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chapter eight

Indirectness in Persuasive Messages

McGraw-Hill/Irwin © 2008 The McGraw-Hill Companies, Inc. All rights reserved.


Indirectness in Persuasive Messages

 Advice about persuasion


 Persuasive requests
 Sales messages
Advice about Persuasion (1 of 5)

 Know your readers.


 Choose and develop targeted reader benefits.
 Make good use of persuasive appeals.
 Make it easy for readers to comply.
Know Your Readers (2 of 5)

 Especially important with persuasion


 Can use formally gathered information
(marketing reports, surveys, focus groups)
 Can gather information informally (study
customer notes, talk with service personnel
and other employees, look at other messages
that have succeeded)
Choose Winning Reader Benefits (3 of 5)

 These can be
– Tangible
– Intangible
 They can also be
– Intrinsic
– Extrinsic
Use Winning Appeals (4 of 5)

 Logic based (logos)


 Emotion based (pathos)
 Character based (ethos)
Make It Easy for Readers to Comply (5 of 5)

 Don’t neglect the action part of the message.


 Make the desired action clear.
 Make the desired action as easy as possible to
perform.
Preliminary Considerations in Writing
Persuasive Requests (1 of 2)
 Your goal is to ask for something the reader is
likely to oppose.
 You must develop a strategy that will convince
the reader to comply.
Procedure for Writing a
Persuasive Request (2 of 2)
The message plan:
Opening  Open with words that
– set up the strategy, and
– gain attention.
Body  Present the strategy (the persuasion), using
persuasive language and you-viewpoint.
 As a logical follow-up, make the request
clearly and without negatives.
 End the message with the request or with
Closing words that recall the appeal.
Good Strategy in a
Persuasive Request (1 of 5)
Opening
Dear Ms. McLaughlin:
I’m sure you’d agree that business
communication teachers need to be in
touch with business experts in the field.
Experienced professionals like you can
give teachers the realistic input that is so
important to their practical coursework.
Good Strategy in a
Persuasive Request (2 of 5)
Body
For this reason, I believe that you could make
an important contribution to the national
meeting of the Association for Business
Communication, which will be held in New
Orleans at the Sheraton Hotel, October 28-31.
This conference brings together about 300
business communication professors from
around the US and the world who are looking
for ways to keep their teaching abreast of
current practice. Your perspective could be
especially valuable to them.
Good Strategy in a
Persuasive Request (3 of 5)

Body continued
Could you join us on Friday afternoon from
2:00 to 2:45 pm to tell us about your work as a
correspondence supervisor at Winn Dixie?
What common writing problems do you see,
and what you think we should be doing in the
colleges to help our students avoid them?
How can we better prepare our students for
writing in the workplace? Any insights you
could share on these and related topics would
be much appreciated.
Good Strategy in a
Persuasive Request (4 of 5)

Body continued
You would not need to prepare a formal
presentation. In fact, anecdotes and
examples from your work would be
preferred. You could speak for about 30
minutes, leaving 15 minutes for discussion.
Since your talk would be one of several
break-out sessions, it would be attended by
30-40 people, making for a relaxed,
conversational atmosphere.
Good Strategy in a
Persuasive Request (5 of 5)

Closing
Will you please share your experiences
and advice with us? By doing so, you will
help us help hundreds of business-writing
students. Since I will be compiling the
final program on the 15th, please let me
know by the 10th if you can join us.
Sincerely,
Why Write Sales Messages?

 Sales techniques are useful in your other


activities:
– in writing other messages
– in actual sales work
– in selling yourself
Questioning the Ethics of Sales Messages

 Sales messages can be unwanted.


– “Junk” mail
– SPAM
 Sales messages can use unfair tactics.
– Deceptive wording
– Deceptive or manipulative visuals
 Put yourself in the reader’s shoes and let your
conscience be your guide.
Preliminary Steps to
Sales Writing
 Learn the product or service you sell.
– how it is made
– how it works
– what it will do
 Learn about the prospective customers.
– their economic status
– their nationalities
– their ages
– etc.
Determining the Central Appeal

Three kinds:
 Emotional
– appeals to the senses (feeling, tasting, smelling, hearing)
 Logical
– appeals to the thinking mind (saving money, making
money, doing a better job, getting better use)
 Character based
– uses the writer or spokesperson’s voice and projected
image to win trust and invite readers to identify with the
speaker
Determining the Makeup of the Mailing

 Sales messages can have many pieces:


– Main message
– Cover envelope
– Return envelope
– Payment form
– Brochures/attachments
– Free gift, etc.
 As you plan your contents,
– Plan which pieces you will use
– Plan how they will work together
Organization of the
Sales Message
 Many variations are used.
– whatever works
 But there is this conventional pattern:
– gain attention
– create desire
– cover all necessary information
– drive for the sale
– possibly add a postscript
Conventional Organization Pattern of the
Sales Message in Detail
The message plan:
Opening  Begin with words that set up the sales
presentation and gain attention.

Body  Present the sales message using


imagination, persuasive language, and you-
viewpoint.
 Include sufficient information to convince.

 Then drive for the sale, making it clear, and


using appropriate strength.
Closing  Urge immediate action.
 May recall basic appeal in final words.
A Logic-Based Sales Message
(1 of 4)

Opening
Would you like to save up to 12 cents
a gallon on your bill for fuel oil?
Does your monthly oil bill make you wince?
Wouldn’t you like to beat the high cost of
heating--cut your annual fuel bill by as much
as 30-40 percent? Then I think you’ll be
interested in our Catalytic Carburetor
Assembly. Complete details are yours for the
asking . . . as explained below.
A Logic-Based Sales Message
(2 of 4)

Body
Installed on your present oil burner, the Catalytic
Carburetor Assembly permits burning of the
present type of catalytic fuel oil at highest
efficiency . . . and with a clean fire. What’s more,
it easily pays for itself in fuel oil savings and
brings your burner completely up to date. A little
simple arithmetic with your current oil bill will
show you how substantial these savings are.
Figure you might save up to 12 cents on every
gallon, and see what a difference that makes.
A Logic-Based Sales Message
(3 of 4)

Body continued
But there’s no need to take our say-so about the
savings you can make--because we back our
Catalytic Carburetor Assembly with a written money-
back guarantee. Your can’t lose--you either get the
savings we guarantee, or the assembly is removed
and your money refunded in full.
Scores of satisfied users throughout the state are
enjoying more efficient, more economical heating--
thanks to the Catalytic Carburetor Assembly. We
believe that you, too, would benefit by installing this
device on your oil burner.
A Logic-Based Sales Message
(4 of 4)

Closing
To receive full information on the Catalytic
Carburetor and how it can save fuel dollars,
just check the enclosed postage-paid card for
correctness and drop it in the mail. I’ll see to
it that you get complete details right away . . .
without cost or obligation.
Sincerely,
A Message Selling
Quality Candy (1 of 4)

Opening
Dear Ms. Wingler:
Soon your clientele and new customers will
be coming to your shop for the new, exciting
Bonnes Bouchées. Get ready to answer all
their demands for this nationally advertised
candy now!
A Message Selling
Quality Candy (2 of 4)

Body
Bonnes Bouchées, made in the French manner,
are going on the market in exclusive shops soon.
The success of an advertising campaign in New
Yorker and Ladies Home Journal magazines has
speeded up our constantly stirring mixing bowl—to
fill all reorders. Distinctive Bonnes Bouchées are
fast—they speed from our kitchen to your shop,
pause on your shelf only long enough to get
tagged, then dash on to the customer. Refill orders
and adjustments are given quick attention.
A Message Selling
Quality Candy (3 of 4)
Body continued
Pick the candies you want from the six kinds
pictured in the enclosed brochure. You’ll find
wholesale prices, order blanks, and a postage-paid
envelope addressed to us there, too. Look at the
“special” day features. Would you like to have the
Easter display sent with your first order?
Templates for newspaper advertising are sent to
you free. These individual templates and our
national magazine advertising are your grateful
salespeople. They’ll keep demand for Bonnes
Bouchées among your customers.
A Message Selling
Quality Candy (4 of 4)

Closing
Send your order for fast-moving Bonnes
Bouchées today! Your customers will be the
first in Ohio to sample these new-fashioned
candies.
Sincerely,
Opens with an
attention-getter

Reasons stress
reader benefit
Call for action is
clear and easy

Postscript adds
that extra punch

Opt-out
message
include
d
“If you want to succeed, you should strike
out on new paths rather than travel the
worn paths of accepted success.”

--John D. Rockefeller

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