Writing Skills Unit One
Writing Skills Unit One
Examples:
He saw the girl who had helped him.
He is wearing a coat which looks nice.
She can’t pass the exam unless she studies
for it.
• If a complex sentence begins with an
independent clause, a comma is not used
between the clauses.
• If a complex sentence begins with dependent
clause then a comma is used after the
dependent clause.
• See the following examples:
Examples:
1. He went to college and I went to market
where I bought a book.
2. I like Mathematics but my bother likes
Biology because he wants to be a doctor.
• In the above sentences, there are two
independent clauses and one dependent clause
Identifying and Correcting Faulty Sentences in Writing
• Sentence Fragments
A sentence fragment (or incomplete sentence) is
almost a sentence but lacks a subject, a finite
verb, or a completed thought.
Sentence fragments are one of the three serious
errors.
Often, but not always, sentence fragments begin
with "That," "Because," or an "–ing" verb,
Examples of a sentence fragment
• Because she was new in town and had not
met any of her neighbors.*
• That the dog would have to be put outside
while the house was fumigated.*
Examples:
• We listened to music all night my favorite song
was “ Forever."*
• I took English 1011 last year it was a great class!
*
• He used to work at CBE now he works at
AbayBank.*
• To Correct run-on sentences separate the
complete sentences with:
(1) a period, (2) a semicolon, (3) or a comma
followed by a conjunction (such as "but," "and,"
or "so").
Examples:
• We listened to music all night. My favorite song
was “Forever."
• I took English 1011 last spring, and it was a
great class!
• He used to work at CBE, but now he works at
Abay Bank.
• Comma Splices
A comma splice occurs when a comma separates two
complete sentences.
Comma splices are one of the three serious
"sentence-boundary" errors.
Examples:
• He could not stand the long hours, he quitted his
job.*
• We all watched Titanic, it was a great movie!*
• Susan was overwhelmed with work, however she
was able to complete her work before she left the
office.*
• Comma splices can be corrected in several
different ways, including:
• using a period instead of the comma,
• using a semicolon instead of the comma, and
• adding a conjunction (such as "or," "but," "and,"
"if") immediately after the comma.
Examples:
• He could not stand the long hours, so he quitted
his job.
• We all watched Titanic. It was a great movie!
• Susan was overwhelmed with work; however,
she was able to complete her work before she
left the office.
• Mixed Construction
Mixed construction occurs when one part of a
sentence does not logically or grammatically
follow another part of the sentence.
Examples:
• In Alice Walker’s "To Hell with Dying" is
about the love the narrator shares with Mr.
Sweet.*
• Because of pollution is one reason so many
animals are endangered.*
Most often, mixed construction can be corrected
if you consider the subject and the verb of the
sentence in which mixed construction occurs.
Examples:
– He likes to listen to music, to watch movies, and going
swimming.*
– She understood how to change the oil and replacing
the air filter.*
– The assignment required students to identify an
important character in the novel, to describe this
character’s actions, and explaining how the
character’s actions influence the plot.*
To correct faulty parallelism, you first must recognize
that you are balancing items in your sentence or
presenting two or more items in a series.
Separating the different parts of your sentence should
help.
Examples:
• He likes to listen to music, to watch movies, and to
swim.
• She understood how to change the oil and how to
replace the air filter.
• The assignment required students to identify an
important character in the novel, to describe this
character’s actions, and to explain how the character’s
actions influence the plot.
• SUBJECT-VERB DISAGREEMENT
In standard written English, singular subject
takes a singular verb, and a plural subject
requires a plural verb.
• Disagreement
Military advisors has been sent to Central Africa.
Fast, effective medical service are one of the major
goals of an Area Health Center.
• Do not confuse the plural ‘s’ ending of a noun
with the singular's’ ending of a verb.
• An ‘s’ at the end of a noun almost always
signals that the word is plural, whereas an ‘s’
at the end of a verb indicates that it is
singular.Therefore,if you have written a
sentence in which the subject and verb both
end in ‘s’,they probably disagree in number.
• Disagreement
In the latest air disaster film, two planes flying
over a large city collides.
Exceptions
1.A few nouns(news, economics,etc.)are plural
in form but singular in meaning.When one of
these singular nouns functions as a
subject,its verb should also be singular.
• Example
The news from Middle East is all bad.
Economics attracts many students on this
campus.
2.When a title is the subject of a sentence,the
verb should also be singular-even if the title
includes a plural noun or pronoun.
• Example
Jaws Fennimore Cooper’s The Pioneers takes
place in the west.
Jaws has made some people afraid to go in the
water.
• Note that in both of these sentences the
subject is the title itself, not the words
comprising it.
• When the subject of a sentence is a collective
noun,use a singular verb if the noun refers to
a group as a unit and a plural verb if the noun
refers to the individuals comprising a group.
• Collective noun referring to members as a unit
The negotiating team disagrees with the
ambassador’s policy statement.
• Collective noun referring to individual
members
The negotiating team disagree about how to
respond to the ambassador’s policy
statement.
In the first sentence above,the verb is singular
because the negotiating team is unified in its
disagreement with the ambassador’s policy
statement.
In the second sentence, the verb is plural
because the members of the negotiating team
respond differently to the ambassador’s
statement.
When using an indefinite pronoun as subject,
choose a verb form that tells the reader
whether the pronoun is singular or plural in
meaning.
• Some of the liquid in the beaker has spilled on
the floor.(Some is a singular quantity and
therefore needs a singular verb.)
• Some of the skateboard artists were doing
flips as they glided along the sidewalk .(some
refers to more than one skateboard artists
and therefore needs a plural verb.)
Besure to make a distinction
between these two indefinite
pronouns and the two other
classes of indefinite
pronouns:those which are always
plural and(several,few,any)
• And those which are always singular(each,
everyone,everybody,somebody,anybody,eithe
r,neither,etc.)
Many speak ,but few listen
Everyone has the same problem.
*Make a verb in a relative clause agree in
number with the antecedent of the relative
pronoun.
• Because a relative pronoun who,which,that)
does not have distinictive singular and plural
forms,you must locate the antecedent inorder
to determine the number of the pronoun.
Example
The person who has the most experience will
receive first consideration.(singular
antecedent-singular verb)
The people who have the most experience will
receive first consideration.(plural antecedent-
plural verb).
*To determine the number of a verb with the
compound antecedent,note the type of
conjunction(s)used to unite the elements of
the compounds.
If you form a compound subject with and,make
the verb plural;if you join the subjects with
or,nor,either,or neither,make the verb
singular.
But,if you join subjects with ‘either…
or,’’neither…nor’or’not only…but also’,make
the verb agree with the part of the compound
closest to it.
Example
The highway patrol and the national guard were
available for emergency duty.
*Use a sigular verb with such constructions only
on the rare occasion when you want to
indicate that the elements joined by and
function as one.
Example
The famous pirate and smuggler was capable of
evading even the swiftest of his pursuers.
Neither of the students is attending classes.
John or David takes the first rank.
Neither reason nor intuitions are infallible.
Either thunderstorms or heavy fog makes
driving difficult.
Exercise 1
Correct the errors in subject-verb agreement.
1.Neither the chief airport official nor the
president of the airline were certain that the
strike could be averted.
2.If either of the rescue teams get through in
time,it will be a miracle.
3.Star Wars were a picture that spawned
numerous inferior imitations.
4.The source of the ruler’s problems were the
apathy and mistrust of his subjects.
5.Reducing the inefficiencies in production lines
were the main concern of the newly hired
consultants.
6.There is several ivory chess sets in the wall
safe.
7.The dancers and their director gives a benefit
performance yearly for the community.
Exercise 2
Correct the errors in subject-verb agreement in
the following passage.
Two of the biggest problems a college freshman
face are homesickness and lonliness.Freshmen
on their own for the first time often
experiences feelings of anxiety and insecurity
until they adjust to their new independence.
However,once the newest members of the
campus community makes the necessary
adjustments,solitude and new found freedom
becomes enjoyable rather than frightening.
• Pronoun-Antecedent Disagreement
A pronoun and its antecedent(the word or
words that the pronoun refers to)should
always agree in number.A singular pronoun
requires a singular antecedent,and a plural
pronoun requires a plural antecedent.
Example
The antique collector placed her bid.
The antique collectors placed their bids.
With collective nouns such as
committee,team,jury,and the like,use either a
singular or a plural pronoun depending on
whether you want the reader to think of the
members of the group as a unit or as
individuals.
The committee submitted its report to the boss.
The committee disagreed about whether they
should submit their report to the boss
When using an indefinite pronoun as an
antecedent,note whether it is singular or plural
and make any pronoun that refers to it agree in
number.
• Like collective nouns,some indefinite pronouns
(any,all,some) may be singular or plural.
Some of the baggage was damaged when it fell
out of the trunk.
(some of the baggage is conceived as a single
amount).
The graduating seniors gathered in the
auditorium.Some wore their robes ,and some
wore their school clothes.(some refers to
several individuals).
Few remained in their homes during the
earthquake.
Most indefinite pronouns ,however,are always
singular.These include such as words as
each,every,either,neither,everyone,someone
,anyone,etc.Confusion can arise when words
intervene between an indefinite pronoun and
its antecedent.
Disagreement
Each of the members of women’s association
had their own motives.
Agreement
Each of the members of the women’s
association had her own motives.
Somebody left a car in the middle of the street.
Students have different theories about how to
prepare for tests.
Everyone has his/her own theory about how to
prepare tests.
In general,a pronoun should be plural if its
antecedent is a compound consisting of two or
more words joined by and.
My brother and his wife like cold weather,but
they are having second thoughts about moving
to Alaska.
Exception:
If the elements joined by and refer to the same
person or thing,treat the entire compound as
A singular antecedent and use the singular form
for any pronouns that refer to it.
The famous actor and director recently
completed his new film.
If the anecedent is a compound in which the
elements are linked by or,nor,either,or
neither,use a singular pronoun,but if the
compound is linked by elements like ‘either…
or’,’neither…nor,or’not only…but also’,
The pronoun should agree with the part of the
antecedent that is closest to it.
Example:
Neither the life jacket nor the flashlight was in its
place.
Neither the life jacket nor the flashlights were in
their proper place.
Neither the life jackets nor the flashlight was in its
proper place.
Pronoun-Antecedent Disagreement
Execicise 1
Revise each of the following sentences to
eliminate pronoun-antecedent disagreements.
1.Each instructors has a philosophy of teaching
that they follow.
2.The encounter group meet every Tuesday in
their room on the third floor.
3.Neither of the campers was very happy with
the weather they encountered during the
backwoods trip.
4.The committee makes their recommendations
for new bylaws after their last meeting of the
year.
5.The entire coin collection was stolen from
their hiding places.
6.Everyone who has finished their warm-up can
begin their floor exercise.
7.The great doctor and scientist will take a
vacation only after the completion of their
research.
8.Some of the logs spilled from its bin on the
back of the truck.
Exercise 2
Correct the pronoun-disagreement error in the
following passage.
Everyone has their favourite kind of music,but
few can tell specifically what makes it
appealing.Like the kids on American
Bandsand,the average music lover can
describe their reactions to the music only in
general terms,such as”I like the beat”or
“It’s easy to dance to.”These people fail to
realize that each of the songs they admire has
their distinctive features.By analyzing the
appeal of a song,both the enthusiast and the
average listener derive greater enjoyment and
appreciation.
• Lack of Subject/Verb Agreement(Revision)
Lack of subject/verb agreement occurs when
a verb does not agree in number with its
subject.
Examples:
– One of my teachers are in the office.*
•
Examples
– China, one of the most powerful nations on
Earth, has a huge population.
– Jakson's grandmother, who was born in 1930,
lived through the Second World War.
– Cats, unlike dogs, do not respect their
masters.
– My friend, Jim, likes to go scuba diving.
• Participial phrases
Examples
– Hearing that her father was in hospital,
Jane left work immediately.
– Walking to the bus stop that morning, Sam
knew it was going to be a special day.
• Tag questions
Examples
– She lives in Paris, doesn't she?
– We haven't met, have we?
• Interjections
Examples
–Yes, I will stay a little longer,
thank you.
–No, he isn't like other boys.
–Wait, I didn't mean to scare you.
• A final warning
• Putting a comma in the wrong place can lead
to a sentence with a completely different
meaning, look at these two sentences:
Examples
– the bus' wheel
– the babies' crying
– the ladies' tennis club
– the teachers' journal
• Proper nouns (names of people, cities, countries)
that end in s can form the possessive either by
adding the apostrophe + s or simply adding the
apostrophe.
• Today both forms are considered correct
(Jones's or Jones'), and many large
organizations now drop the apostrophe
completely (e.g. Barclays Bank, Missing Persons
Bureau) when publishing their name.
Examples
– The Hughes' home (or the Hughes's home)
– Mr Jones's shop (or Mr Jones' shop)
– Charles' book (or Charles's book)
• Hyphens
Generally, hyphens are used to join two words or
parts of words together while avoiding confusion or
ambiguity.
Examples
– run-down
– up-to-date
• There are some cases where hyphens preserve
written clarity such as where there are letter
collisions, where a prefix is added, or in family
relations
Examples
– co-operate
– bell-like
– anti-nuclear
• In some cases though, a hyphen does change
the meaning of a sentence.
Example
– I am thinking of re-covering my sofa (= to put a new
cover on it)
– I would like to recover my sofa. (= from someone
who has borrowed or stolen it)
• Hyphens in numbers
Use a hyphen with compound numbers from
twenty-one to ninety-nine.
Examples
– fifty-one
– eighty-nine
• In written fractions place a hyphen between
the numerator and denominator except if
there is already a hyphen in either the
numerator or the denominator.
Examples
– two-fifths
– one-third
• Use a hyphen when a number forms part of
an adjectival compound
Examples
– France has a 35-hour working week.
– He won the 100-metre sprint.
• Dashes
Dashes can be used to add parenthetical
statements or comments in much the same
way as you would use brackets.
In formal writing you should use the bracket
rather than the dash as a dash is considered
less formal.
Dashes can be used to create emphasis in a
sentence.
Examples
– You may think she is a liar - she isn't.
– She might come to the party - you never know
• Brackets and Parentheses
• The difference between a 'bracket' and a
'parentheses' can be a bit confusing.
• Generally, 'parentheses' refers to round
brackets ( ) and 'brackets' to square
brackets [ ].
• However, we are more and more used to
hearing these referred to simply as
'round brackets' or 'square brackets'.
• Usually we use square brackets - [ ] - for
special purposes such as in technical
manuals.