Descriptive Writing Exercises
Descriptive Writing Exercises
When you are writing things in a story to do with a character, try to name things.
If you are talking about a product, be specific and name it. Ie: instead of saying ‘the car’ say
‘the nissan micra’ ect ect.
You need to have a picture of your character and your setting in your head or else your reader
will never be able to visualise them.
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Setting and Atmosphere
Setting and atmosphere are vital to every story. It is important that you describe where the action is
taking place. Use descriptive language to create a picture of the setting in the readers mind and to
conjure up its atmosphere.
Use adjectives
Where appropriate, base the setting of your story on a place you already know.
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This is one of the most important things that you will have to make sure that you
do when you are writing your story.
We want our readers to be able to visualise exactly what is happening in your
story as that will make it so much more exciting then us just telling them exactly
what has happened.
An Example of showing: Sandra’s steps slowed, and finally stopped. She put a
hand to her brow, and massaged it.
Show Don’t Tell Do not tell the reader what is happening. Show them. This is far more effective.
What are some of the ways/techniques we can use to show rather than tell in our
writing?
If you are looking for help with this - use your senses!
A way to avoid showing rather than telling is to avoid the overuse of adverbs.
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Use Your Senses!
• Embellished • Exotic
• Exuberant
• Emotional
• Fashionable
• Empty
• Faithful
• Enchanted
• Famous
• Energetic
• Fancy
• Envious
• Fantastic
• Enthusiastic • Fatal
• Ethical • Fearful
• Euphoric • Female
• Filthy • Intelligent
• Firm • Intrepid
• Flat • Jocular
• Jovial
• Flawed
• Joyful
• Flustered
• Jubilant
• Focused
• Keen
• Foolhardy
• Kind
• Gregarious
• Lanky
• Grim • Lazy
• Handsome • Limp
• Handy • Luxurious
• Mediocre • Organic
• Mellow • Ornate
• Miserable • Ordinary
• Nocturnal • Powerless
• Naive • Practical
• Nasty • Precious
• Neat • Puzzled
• Needy • Quarrelsome
• Negative • Querulous
• Nervous • Questionable
• Nice • Quirky
• Ragged • Scornful
• Rapid • Secret
• Ready • Selfish
• Recent • Super
• Regal • Talented
• Reliable • Tame
• Sad • Tasty
• Sandy • Tender
• Sane • Tense
• Scarce • Terse
• Scented • Terrible
• Varied
• Thankful
• Vast
• Thoughtful
• Victorious
• Thoughtless • Vivacious
• Tired • Wandering
• Tough • Weary
• Wicked
• Troubling
• Wide
• Ugly • Wild
• Uninterested • Witty
• Unusual • Worrisome
• Wrong
• Upset
• Young
• Uptight • Zealous
These sentences get the point across:
Showing
not Telling But we can make them more detailed and
engaging:
Describe an Object You cannot use the same adjective more than once.
Describe your
Favourite Food Don’t forget about your 5
senses… think about the
texture of the food and how
you can best describe it for us
as readers.