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Letter Writing:
Reading and Thoughtfully Corresponding
Objectives
 To teach students to read letters or letter
requests carefully before responding.
 To teach students the importance of
creating formal and informal documents.
 To teach students basic letter formats and
letter-writing strategies.
 To teach students letter-writing etiquette.
Definition of “Letter”
Letter
“A written or printed communication directed to a
person or organization.”
Letters may be created and sent as:
 E-mail or electronic transmissions (including faxsimiles)
 Hand-delivered transmissions
 Regular mail transmissions
Letter Writing Etiquette
Etiquette is good manners or appropriate or accepted social
practices that reflect and promote civility.
When should you write a letter?
To thank someone who has been gracious(courteous), kind or helpful to
you.
When you need assistance or answers to help you make intelligent
decisions.
To respond to a letter or letter request that you have
recently received. (do not wait too long)
 To create legal documents that record information and support claims.
 To show that you are a courteous, professional, detail-
oriented person who is aware of etiquette.
Why letter writing matters
 Letters should be truthful as they may become a permanent
record of what you know, think or feel at the time you are
writing the letter.
 Letters have come back to haunt many people.
 Letters reflect the character and communication skill of the
writer.
Before writing a letter . . .
 Read (1) the letter or letters to which you need or want to
respond; or (2) read a written announcement or article
motivating or requesting a letter response.
(News stories, displays and billboards, and even oral comments that
others have voiced may spark your passion to write a letter.
Listening, is therefore important to letter writers.)
 Examine the tone (language) of the letter, announcement or
other printed material to which you will respond. The tone of
the motivating piece helps you determine the tone of your
written response (formal or informal).
 Identify your audience and purpose in order to determine
the type of letter you will write (formal or informal).
 Think about / Plan your response.
Letter Mechanics –
1. Pronoun (Point of View)
 The use of personal pronouns is important
in letters . . . I, he, she, it, we, they, you
 In a letter, do not refer to yourself in the
third person by using one or the writer.
 It is perfectly natural and appropriate to
refer to yourself as I and to the reader as
you.
Letter Mechanics –
2. Focus and Specificity
 Be Focused; however, avoid choppy
sentences.(short Sentence)
 Don't be so concise that your tone is blunt
(dull).
 Use terminology and concepts related to the
industry / field. (Jargon may be appropriate
in business writing.
 Avoid vagueness. Be specific in your
requests or statements of facts.
Letter Mechanics –
3. Active versus Passive Voice
Examples
PASSIVE Sentence : It was discovered that the salary
totals were incorrect.
Who discovered “it” [the problem]? The
underpaid employee, The payroll specialist, The
Accounting Department, An Intern ? (Be
specific.)
Revised ACTIVE sentence: The Accounting
Department discovered that the salary totals were
incorrect.
Two categories of letters
 Business Letters (format writing; more formal
writing that may share elements of essay writing)
 Personal Letters (often informal; may be
addressed to a friend or familiar acquaintance
about a personal subject; may regard a personal
problem, issue or even a personal business matter
pertaining to ones personal finances or personal
legal matters)
Types of Personal Letters
 Apologies
 Appreciation and Thank You: For
favors, kindness or generosity
 Congratulations
 Personal Complaints
 Invitations
 Offering Condolences
(sympathy or get well)
•Write as soon as possible after the incident.
•Apologize, but do not go overboard by saying, "I am very, very, very
sorry."
•Keep it simple and to the point. Summarize what you are apologizing
for, and apologize only for the particular situation or problem. Be
brief.
•Apologize cheerfully and sincerely. Do not express feelings of guilt.
•Explain what you will do to correct the mistake or situation.
•Do not put blame on another person and do not blame problems on
computer errors or carelessness.
Guidelines for Writing Apologies:
Business Letters
Business letters are documents created to:
o persuade or inform readers (Ex: a letter from a
candidate requesting your vote)
o analyze a concept or situation (Ex: a letter from the
human resources manager explaining the new payroll
deposit system to company employees)
o propose a solution (a letter offering a plan to reduce or
prevent school violence)
o correct some perceived error or miscommunication. (Ex:
a letter to a creditor about a billing error you have
noticed)
Business Letters
Format Writing
•Acceptance Letter (yes/ legal)
•Acknowledgement Letter (Receipt)
•Adjustment Letter (a legal
document / addresses a complaint
or claim)
•Application Letter (request job
consideration/ interview)
•Complaint Letter (a legal document)
•Cover Letter (accompanies resume
or order)
•Inquiry Letter (posing a question)
•Order Letter (request letter)
•Refusal Letter (reject an offer)
•Response Letter (answers inquiry)
•Sales Letter (marketing)
Common Types of Business
Letters
•Identify your reader
•Establish your objective
•Determine your scope (how
much researched
information to include )
•Organize your letter
•Draft your letter
•Close (End) Your Letter
•Review and Revise Your Letter
(proof for physical problems and
edit for logic issues)
Source: Business Letters. Retrieved Dec. 3, 2007, from http://writing.colostate.edu/guides/documents/business_writing/business_letter/
To write any type of
business letter, follow
these basic steps:
General Parts of every
Business Letter
 Heading (sender’s return address and date)
 Inside Address (recipient’s address)
 Salutation (greeting)
 Body (paragraphs)
 Complimentary Close
 Signature Line (with or without title)
 Enclosure (optional)
 cc notation (copies sent to others)
 Sender/typist initials (optional)
General Statements about
Business Letter Writing
 “Business letters [are] required in many different
situations . . . from applying for a job to requesting
or delivering information.”
 Writing for business should be “crisp and succinct. It
should be to the point, specific and accurate.”
 “Even though business writing is possibly less formal
than it once was, your writing must . . . adhere to
the conventions of standard American English”
(spelling and grammar rules)
Source: http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/business.html
Modified Block Style Block Style
Semi-block Style
General Letter Layouts / Styles
http://www.englishplus.com/grammar/00000144.htm
1. Block Style
(Simplified) Letter
Format
SAMPLE
Signature Block: Align this with the Complimentary
Close. Leave four blank lines to sign your name.
Don’t forget to sign your name exactly as you typed
it. Your title is optional and depends on the relevancy
and degree of formality you need or want to establish.
Source:http://jobsearchtech.about.com/od/letters/l/bl_mblock_p.htm
Letter head
Everything flush
to left margin with
no indents.
2. Modified
Block Style
Letter Format
SAMPLE
Paragraphs are not
indented; however,
these parts of the
letter are centered:
•Sender’s return address
•Date letter written
•Complimentary closing
•Sender’s signature/title
http://www.englishplus.com/grammar/00000144.htm
Company Logo or Letterhead
March 15, 2007
Mr. John Smith, Director of Operations
SomeGroup Group
100 SomeStreet Drive
Sometown, Alabama 34567
Dear Mr. Smith:
Thank you for your inquiry about Semi-Block format for letters. What
follows is a quick summary of the format and the conventions it uses.
Semi-block format or style is frequently called modified semi-block
because it is a slightly less formal modification of full block format. This letter
style places the date line in alignment with, or slightly to the right of dead
center. Another option for placing the date line in semi-block is flush right.
Similar to full block, semi-block places the inside address, salutation and any
end notations flush with the left margin. However, unlike full block, each body
paragraph of semi-block is indented five spaces. The complimentary close
and signature block are aligned under the date.
This page illustrates the spacing and layout of semi-block format. Both full
block and semi-block formats generally contain all of the necessary parts of a
letter.
Sincerely yours ,
Dr. Sheila Carter-Todd
3. Semi-block
Style Letter
Format
SAMPLE
Indent paragraphs 5
spaces. Everything
else is flush at the left
margin.
Business Letter
Salutation / Greeting
 A Business letter’s text starts with a simple and
professional greeting such as,
The Word Dear, Mr./Ms./Title, & Last name of Person:”
Examples
Dear Dr. Smithsonian:
Dear Ms. Cleopatra:
 The difference between personal and business
letter greetings is that a colon (:) follows the
greeting of a business letter and a comma (,)
follows the greeting of a personal letter
Body
 A generally acceptable format for the body
of most business letters is block style,
with no indentions or centering of any
parts.
 Paragraphs should also be single spaced
within the paragraph and double spaced
between different paragraphs.
Business Letter Content
 Each paragraph in the business letter should
contain different topics.
 The first paragraph should grab attention and state
the reason for the letter.
 The middle paragraphs, as in most letters, should
support your reason and go into details.
 In the final paragraph, it professional etiquette for
the writer to thank the reader for taking his or her
time to read the letter.
Closing
 The end of a business letter marks the
biggest difference between business and
personal letters.
 The ending of a business letter usually
states ‘Sincerely,’ followed by three blank
lines for the writer’s signature and then
the writer’s typed name.
Letter-writing Practice Exercise:
Response letter
 Behave as if you have just received the
Letter of Application in the next slide.
 You must notify the person that he or she
did not get the job and that your company
has recently filled the advertised position.
 Write a one-paragraph letter to the
applicant. (See upcoming slide for a
suggested approach to writing the letter.)
Read this Sample Business Letter (Letter of Application) below.
6123 Farrington Road
Troy, Alabama 27514
January 11, 2007
Taylor, Inc.
Mr./Ms. S. Student, Human Resources Director
694 Rockfoot Lane
Durham, North Carolina 27708
Dear Mr./Ms. Student:
I just read an article in the News and Observer about Taylor's new computer center just north of Durham. I
would like to apply for a position as an entry-level programmer at the center.
I understand that Taylor produces both in-house and customer documentation. My technical-writing skills, as
described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your company. I am a recent graduate of Troy University
in Troy, Alabama, with an Associate's Degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range
of courses, I served as a computer consultant at the college's computer center where I helped train computer
users on new systems.
I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match
your needs. You can reach me at my home address, at (919) 233-1552, or at crock@devry.alumni.edu.
Sincerely,
Raymond Graduate
This letter is written in Modified Block Style. Indent
the sender’s address, letter date, complimentary
close, & signature. Everything else is flush to the left
margin. Single Space throughout, except double
Space between new paragraphs. Center letter on the
page.
Sender’s Return address
Complimentary Closing
Inside address
(receiver)
Suggestions for Responding
 Reminder to supply address information.
 Include salutation.
 Acknowledge receipt of the application
package.
 Thank the applicant for his interest.
 Notify the applicant that the position has
been filled.
 Let the applicant know that you will keep
the application packet on file.

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Letter writing

  • 1. Letter Writing: Reading and Thoughtfully Corresponding
  • 2. Objectives  To teach students to read letters or letter requests carefully before responding.  To teach students the importance of creating formal and informal documents.  To teach students basic letter formats and letter-writing strategies.  To teach students letter-writing etiquette.
  • 3. Definition of “Letter” Letter “A written or printed communication directed to a person or organization.” Letters may be created and sent as:  E-mail or electronic transmissions (including faxsimiles)  Hand-delivered transmissions  Regular mail transmissions
  • 4. Letter Writing Etiquette Etiquette is good manners or appropriate or accepted social practices that reflect and promote civility. When should you write a letter? To thank someone who has been gracious(courteous), kind or helpful to you. When you need assistance or answers to help you make intelligent decisions. To respond to a letter or letter request that you have recently received. (do not wait too long)  To create legal documents that record information and support claims.  To show that you are a courteous, professional, detail- oriented person who is aware of etiquette.
  • 5. Why letter writing matters  Letters should be truthful as they may become a permanent record of what you know, think or feel at the time you are writing the letter.  Letters have come back to haunt many people.  Letters reflect the character and communication skill of the writer.
  • 6. Before writing a letter . . .  Read (1) the letter or letters to which you need or want to respond; or (2) read a written announcement or article motivating or requesting a letter response. (News stories, displays and billboards, and even oral comments that others have voiced may spark your passion to write a letter. Listening, is therefore important to letter writers.)  Examine the tone (language) of the letter, announcement or other printed material to which you will respond. The tone of the motivating piece helps you determine the tone of your written response (formal or informal).  Identify your audience and purpose in order to determine the type of letter you will write (formal or informal).  Think about / Plan your response.
  • 7. Letter Mechanics – 1. Pronoun (Point of View)  The use of personal pronouns is important in letters . . . I, he, she, it, we, they, you  In a letter, do not refer to yourself in the third person by using one or the writer.  It is perfectly natural and appropriate to refer to yourself as I and to the reader as you.
  • 8. Letter Mechanics – 2. Focus and Specificity  Be Focused; however, avoid choppy sentences.(short Sentence)  Don't be so concise that your tone is blunt (dull).  Use terminology and concepts related to the industry / field. (Jargon may be appropriate in business writing.  Avoid vagueness. Be specific in your requests or statements of facts.
  • 9. Letter Mechanics – 3. Active versus Passive Voice Examples PASSIVE Sentence : It was discovered that the salary totals were incorrect. Who discovered “it” [the problem]? The underpaid employee, The payroll specialist, The Accounting Department, An Intern ? (Be specific.) Revised ACTIVE sentence: The Accounting Department discovered that the salary totals were incorrect.
  • 10. Two categories of letters  Business Letters (format writing; more formal writing that may share elements of essay writing)  Personal Letters (often informal; may be addressed to a friend or familiar acquaintance about a personal subject; may regard a personal problem, issue or even a personal business matter pertaining to ones personal finances or personal legal matters)
  • 11. Types of Personal Letters  Apologies  Appreciation and Thank You: For favors, kindness or generosity  Congratulations  Personal Complaints  Invitations  Offering Condolences (sympathy or get well)
  • 12. •Write as soon as possible after the incident. •Apologize, but do not go overboard by saying, "I am very, very, very sorry." •Keep it simple and to the point. Summarize what you are apologizing for, and apologize only for the particular situation or problem. Be brief. •Apologize cheerfully and sincerely. Do not express feelings of guilt. •Explain what you will do to correct the mistake or situation. •Do not put blame on another person and do not blame problems on computer errors or carelessness. Guidelines for Writing Apologies:
  • 13. Business Letters Business letters are documents created to: o persuade or inform readers (Ex: a letter from a candidate requesting your vote) o analyze a concept or situation (Ex: a letter from the human resources manager explaining the new payroll deposit system to company employees) o propose a solution (a letter offering a plan to reduce or prevent school violence) o correct some perceived error or miscommunication. (Ex: a letter to a creditor about a billing error you have noticed)
  • 15. •Acceptance Letter (yes/ legal) •Acknowledgement Letter (Receipt) •Adjustment Letter (a legal document / addresses a complaint or claim) •Application Letter (request job consideration/ interview) •Complaint Letter (a legal document) •Cover Letter (accompanies resume or order) •Inquiry Letter (posing a question) •Order Letter (request letter) •Refusal Letter (reject an offer) •Response Letter (answers inquiry) •Sales Letter (marketing) Common Types of Business Letters •Identify your reader •Establish your objective •Determine your scope (how much researched information to include ) •Organize your letter •Draft your letter •Close (End) Your Letter •Review and Revise Your Letter (proof for physical problems and edit for logic issues) Source: Business Letters. Retrieved Dec. 3, 2007, from http://writing.colostate.edu/guides/documents/business_writing/business_letter/ To write any type of business letter, follow these basic steps:
  • 16. General Parts of every Business Letter  Heading (sender’s return address and date)  Inside Address (recipient’s address)  Salutation (greeting)  Body (paragraphs)  Complimentary Close  Signature Line (with or without title)  Enclosure (optional)  cc notation (copies sent to others)  Sender/typist initials (optional)
  • 17. General Statements about Business Letter Writing  “Business letters [are] required in many different situations . . . from applying for a job to requesting or delivering information.”  Writing for business should be “crisp and succinct. It should be to the point, specific and accurate.”  “Even though business writing is possibly less formal than it once was, your writing must . . . adhere to the conventions of standard American English” (spelling and grammar rules) Source: http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/business.html
  • 18. Modified Block Style Block Style Semi-block Style General Letter Layouts / Styles http://www.englishplus.com/grammar/00000144.htm
  • 19. 1. Block Style (Simplified) Letter Format SAMPLE Signature Block: Align this with the Complimentary Close. Leave four blank lines to sign your name. Don’t forget to sign your name exactly as you typed it. Your title is optional and depends on the relevancy and degree of formality you need or want to establish. Source:http://jobsearchtech.about.com/od/letters/l/bl_mblock_p.htm Letter head Everything flush to left margin with no indents.
  • 20. 2. Modified Block Style Letter Format SAMPLE Paragraphs are not indented; however, these parts of the letter are centered: •Sender’s return address •Date letter written •Complimentary closing •Sender’s signature/title http://www.englishplus.com/grammar/00000144.htm
  • 21. Company Logo or Letterhead March 15, 2007 Mr. John Smith, Director of Operations SomeGroup Group 100 SomeStreet Drive Sometown, Alabama 34567 Dear Mr. Smith: Thank you for your inquiry about Semi-Block format for letters. What follows is a quick summary of the format and the conventions it uses. Semi-block format or style is frequently called modified semi-block because it is a slightly less formal modification of full block format. This letter style places the date line in alignment with, or slightly to the right of dead center. Another option for placing the date line in semi-block is flush right. Similar to full block, semi-block places the inside address, salutation and any end notations flush with the left margin. However, unlike full block, each body paragraph of semi-block is indented five spaces. The complimentary close and signature block are aligned under the date. This page illustrates the spacing and layout of semi-block format. Both full block and semi-block formats generally contain all of the necessary parts of a letter. Sincerely yours , Dr. Sheila Carter-Todd 3. Semi-block Style Letter Format SAMPLE Indent paragraphs 5 spaces. Everything else is flush at the left margin.
  • 22. Business Letter Salutation / Greeting  A Business letter’s text starts with a simple and professional greeting such as, The Word Dear, Mr./Ms./Title, & Last name of Person:” Examples Dear Dr. Smithsonian: Dear Ms. Cleopatra:  The difference between personal and business letter greetings is that a colon (:) follows the greeting of a business letter and a comma (,) follows the greeting of a personal letter
  • 23. Body  A generally acceptable format for the body of most business letters is block style, with no indentions or centering of any parts.  Paragraphs should also be single spaced within the paragraph and double spaced between different paragraphs.
  • 24. Business Letter Content  Each paragraph in the business letter should contain different topics.  The first paragraph should grab attention and state the reason for the letter.  The middle paragraphs, as in most letters, should support your reason and go into details.  In the final paragraph, it professional etiquette for the writer to thank the reader for taking his or her time to read the letter.
  • 25. Closing  The end of a business letter marks the biggest difference between business and personal letters.  The ending of a business letter usually states ‘Sincerely,’ followed by three blank lines for the writer’s signature and then the writer’s typed name.
  • 26. Letter-writing Practice Exercise: Response letter  Behave as if you have just received the Letter of Application in the next slide.  You must notify the person that he or she did not get the job and that your company has recently filled the advertised position.  Write a one-paragraph letter to the applicant. (See upcoming slide for a suggested approach to writing the letter.)
  • 27. Read this Sample Business Letter (Letter of Application) below. 6123 Farrington Road Troy, Alabama 27514 January 11, 2007 Taylor, Inc. Mr./Ms. S. Student, Human Resources Director 694 Rockfoot Lane Durham, North Carolina 27708 Dear Mr./Ms. Student: I just read an article in the News and Observer about Taylor's new computer center just north of Durham. I would like to apply for a position as an entry-level programmer at the center. I understand that Taylor produces both in-house and customer documentation. My technical-writing skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your company. I am a recent graduate of Troy University in Troy, Alabama, with an Associate's Degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a computer consultant at the college's computer center where I helped train computer users on new systems. I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match your needs. You can reach me at my home address, at (919) 233-1552, or at [email protected]. Sincerely, Raymond Graduate This letter is written in Modified Block Style. Indent the sender’s address, letter date, complimentary close, & signature. Everything else is flush to the left margin. Single Space throughout, except double Space between new paragraphs. Center letter on the page. Sender’s Return address Complimentary Closing Inside address (receiver)
  • 28. Suggestions for Responding  Reminder to supply address information.  Include salutation.  Acknowledge receipt of the application package.  Thank the applicant for his interest.  Notify the applicant that the position has been filled.  Let the applicant know that you will keep the application packet on file.