Storyboarding and Presentation Writing
Storyboarding and Presentation Writing
Contents Competitive Landscape Industry Curve New Entrants Company Profiles Industry Curve New Entrants Company Profiles
Competitive
Section 2 Competitive
Environment
Environment
Storyboarding
Training Exercise
Presentation Writing
You may have heard that management consultants spend the majority of their time
cranking out PowerPoint slides. There is much truth to do this—and for good
reason.
A PowerPoint presentation is not only a great communication tool, it is also the form
of most consulting deliverables—i.e. the end product purchased by the client. The
presentation must lay out the recommended solutions, the the key takeaways, and
analyses performed.
You may have done the most thorough, bullet-proof analysis and formulated the best
strategic recommendation. However, all this is worthless, if you can’t communicate
it clearly and in a compelling way through your PowerPoint slides.
This presentation focuses on the art of presentation development. Topics covered
include storyboarding, pyramid logic structure, rule of 2, document writing
principles, and slide structuring. It also includes a training exercise.
2 Keep it simple.
A storyboard will guide your information needs... so, write one early in the
project or piece of work:
− Use the storyboard to help identify and communicate the analysis needed.
− Do not wait until you have “the answer” before planning how to communicate the result.
Creating a storyboard up-front will help you to:
− Visualize each page of the document.
− Organize and communicate ideas.
− Check the logic flow (“necessary and sufficient” arguments).
− Organize the team.
− Check the team progress.
A variety of media:
– Post-its.
– Flips.
– A4 pages (with 1 end-panel/slide per A4 page, or 2/4/6/8 end-panels/slides per A4 page).
Different levels of detail:
– Some roughly indicate content per panel/slide.
– Some show exactly what will be on each panel/slide, e.g. what graphs/charts will show.
As appropriate, revise and refine your storyboard over the course of the project.
What will work best for your specific audience? (Know your audience.)
Objectives Approach
Objectives
& Approach
Vertical
Logic Contents Overview of Trends Competitive Trends Trends in Customer Trends in Technology
Needs
Section 1 Market
Market
Overview
Overview
Section 2 Competitive
Competitive
Environment
Environment
Horizontal Logic
Develop the
Introduce the Summarize
Supporting
Hypothesis the Argument
Argument
Hypothesis
Sub-supporting ideas
(Pages)
Supporting facts
(Evidence/facts on
each page)
Horizontal
Relationships
The pyramid will have as many levels as needed to support the logical hierarchy.
Source: Barbara Minto, The Pyramid Principle: Logic in Writing and Thinking, 1996
Reading only the headlines should give the reader a clear idea of the story you
are telling.
Headlines are the hooks that draw attention to the text below.
They should quickly create and hold the audience’s interest.
Relative simplicity lowers the risk of losing anyone in your audience:
− Losing audience is always a risk.
− It’s hard to win back an audience once they’re off the hook.
− Complex or illogical storyline raises risk.
− Simple (but not simplistic) storyline lowers risk.
Finally, bumpers tell another story—the implications of the above message for
your audience.
Storyboarding
Training Exercise
Presentation Writing
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Training Exercise
Presentation Writing
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Expect to see a lot of red pen on your panels from your manager and from editing, don’t be
alarmed... be grateful!
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