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- 1. DRAFT 3 AUDIENCE FEEDBACK & TARGETS BY LUCA
- 2. WHAT DID OUR AUDIENCE LIKE? Firstly, our audience agreed that the overall tone and feel of the OTS was much improved from draft 2. They also liked the music choice and syncing of the music with the actions of the dentist and victim within the OTS. They also liked the credits and felt that it was much improved from previous ones as they suited our genre. Furthermore, they also agreed with the fact that our OTS was more in a Madness & Paranoia sub-genre which suited our change to this sub-genre. Our audience also liked the removal of the opera music as they felt it too confusing previously. They also preferred the slow build up and reveal of the face at the end as it created suspense for the audience and reinforced the tone of horror. Our audience also much the cinematic shots as they revealed it was clearly a dental surgery. They also liked the change to lab coat as it reinforced the professionalism of the dentist rather than the shirt and tie. Lastly, they also liked the close up of the syringe shots as it created a cringy and scary tone which also reinforced the theme of horror.
- 3. WHAT DID OUR AUDIENCE DISLIKE? Firstly, our audience felt that the idea of turning off the light was pointless and unnecessary, as the lighting in the scene after the switch barely changed. Secondly, the audience felt that the lighting in the syringe shots was inconsistent with the lighting of the other scenes. Our audience also felt that the text fading and placement was also inconsistent and needed improvement. They disliked the overall lack of blood as they felt it was needed to make the OTS more scary, despite the change in sub-genre. Lastly, our audience felt that the composition of the shots could improved in general.
- 4. WHAT WILL WE CHANGE FOR DRAFT 4? Firstly, we will change the fading of the text and make it to so that it appears and then disappears without a letter fade. We will also change the placement of half of the texts, so that they are adapted to the scenario, like the syringe shot text placement. Our audience also recommended a mirror reveal of the Victim’s mouth with a lot of blood, at the end of the OTS in order to reinforce theme of horror. We will also aim to improve the composition of shots and remove the light switch idea. We will also aim to improve the overall lighting and try to keep it consistent throughout all of the shots.