Constructive criticism for shades of grey
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This constructive criticism document provides feedback on the film "Shades of Grey" and suggests areas for improvement, such as removing background voices, addressing wind issues, adding a voice over to convey film noir conventions, avoiding eye contact with the camera, including more shots and continuity editing for clarity, adding a soundtrack, and using more continuous shots to reduce confusion.
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Constructive criticism for shades of grey
- 1. Constructive criticism for Shades of grey Need to lose the sound of voices from the cast behind the camera. Wind issues need to be re thought about to make it more professional. A voice over needs to be added to covey the typical conventions of a film noir. Avoid eye contact with the camera to make it look professional. More shots need, a variety of different shots and continuity editing is needed. There is no soundtrack so it needs to be added into the final cut to make it more realistic. It was a bit confusing so adding more continuous shots will make it less confusing.