speak to Juliet?” “No, I’ve ______ seen
her.”
a. nearly
b. hardly
c. often
d. always
CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR!
You should ________ your homework.
a. make
b. do
c. work
d. give
CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR!
You should ________ your homework.
a. make
b. do
c. work
d. give
BRAIN TEASER!
There is a word in the English language in
which the first two letters signify a male, the
first three letters signify a female, the first
four signify a great man, and the whole word,
a great woman. What is the word?
HEROINE
Structure of a
Position Paper
Position
Paper
Diagra
m
Introduction
- identifies the issue that will be discussed and states the
author’s position on that issue. This shows your main
point of the issue through a firm stance (position).
Sample introduction:
Educational technology is an organized process of
applying modern technology to improve the quality of
education. It is a systematic way of conceptualizing the
execution and evaluation of the educational process.
Nowadays with the help of technology, education for
children is no longer boring as educational technologies
have made it much interesting and easy to use and due to
rapid change in technology, distance is no more a barrier.
(LNM)
Body of the text
- discusses both sides of the issue which addresses and
refutes arguments that contradict the author’s position.
This supports and acknowledges the opposing points and
explains the reason/s by stating the theory, statistical or
scientific data, research study with its author, theorist, or
psychologist through examples of your point.
Body of the text
The integration of technology into the classroom is a great way to reach diversity in
learning styles. Department of Education (DepEd) launched the cyber expo in education and
technology to improve digital literacy in K to 12 Curriculum with the e-learning resources.
(Source: Deped.gov.ph updates)
Digital technology keeps an easy access to learning materials recorded on the World Wide
Web that offers continuous learning irrespective of the learners’ location, able to share their
ideas and experiences through varied learning aids available online.
Nowadays, everyone can attend classes and continue their learning through online classes
at your convenience with the safekeeping of the scholastic records. Although, the digital
technology has limitations and harmful effects in terms of easy accessibility of inappropriate
materials, keeping people attached to their screens almost 24/7, which is causing an entirely
new set of social issues due to the anonymity on the internet and motivates a culture of cyber
criminality making the young minds disconnected to proper norms of conduct. Data from the
PNP Anti-Cybercrime Group (ACG) showed that online crimes i.e. libel, online scam, photo and
video voyeurism, gambling, robbery, online threat, hacking, ATM and credit card fraud soared
from 31% in 2016 to 58% in 2019. (retrieved from acg.pnp.gov.ph August 2020 updates)
Conclusion
- is restating the key points and gives your message
through suggesting resolutions to the issue.
Sample conclusion: