The document discusses using parallel structure as a cohesive device in writing. It defines parallel structure as using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance, which can occur at the word, phrase, or clause level when joined with coordinating conjunctions. Examples are provided of parallel and non-parallel structures using words, phrases, sentences and different parts of speech. Maintaining parallel structure promotes clarity and readability.
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G8 UsIng Parallel Structure As A Cohesive Device
The document discusses using parallel structure as a cohesive device in writing. It defines parallel structure as using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance, which can occur at the word, phrase, or clause level when joined with coordinating conjunctions. Examples are provided of parallel and non-parallel structures using words, phrases, sentences and different parts of speech. Maintaining parallel structure promotes clarity and readability.
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USING PARALLEL
STRUCTURE AS A COHESIVE DEVICE -T. VINCENT GOALS
• Recognize and use parallel structures
containing sentences of the same pattern and words of the same parts of speech. WHEN ARE ELEMENTS OF A SENTENCE PARALLEL? PARALLEL STRUCTURE
• Parallel structure means using the same pattern of words to
show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance. This can happen at the word, phrase, or clause level. The usual way to join parallel structures is with the use of coordinating conjunctions such as "and" or "or." WORDS AND PHRASES
• With the -ing form (gerund) of words:
Parallel: Mary likes hiking, swimming, and bicycling. • With infinitive phrases: Parallel: Mary likes to hike, to swim, and to ride a bicycle. OR Mary likes to hike, swim, and ride a bicycle. (Note: You can use "to" before all the verbs in a sentence or only before the first one.) DO NOT MIX FORMS. • Example 1 Not Parallel: Mary likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a bicycle. Parallel: Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a bicycle. • Example 2 Not Parallel: The production manager was asked to write his report quickly, accurately, and in a detailed manner. Parallel: The production manager was asked to write his report quickly, accurately, and thoroughly. • Example 3 Not Parallel: The teacher said that he was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for the exam, completed his lab problems in a careless manner, and his motivation was low. Parallel: The teacher said that he was a poor student because he waited until the last minute to study for the exam, completed his lab problems in a careless manner, and lacked motivation. A parallel structure may contain sentences of the same pattern, such as those in Lions Roar.” Lions roar, eagles soar, Leopards growl, cheetahs prowl, Snakes slide, eagles glide, Monkeys leap, snails creep, Ants heap, fledglings cheep, Birds sing, wasps sting Panthers stalk, people talk. WHERE IS THE RAIN?
The rain has come, the rivers will flow.
(both sentences consist of a subject and an intransitive verb.) The sun is so hot, and the land is so dry. (both sentences consisting of a subject, a linking verb, and a predicate adjective) OTHER PARALLEL STRUCTURES CONTAIN WORDS OF THE SAME PART SPEECH
1. Nouns parallel to nouns
Ex. The dry weather worries all animals in the landpreys, predators, plant eaters, and meat-eaters alike. 2. Verbs parallel to verbs Ex. Unseen animals glide, crawl, creep, and prowl in the dark night. 3. Adjectives parallel to adjectives Ex. The miners walked in the rain – tired, cold, and wet. 4. Adverbs parallel to adverbs Ex. Lamely and unsteadily, the wounded leopard limped away.