On Legislative Drafting - July 27, 2023
On Legislative Drafting - July 27, 2023
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ELEMENTS OF LEGISLATIVE DRAFTING
ELEMENTS OF A LEGISLATION - ILLUSTRATION
ELEMENT 1 – PREAMBLE OF THE LEGISLATION
Concise
• Archaic words - words that are no longer in everyday usage. For example.
“hereinafter”, “wherein”, “thereto”.
• Vague words - certain words can be unclear and can be the source of frequent
litigation precisely because of their vagueness. For example. “endeavour”, “proper”,
“satisfactory”, “harm”.
• Foreign Words - foreign words, including Latin words, should be avoided. For example.
inter vivos (between living persons), mutatis mutandis (apply with necessary
modifications).
LANGUAGE GUIDELINES
• While the Indian laws tend to use “shall” liberally, in different contexts, the word can
be understood to mean either “may”, “must” or “will”. To avoid confusion, the use of
the words “shall”, “may” or “will” must be used judiciously.
• Simple words - it is best to avoid unnecessary words and phrases, where fewer words
(sometimes no words at all) will convey the same meaning. For example. increase,
reduce or alter such limits (change such limits), in the manner contemplated in
(according to).
LANGUAGE GUIDELINES
• Preference should be given to simpler sentences with simpler words. For example: the
efficient discharge of its functions (efficiently perform its functions), by creating
awareness among the consumers and the industry (by making the consumers and the
industry aware of)
• Positive sentences must be treated as the rule, and negative sentences as the
exception, since the former are simpler to read.
• For example: No court shall take cognizance of any offence punishable under this Act
save on a complaint made by or under the authority of the appropriate Government (A
court may take cognizance of any offence punishable under this Act only on
complaints made or authorised by the appropriate Government).
LANGUAGE GUIDELINES
• For example: An appeal filed before the High Court shall be heard by a Bench of not
less than two Judges of the High Court (A Bench of two or more Judges of the High
Court will hear an appeal filed before the High Court).
• The subject and predicate should be placed close together as it allows for instant
identification of the person who has to discharge an obligation, and the obligation to
be discharged.
• For example: The Executive Director may, if he is of the opinion that immediate action
is necessary on any matter, exercise any power conferred on any authority of the
Regional Centre by or under this Act (The Executive Director may exercise any power
conferred on any authority of the Regional Centre under this Act, if the Executive
Director believes that immediate action is necessary on any matter).
GENDER NEUTRALITY
• The General Clauses Act, 1897 states “words importing the masculine gender
shall be taken to include females”.
• However, gender-neutral drafting is now seen as the essence of the hour when it
comes to reforming legislative drafting.
• Usage of male pronouns should be avoided. Instead, the relevant noun can be
repeated.
• Words that end with “man” should be avoided. Such words can be replaced with
words ending with "person". For eg. chairman (chairperson).
USE OF ILLUSTRATIONS AND EXAMPLES
• Illustrations can provide context and help clarify the intended meaning. By
presenting specific instances or scenarios visually, it becomes easier for readers
to understand how the clause applies or excludes certain situations.
• For example – The Indian Penal Code, 1860 uses a plethora of illustrations in
order to explain the provisions in a comprehensive and easy to understand
manner.
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