4.4 - Parallelism - Abstraction
4.4 - Parallelism - Abstraction
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1. Identify sentences with faulty parallel
structure in the excerpt of Chinua
Achebe's "How the Leopard Got His
Claws" and "Arrow of God".
2. Interpret and discuss sentences with
parallel structure and faulty parallel
structure.
3. Compare and contrast a parallel
structure with a faulty parallel
structure.
4. Construct sentences with appropriate
parallel structures.
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1. What is your initial idea
of parallelism based on
the previous activities?
(Not Parallel)
My hobbies are reading,
gardening, and to sew.
(Parallel)
My hobbies are reading,
gardening, and sewing.
Using
Parallel
Structure
With Coordinating
Conjunctions
(Not Parallel)
My best friend took me to a dance
and showing.
(Parallel)
My best friend took me to a dance
and a show.
With Correlative Conjunctions
(Not Parallel)
My dog not only likes to play
fetch, but also chase cars.
(Parallel)
My dog not only likes to play
fetch, but he also likes to chase
cars.
With Phrases or Clauses of
Comparison
(Not Parallel)
I would rather pay for my education
than financial aid.
(Parallel)
I would rather pay for my education
than receive financial aid.
With Lists
(Not Parallel)
Before the operation, Martin felt
discouraged, embarrass, and rejected.
(Parallel)
Before the operation, Martin felt
discouraged, embarrassed, and
rejected.
O N
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An Excerpt from
“ARROW OF GOD”
― Chinua Achebe
Ezeulu went into his barn
and take down one yam from
the bamboo platform built
specially for the twelve
sacred yams. There were
eight left.
He knew there would be
eight; nevertheless he
counted them carefully. He
had already eaten three and
has the fourth in his hand.
He checked the remaining
ones again and goes back to
his obi, shutting the door of
the barn carefully after him.
His log fire was smoldering.
He reached for a few sticks
of firewood stacked in the
corner, sets them carefully
on the fire and placed the
yam, like a sacrifice, on top.
As he waited for the yam to
roast, he plans the coming
event in his mind. Today was
Oye. Tomorrow would be
Afo and the next day Nkwo,
the day of the great market.
The festival of the Pumpkin
Leaves would fall on the third
Nkwo from that day. Tomorrow
he would send for his assistants
and tell them to announce the
day to the six villages of
Umuaro.
An Excerpt from
“HOW THE
LEOPARD GOT HIS
CLAWS”
― Chinua Achebe
In the beginning…all the
animals in the forest lived as
friends. Their king was the
leopard. He was strong, but
gentle and wiser. He ruled the
animals well, and they all like
him.
At that time the animals did not
fight one another. Most of them
had no sharp teeth or clawing.
They did not need them. Even
King Leopard had only small
teeth. He had no claws at all.
Only the dog had big,
sharped teeth. The other
animals said he was ugly,
and they laughed at him.
“It is foolish to carry sharp things in the mouth,”
said the tortoise.