WK4 - DAY 2 - Patterns of Written Text Coherence Cohesion
WK4 - DAY 2 - Patterns of Written Text Coherence Cohesion
WRITING
WEEK 4.2
Properties of MELCS
Well-Written
❑ Evaluate a written text based on its properties
(organization, coherence and cohesion, language
use and mechanics
Arrange Me!
■Instruction:
■Arrange the following jumbled
letters to form the correct
cohesive device that will make
the sentence complete.
ALSYTL 1. When I entered the room, the teacher asked for
my notice of admission. Then, she instructed
me to introduce myself and ,LASTLY
she
told me where I need to sit.
LAINFLY 2. The doctor’s prescription was really effective.
FINALLY , the pain in my knee had dropped!
SOLA 3. The officers of the organization donated snacks
to the front liners. ALSO
, the members
provided surgical masks and sanitizers too.
LIKEWIS
ILEISWKE 4. I think guavas taste good. E ,
mangoes taste the same.
SINCE
ISNEC 5. She refunded the customers, the
item products have not arrived for weeks.
REOWHEV 6. Anna is an excellent student in
school. HOWEVER
, she doesn’t do
homework on time.
ESNNEHTSEOL 7. It was drizzling outside. NONETHELESS ,
he still pursued his evening run.
EROFEREHT 8. The accusation has no genuine evidence
THEREFORE
, the case was dismissed.
EROMVROE 9. His report was poorly written, MOREOVER
it had no substance.
RERTHUF 10. The teacher elucidated
FURTHER the lesson to the
class well. , he provided
examples to supplement the
discussion.
Analysis
Think-Pair-Share: Based on the activity, answer the
guide questions.
■ As we can see in the first sentence, and is used to add something to the previous
statement resulting to a clearer understanding that the latter is a sentence that
gives supplementary information. In the second sentence, but is used to show
how something positive and negative is said about Facebook. Therefore, but is
used to contrast ideas or to show difference between ideas.
What is Cohesion?
■What is Coherence?
■What is Cohesion?
■What are the different types of cohesive
devices?
■What are the different methods of cohesion?
Applicatio
n
■ A. Cohesive Devices
■Instructions: Below is an excerpt or
portion of a text which lacks
cohesive devices. Complete it by
choosing your answers from the
words inside the parenthesis.
■ (optional: there is provided soft copy worksheet for this activity or the subj. teacher may project the written text on the screen)
I could not imagine how I become what I am today 1. (and,
for)_______it was really different before. I stand 2. (before,
after)________you now as a teacher. It was seven years ago,3. (so,
yet)________I could still imagine as if it were just yesterday. I used to carry
bags containing vegetables
4. (such as, for)________okra, eggplant and bamboo shoots. I would sell
them to the neighborhood where my playmates would 5. (not only,
either)__________ laugh at me, and tell stories of our poor family, 6. (but
also, nor)__________bully me. 7. (However, Moreover)________, I did not
mind them
8. ______(because, so that) I needed to surprise my mother. I am secretly
buying her medicines. Four years after, I did not climb the hills to get
vegetables anymore instead I climbed the stage where my healed mother
pinned more ribbons on me.
Now, I still carry my bag no longer with vegetables to
sell but with the harvested fruits of hard work namely
wisdom, knowledge and values. I carry them free for you
as long as, you promise that you would put them in your
bags too. 9. (However, Hence)________ my dearest
students it really matters how you carry your bag. It can be
heavy at times and it does not hurt much to take a break.
Rest and carry on. Never forget that there are people
willing to help.
10. (Yet, So)________as your classmate, do you want me
to help you carry your bag too?
Applicatio
n
■ B. Methods of Cohesion
■Instructions: Read each sentence and
identify whether it is anaphoric,
cataphoric or exophoric references
then explain why on the space
provided.
■ (optional: there is provided soft copy worksheet for this activity or the subj. teacher may project the written text on the screen)
■ 1. When he arrived home, John went to sleep.
■ 2. I went out with Joan on Sunday. She looked awful.
■ 3. A large grey cat was lying on the stairs, and I had to step over it.
■ 4. If you want some, here's some strawberry ice-cream.
■ 5. Look at that.
■ 6. He may be late. If so we shall miss the bus.
■ 7. Tom may arrive this morning. If so, I'll be very happy.
■ 8. I've got a pet goldfish, and my brother's got one too.
■ 9. Benjamin was much more anxious than Lewis, but in the end they
both enjoyed the flight.
■ 10. Did the gardener water those plants?
Reinforcement Activities:
(Optional)
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