Paraphrasing Arguments
Paraphrasing Arguments
If I don’t know how to tell apart different types of variables, I will definitely fail my statistics exam.
Unfortunately, I don’t even really know what a variable is, let alone how to tell different types apart. I
am doomed to fail my exam!
Premise 1: Knowing how to tell apart different variables is essential to passing my statistics exam.
Premise 2: I do not know how to tell apart different types of variables.
The [present] case does involve two adults who, with full and mutual consent from each
other, engaged in sexual practices common to a homosexual life style. The petitioners
are entitled to respect for their private lives. The state cannot demean their existence or
control their destiny by making their private sexual conduct a crime. Their right to
liberty under the Due Process Clause [of the Fourteenth Amendment to the U.S.
Constitution] gives them the full right to engage in their conduct without intervention of
the government. It is a premise of the Constitution that there is a realm of personal
liberty which the government may not enter. The Texas statute furthers no legitimate
state interest which can justify its intrusion into the personal and private life of the
individual.
Although the general thrust of this decision is clear, the structure of the argument, which is really a complex
of distinct arguments, is not. We can clarify the whole by paraphrasing the decision of the Court as follows:
1. The Constitution of the United States guarantees a realm of personal liberty that
includes the private, consensual sexual activity of adults.
2. The conduct of these petitioners was within that realm of liberty and they therefore
had a full right, under the Constitution, to engage in the sexual conduct in question
without government intervention.
3. The Texas statute intrudes, without justifi cation, into the private lives of these
petitioners, and demeans them, by making their protected, private sexual conduct a
crime.
4. The Texas statute that criminalizes such conduct therefore wrongly denies the rights
of these petitioners and must be struck down as unconstitutional.
In this case the paraphrase does no more than set forth clearly what the
premises indubitably assert.
Sometimes, however, paraphrasing can bring to the surface what was assumed
in an argument but was not fully or clearly stated.
The great English mathematician, G. H. Hardy, in A Mathematician’s Apology
(Cambridge University Press, 1940), argued thus:
“Archimedes will be remembered when Aeschylus is forgotten, because languages die and
mathematical ideas do not.”
Premise: Universities have commonly been offering strange literary theories and assorted
oddities, in place of the writing courses that ought to have been offered. Students have been
shortchanged.
Conclusion: Vast numbers of students cannot express themselves well in writing.
WORK ON THIS
Racially diverse nations tend to have lower levels of social support than homogenous ones.
People don’t feel as bound together when they are divided on ethnic lines and are less likely to
embrace mutual support programs. You can have diversity or a big welfare state. It’s hard to
have both.
—David Brooks (presenting the views of Seymour Lipset), “The American
Way of Equality,” The New York Times , 14 January 2007
Premise: People divided on ethnic lines tend not to adopt programs that will give mutual
support.
Conclusion (and premise of the following argument): Therefore nations that are racially
diverse tend to have lower levels of social support than nations that are racially homogenous.
Conclusion: A welfare state with a racially diverse population is in tension, and the more
racially diverse a community is, the more difficult it is to maintain comprehensive welfare
programs.
The New York Times reported, on 30 May 2000, that some scientists were seeking a way to
signal back in time. A critical reader responded thus:
It seems obvious to me that scientists in the future will never find a way to signal back in time. If they
were to do so, wouldn’t we have heard from them by now?
—Ken Grunstra, “Reaching Back in Time,”
The New York Times , 6 June 2000
Premise: If future scientists find a way to signal back in time, their signals would already have
reached us.
Premise: No such signals have ever reached us.
Conclusion: Future scientists never will find a way to signal back in time.